for Irish laughter1/16/2022 c8 
87Grykon
Not a bad place to stop for now. Concentrate on your school work! Thanks for writing and look forward to what comes next, maybe continuing the story in a new story with the trial. But I am confused, I thought Tim was killed?
87GrykonNot a bad place to stop for now. Concentrate on your school work! Thanks for writing and look forward to what comes next, maybe continuing the story in a new story with the trial. But I am confused, I thought Tim was killed?
1/16/2022 c8 10railman
I really like the ending to a story at times i have have found a little confusing that has required me reading through some of the chapters more than once . It as been a different style and context to many i have read but was an interesting concept . Good luck with your school work and hope to be reading something about the the trial at a later date
10railmanI really like the ending to a story at times i have have found a little confusing that has required me reading through some of the chapters more than once . It as been a different style and context to many i have read but was an interesting concept . Good luck with your school work and hope to be reading something about the the trial at a later date
1/12/2022 c7 Guest
Thx for posting…..I really needed to read some scorpion tonite…..great story
Thx for posting…..I really needed to read some scorpion tonite…..great story
1/12/2022 c7 87Grykon
Well that was a shocker...Now if they can just get this patched up between them...Bring on chapter 8
87GrykonWell that was a shocker...Now if they can just get this patched up between them...Bring on chapter 8
1/11/2022 c6 10railman
It is a shame Cabe did not shoot Tim , lets hope A few session with Dr Rizzuto will sort them out after this upset
10railmanIt is a shame Cabe did not shoot Tim , lets hope A few session with Dr Rizzuto will sort them out after this upset
1/11/2022 c6 87Grykon
Hrmm...Whatever they injected them with seems to have really messed with them. Good bye to bad news Tim...on to the next chapter!
87GrykonHrmm...Whatever they injected them with seems to have really messed with them. Good bye to bad news Tim...on to the next chapter!
1/7/2022 c5 Marie Mac
Thanks for the new story- so much going on as I skip back and forward with your various tales.
Thanks for the new story- so much going on as I skip back and forward with your various tales.
1/7/2022 c5 10railman
a love story , an engagement , matching rings lets hope the two jealous idiots are not allowed to spoil it
10railmana love story , an engagement , matching rings lets hope the two jealous idiots are not allowed to spoil it
1/7/2022 c5 87Grykon
Interesting...and the story of the rings...could Walter and Paige end up in the past? And that is how the legend of the rings begins?
87GrykonInteresting...and the story of the rings...could Walter and Paige end up in the past? And that is how the legend of the rings begins?
1/6/2022 c4 Pearliegirl
This is a great story…..love the surprising twists…can’t wait for more! Please continue…immediately:)
This is a great story…..love the surprising twists…can’t wait for more! Please continue…immediately:)
1/6/2022 c4 10railman
Building for up the tension for what is likely to occur when Tim and Florence try to put their plan in action , good to have the security team back .
10railmanBuilding for up the tension for what is likely to occur when Tim and Florence try to put their plan in action , good to have the security team back .
1/6/2022 c4 87Grykon
Oh ho...plot deepens with Tim and Florence going all in on some diabolical plan, even to use drugs. Not good. Good thing they got extra back up. Well, let's see where this goes!
87GrykonOh ho...plot deepens with Tim and Florence going all in on some diabolical plan, even to use drugs. Not good. Good thing they got extra back up. Well, let's see where this goes!
1/5/2022 c3 10railman
Oh what a life you are creating for Paige and Walter , he is slowly coming completly out of the Rabbit Hole only to be confronted by one ex and one person with a fantasy romance with the other keep the story coming
10railmanOh what a life you are creating for Paige and Walter , he is slowly coming completly out of the Rabbit Hole only to be confronted by one ex and one person with a fantasy romance with the other keep the story coming
1/4/2022 c3 Dean
Mannn,this shit is childish
Mannn,this shit is childish