for Organized Chaos: The 27th Hunger Games3/13/2024 c8 
13QueenOfMorning37
Poor Morty. I probably shouldn’t be finding his suicidal ideation funny but the fact that he’s so ineffective in trying to kill himself is kinda amusing. Like, bro, you asked your escort/mentor to throw you out a window, of course he’s gonna say no. Bellerophon’s response is hilarious. He’s such a professional, very good at obstructing Morty. I hope this story contains more of their relationship.
I totally get why you’re not comfortable giving Samantha a big role. She’s pretty controversial.
13QueenOfMorning37Poor Morty. I probably shouldn’t be finding his suicidal ideation funny but the fact that he’s so ineffective in trying to kill himself is kinda amusing. Like, bro, you asked your escort/mentor to throw you out a window, of course he’s gonna say no. Bellerophon’s response is hilarious. He’s such a professional, very good at obstructing Morty. I hope this story contains more of their relationship.
I totally get why you’re not comfortable giving Samantha a big role. She’s pretty controversial.
3/12/2024 c8 65LadyCordeliaStuart
I hadn't reviewed yet since I am in the house and my laptop is in my room outside. Now I have to plink out a review on my phone
Morty might finally get his darkly comic story. Nice.
Since I personally know Samantha's submitter won't care, by all means don't focus on her much
This is a well adjusted and wholesome group of Tributes. Surely this will be a normal Games
65LadyCordeliaStuartI hadn't reviewed yet since I am in the house and my laptop is in my room outside. Now I have to plink out a review on my phone
Morty might finally get his darkly comic story. Nice.
Since I personally know Samantha's submitter won't care, by all means don't focus on her much
This is a well adjusted and wholesome group of Tributes. Surely this will be a normal Games
3/12/2024 c8 35SilverflowerXRavenpaw
LMAO Bellepheron the MVP. "Let me ask a supervisor" *that mmyes hand symbol*
Bellepheron just like "How does she even know what a German accent sounds like?"
Fun chapter as always! I mean this in the best way: I love how bite-sized your chapters are. A little bit of time to get to know the tributes but I don't have to slot through 5k word POVs.
35SilverflowerXRavenpawLMAO Bellepheron the MVP. "Let me ask a supervisor" *that mmyes hand symbol*
Bellepheron just like "How does she even know what a German accent sounds like?"
Fun chapter as always! I mean this in the best way: I love how bite-sized your chapters are. A little bit of time to get to know the tributes but I don't have to slot through 5k word POVs.
3/12/2024 c8 11fiona11303
Bellerophon telling Morty he has to check with his supervisor before throwing him off a cliff was super funny. Morbid, but funny. Bellerophon is going to have his hands full this year, that’s for sure.
11fiona11303Bellerophon telling Morty he has to check with his supervisor before throwing him off a cliff was super funny. Morbid, but funny. Bellerophon is going to have his hands full this year, that’s for sure.
12/7/2023 c7 fiona11303
I absolutely adore Culter and I'm selfishly hoping you choose him as the victor, because he deserves it. Him and Nero and Anthony all do. And Soleil is another sweetheart who doesn't deserve the Games (like she said). I'm excited to see more of her since there's a lot more to explore.
I absolutely adore Culter and I'm selfishly hoping you choose him as the victor, because he deserves it. Him and Nero and Anthony all do. And Soleil is another sweetheart who doesn't deserve the Games (like she said). I'm excited to see more of her since there's a lot more to explore.
12/7/2023 c6 fiona11303
Bess... maybe not the time to eye up people's asses? I admire it though. I like how you showcased her jack-of-all-trades-ness (which is definitely NOT a real term). And Omar! My boy! I liked his POV too! It got into his head and showed off his thought process, which I liked.
Bess... maybe not the time to eye up people's asses? I admire it though. I like how you showcased her jack-of-all-trades-ness (which is definitely NOT a real term). And Omar! My boy! I liked his POV too! It got into his head and showed off his thought process, which I liked.
