
1/10/2022 c1 SassYNoleS
LOVING the start of this ..
I love this brazen Bella and this unsure timid Edward ;)
Looking forward to seeing where this goes Xx
LOVING the start of this ..
I love this brazen Bella and this unsure timid Edward ;)
Looking forward to seeing where this goes Xx
1/10/2022 c1
6cejsmom
I don’t know how you always do it but I’m very excited by this original story. We rarely get an Edward like this - I mean - have we ever? Can’t wait for Beagle-whatever you throw at us.

I don’t know how you always do it but I’m very excited by this original story. We rarely get an Edward like this - I mean - have we ever? Can’t wait for Beagle-whatever you throw at us.
1/10/2022 c1 Nicffwhisperer
I could feel the awkwardness radiating off Edward and the flirtiness of Bella. Interesting match up with Jasper & Lauren! Lol
I could feel the awkwardness radiating off Edward and the flirtiness of Bella. Interesting match up with Jasper & Lauren! Lol
1/10/2022 c1 delicateintensity
What an excellent start! Can’t wait to get to know this E&B. You already have me intrigued! Edward seems so cautious but they already have chemistry.
What an excellent start! Can’t wait to get to know this E&B. You already have me intrigued! Edward seems so cautious but they already have chemistry.
1/10/2022 c1 exclusiverob
Great start. I love older Edward, especially with a daughter. The minute you mentioned Lauren I thought, Oh No, trouble. lol Thanks
Great start. I love older Edward, especially with a daughter. The minute you mentioned Lauren I thought, Oh No, trouble. lol Thanks
1/10/2022 c1 redviolet
You bet your ass he said ok ;) Boarding the beagle train. Along for the ride...
You bet your ass he said ok ;) Boarding the beagle train. Along for the ride...
1/10/2022 c1 olivia
an older edward ... interesting!
an older edward ... interesting!