
6/17 c18 Guest
i thigt it's good time for tanya to use ligthning she know how and tru this lite time with team avatar
i thigt it's good time for tanya to use ligthning she know how and tru this lite time with team avatar
6/4 c18
1DarkPacifist
had doubts early on, I kneejerked my earlier review seeing the same tried n despised tool get dropped in but aside from Tanya somehow becoming even denser and forgetting a few basics the avatar cast are remarkably well written. overall a good short read, sad its dead but I dont regret the time reading/listening to this fine tale.

had doubts early on, I kneejerked my earlier review seeing the same tried n despised tool get dropped in but aside from Tanya somehow becoming even denser and forgetting a few basics the avatar cast are remarkably well written. overall a good short read, sad its dead but I dont regret the time reading/listening to this fine tale.
6/2 c3 DarkPacifist
... being x... the author's avatar...fine. why does Mary Souix still exist when you could've injected the authors meddling into a cannonical character, avatar already had plenty of morally corrupt charecters and theres plenty of spiritualism sects to divine a mindless zealot from inside the universe, hell you could even have being x manifest as the world has common spiritual phenomenon...
... being x... the author's avatar...fine. why does Mary Souix still exist when you could've injected the authors meddling into a cannonical character, avatar already had plenty of morally corrupt charecters and theres plenty of spiritualism sects to divine a mindless zealot from inside the universe, hell you could even have being x manifest as the world has common spiritual phenomenon...
5/28 c5 filipeabner.benarros
It is quite clear that, at least at the time when he started writing the story, the author had only seen the anime of Youjo Senki.
It is quite clear that, at least at the time when he started writing the story, the author had only seen the anime of Youjo Senki.
5/27 c2 LipeSun
The maniacal smiles and the apparent satisfaction with cruelty are not normal characteristics of Tanya's personality, so I can't help but think that the mental corruption of Type 95 may have lingered in Tanya even in this new life.
The maniacal smiles and the apparent satisfaction with cruelty are not normal characteristics of Tanya's personality, so I can't help but think that the mental corruption of Type 95 may have lingered in Tanya even in this new life.
5/20 c3 1 love m4gic
Damn, i hate how idiotic Tanya is in this story... at least so far. The constant misunderstandings, the cruel behavior, and sometimes just inherently biased and idiotic takes all make me want to hate her. Like he/she was not an experienced person in mind, with decades of life behind him/her.
Damn, i hate how idiotic Tanya is in this story... at least so far. The constant misunderstandings, the cruel behavior, and sometimes just inherently biased and idiotic takes all make me want to hate her. Like he/she was not an experienced person in mind, with decades of life behind him/her.
5/19 c13 Dragy
Tanya is a master of OPSEC, this wouldn't happen
Tanya is a master of OPSEC, this wouldn't happen
5/19 c1 Dragy
Wow, simply wow. 5 gold stars, simply the best opening I’ve ever seen to a Youjo Senki story. Sidestepping the reincarnation pitfall, the reasoning behind her desire to stay hidden and allowing the time skips to be non impactful, the way you write her thoughts, the conflict, so wonderful, you deserve the most favorites
Wow, simply wow. 5 gold stars, simply the best opening I’ve ever seen to a Youjo Senki story. Sidestepping the reincarnation pitfall, the reasoning behind her desire to stay hidden and allowing the time skips to be non impactful, the way you write her thoughts, the conflict, so wonderful, you deserve the most favorites
5/14 c18 Sweep major
Absolutely incredible ATLA Fanfiction one of the best fanfiction I have read overall and at least second test right after focused Fire
Absolutely incredible ATLA Fanfiction one of the best fanfiction I have read overall and at least second test right after focused Fire
5/11 c18 Guest
Please come back soon because we need more of the godly Fic
Please come back soon because we need more of the godly Fic
5/11 c18 Guest
It’s wild how perfectly Tanya fits into the chemistry of Avatar. Like if the show had a higher age rating, I bet she’d have been one of the characters
It’s wild how perfectly Tanya fits into the chemistry of Avatar. Like if the show had a higher age rating, I bet she’d have been one of the characters
5/10 c2 Blackholelord
Once again with Being-X, it's more of a headache that almost all the stories include him. I would have loved to see how Tanya would interact with the world, without Being-X interfering with the general plot of the story. A heavy shame, as its not unique anymore.
Once again with Being-X, it's more of a headache that almost all the stories include him. I would have loved to see how Tanya would interact with the world, without Being-X interfering with the general plot of the story. A heavy shame, as its not unique anymore.