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5/28/2022 c1 149rebecca-in-blue
Nellie is really swimming in angst here, but I think this stream-of-consciousness works well for her and her fixation on Sweeney Todd. I like the way you write her desperation to get his attention, especially how she scorns Lucy for "giving up" on him and makes herself and Toby go without nicer dinners. I'm glad that something finally happens for her after all that brooding, and I like how you leave it open on whether it's actually a happy ending or not.

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