12/7/2023 c5 fiona11303
Ooh, a style change! You got a little more detailed here, which was cool to see. Mazie is such a sweetheart and I love how you wrote her intro. And Oberon is awesome, as always. Great work!
Ooh, a style change! You got a little more detailed here, which was cool to see. Mazie is such a sweetheart and I love how you wrote her intro. And Oberon is awesome, as always. Great work!
12/7/2023 c4 fiona11303
Classic Des. She can get anyone she wants, can't she? And classic Martin too. Kjole's POV was great. I didn't see a lot of people focus on her fear of dogs so it was nice to see. And Pell was always one of my favorites. My rat boy!
Classic Des. She can get anyone she wants, can't she? And classic Martin too. Kjole's POV was great. I didn't see a lot of people focus on her fear of dogs so it was nice to see. And Pell was always one of my favorites. My rat boy!
12/7/2023 c3 fiona11303
Ooh, does Connor have a broken leg so it's easier for Ceto to get him in the bloodbath? Smart thinking. Also, Gigi just chilling out but actually panicking is so on brand for her. You captured Porsche's chaos really well and I liked R.J.'s POV too! "I also hated getting shot...": the best line so far.
Ooh, does Connor have a broken leg so it's easier for Ceto to get him in the bloodbath? Smart thinking. Also, Gigi just chilling out but actually panicking is so on brand for her. You captured Porsche's chaos really well and I liked R.J.'s POV too! "I also hated getting shot...": the best line so far.
12/7/2023 c2 fiona11303
You also picked Taroh! I haven't seen him in any of the other OC fics yet so I'm happy to see him here. You captured Ceto's intensity really well, and Anthony has always been one of my favorites, so I liked seeing him too. I didn't lean heavily into the "avoxed mother" storyline so it's really cool to see that you did! Now I'm off to the next chapter :)
You also picked Taroh! I haven't seen him in any of the other OC fics yet so I'm happy to see him here. You captured Ceto's intensity really well, and Anthony has always been one of my favorites, so I liked seeing him too. I didn't lean heavily into the "avoxed mother" storyline so it's really cool to see that you did! Now I'm off to the next chapter :)
12/7/2023 c1 fiona11303
Even though these are short POVs, I really enjoyed reading them! You captured the tributes' personalities really well. My favorite POV was actually Nero, since I feel like he tended to get overlooked in these fics. Allure's was great too though.
Even though these are short POVs, I really enjoyed reading them! You captured the tributes' personalities really well. My favorite POV was actually Nero, since I feel like he tended to get overlooked in these fics. Allure's was great too though.
11/11/2023 c3 1666samvr
Poor Gigi. But I think her quick reaction time will help her in the arena. And the fact that she knows when she's in a state such as panic and is ready to fix it so she can take care of herself. I think she might be my favourite so far.
I wrote a chapter for Connor a while back so it's nice to see a different version of him. Damn he is such a jock lmao. But he better get that leg fixed up quick if he wants to stand a chance in the Games.
Porsche makes me realize how many injuries in Panem go untreated because the districts don't have proper access to medical care so they may not be able to get stuff like casts and definitely not surgeries.
Dangggg that's creepy that the Peacekeepers wanted to make sure RJ was saying only positive things. No wonder this guy has it out for them, with the way they police even words.
1666samvrPoor Gigi. But I think her quick reaction time will help her in the arena. And the fact that she knows when she's in a state such as panic and is ready to fix it so she can take care of herself. I think she might be my favourite so far.
I wrote a chapter for Connor a while back so it's nice to see a different version of him. Damn he is such a jock lmao. But he better get that leg fixed up quick if he wants to stand a chance in the Games.
Porsche makes me realize how many injuries in Panem go untreated because the districts don't have proper access to medical care so they may not be able to get stuff like casts and definitely not surgeries.
