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9/15/2022 c1 Percabeth and team sloth
Love this hope you update sometime soon
5/16/2022 c1 TomasDark
This a very good begin! Update, please!
5/7/2022 c1 2SouthernGentleman21
I love stories like this; consider me very interested. I'll look forward to the next update of both this and HIFTATP.
4/5/2022 c1 8MogtheGnome
Id like to see where this one goes!

Thank you for sharing
1/15/2022 c1 Guest
It's not Yang, because she'd recognize the chat itself, and she most likely doesn't believe that kind of stuff. And it's not Weiss, because an heir is a male. An heiress is female. I will say, I feel sorry for Jaune. He's like one bad day away from starting another Columbine. Bullies really should think twice these days tbh.
1/15/2022 c1 1Loopy Thought Process
I see so many people think that druid is Oscar but I have a different hypothesis

Illia/Penny (maybe Penny might have a personality change or be better at communicating on the internet. She is/was a robot so she would be good at hacking)
1/15/2022 c1 LackOfReason722
I enjoyed every single line in this first chapter. I don't usually read these but damn this is good man, props to you.
1/14/2022 c1 1TheOutCast1o1
Good start let’s see how this story goes
1/13/2022 c1 Diaz Chatnoir
Okay i definetly liked the start of this story, there is a criminally low amount of Normal Modern AU stories that keep being updated pass certain point and i want to know what kind plots unfold from this setup.

As for the characters, like many others my guess is beyond obviously Ruby that the rest are Oscar as Druid, Illia as Scales (She is a Chameleon faunus and seems kind of obvious), Whitley as Heir (if it was either Weiss or Winter it will be Heiress so it makes sense) and either Vernal or Raven as Bird
1/13/2022 c1 NoobNub
I absolutely love this style of fanfiction, and your writing style is also really good. I'm guessing Druid is probably Ren, Bird being either Yang or Vernal. Scythe is obviously Ruby, and Heiress is Weiss. Scales, while normally I would say Blake, the username makes me think Ilia. So quite a different cast than what people normally use in this type of fanfic.

Anyways hope you continue this!
1/13/2022 c1 John-Matik
This is a pretty interesting story, please make more. I like this see where this goes!
1/13/2022 c1 6BlueJack22
No wonder just reminded me of YarnFics stories
1/13/2022 c1 Anon
Well, those 8,291 words flew by. Very interested/excited to see where you take this, your writing style is very enjoyable! I'll be eagerly waiting to read and review again in chapter 2!
1/13/2022 c1 2010si
uff I could only guess that bird was vernal,

Guest "Vernal, Ruby, Illia, Oscar and Whitley" answer makes so much sense, as I didn't see it before XD

what I liked about the fic is that it has the style of the SNAFU fanfiction

The only thing I can think of about what happened is the version of the red sap incident in your fanfic
that would explain the coma to be jaune allergic to the red sap
How he lost his friends that he had left because the joke was towards Pyrrha, who did exercise, these places are usually behind school which would make him a pariah because of how popular she is as I mentioned jaune

only he didn't stop like in the canon, but rather followed him by how jaune mentions it "Although even he would argue that the circumstances that led to his outcast label could have been set in motion by him."

thanks for the chapter and good luck in university
1/13/2022 c1 Guest
I want more, just don't want it to be nothing but Jaune getting ragdolled. That's too relatable...
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