Dangggg that's creepy that the Peacekeepers wanted to make sure RJ was saying only positive things. No wonder this guy has it out for them, with the way they police even words.
11/11/2023 c2 66samvr
I don't blame Cheyanne for being a little upset at first that her family kept her adoption from here because honestly, it's pretty realistic. And kinda a dick move it was never made transparent to her and she had to figure it out on her own. But yay, she forgives them!
Taroh kinda shot himself in the foot and now he's gonna die. Or, maybe not. I wonder what his relationship is to Yakob that Yako is so special to Taroh that he'd rather volunteer than watch Yakob die. Are they friends? Boyfriends? Something else?
It's not really Ceto's fault, but I've never liked the avenger type tribute. Girl, you can't prove that the District 5 tribute is guilty of anything and will the eye for an eye mentality really make you feel better? Sounds like she'll be a villain though.
I don't remember the details in canon, can district folk be made Avoxes? Or did Anthony's mom escape the Capitol? It's quite noble he wants to help her and that's his main goal for winning. Momma's boy lmao.
I don't blame Cheyanne for being a little upset at first that her family kept her adoption from here because honestly, it's pretty realistic. And kinda a dick move it was never made transparent to her and she had to figure it out on her own. But yay, she forgives them!
Taroh kinda shot himself in the foot and now he's gonna die. Or, maybe not. I wonder what his relationship is to Yakob that Yako is so special to Taroh that he'd rather volunteer than watch Yakob die. Are they friends? Boyfriends? Something else?
It's not really Ceto's fault, but I've never liked the avenger type tribute. Girl, you can't prove that the District 5 tribute is guilty of anything and will the eye for an eye mentality really make you feel better? Sounds like she'll be a villain though.
I don't remember the details in canon, can district folk be made Avoxes? Or did Anthony's mom escape the Capitol? It's quite noble he wants to help her and that's his main goal for winning. Momma's boy lmao.
11/11/2023 c1 66samvr
I love how Allure is a play on a lot of tropes people dislike but she absolutely owns it. Or maybe she isn't and I'm just reading her wrong. Sorry the purple eyes bit was sus XD but hey, gotta love a girl who knows she looks good and isn't afraid to show it.
Yikes, Dionysus isn't looking at a fun end if he keeps drinking. Sucks that he knows he has an addiction but doesn't want to do anything to quit it. And he knows there won't be alcohol in the arena, right? Is he ready for the withdrawal?
Nailah seems to be aiming for the underdog Career angle. Maybe she wants people to purposefully underestimate her so they don't see her coming until it's too late? Not a bad plan if she can pull it off.
Nero seems like your typical hulking brute from 2.
I love how Allure is a play on a lot of tropes people dislike but she absolutely owns it. Or maybe she isn't and I'm just reading her wrong. Sorry the purple eyes bit was sus XD but hey, gotta love a girl who knows she looks good and isn't afraid to show it.
Yikes, Dionysus isn't looking at a fun end if he keeps drinking. Sucks that he knows he has an addiction but doesn't want to do anything to quit it. And he knows there won't be alcohol in the arena, right? Is he ready for the withdrawal?
Nailah seems to be aiming for the underdog Career angle. Maybe she wants people to purposefully underestimate her so they don't see her coming until it's too late? Not a bad plan if she can pull it off.
Nero seems like your typical hulking brute from 2.
11/3/2023 c7 65LadyCordeliaStuart
ooh, 11, the District that seems to be dominating OC so far. I think one or the other of them has gone a long way in a lot of our stories. Also a lot of people seem to have trouble writing one or the other. I think Soleil will get more prominent as the story progresses. She doesn't show herself early on but there's a lot in there.
65LadyCordeliaStuartooh, 11, the District that seems to be dominating OC so far. I think one or the other of them has gone a long way in a lot of our stories. Also a lot of people seem to have trouble writing one or the other. I think Soleil will get more prominent as the story progresses. She doesn't show herself early on but there's a lot in there.