for I already knew you12/5/2022 c1 SamH294
So I got an update that this was Chapter 26, but I only see one chapter.
Did I miss the story?
Sam
So I got an update that this was Chapter 26, but I only see one chapter.
Did I miss the story?
Sam
12/2/2022 c1 mangosmimi
Hopefully this story hasn't been abandoned by the writer. I'm intrigued by the plot so far.
Hopefully this story hasn't been abandoned by the writer. I'm intrigued by the plot so far.
12/1/2022 c1 FineEyesPrettyWoman
Oh dear. I always manage to miss the end. I do with you woukd post on more secrurexdite so you didn’t have to take them down to protect them v
Oh dear. I always manage to miss the end. I do with you woukd post on more secrurexdite so you didn’t have to take them down to protect them v
12/1/2022 c1 Adriana03
Muito obrigada por postar novamente essa estória. Já gostava muito dela na primeira versão.
Muito obrigada por postar novamente essa estória. Já gostava muito dela na primeira versão.
11/30/2022 c1 Shemilliah
Everything you said here guest I agree with.
“Guest
I don't understand why Mrs Bennett is trying to push Elizabeth towards Lucas boy. Afterall with no Jane, Elizabeth must be prettiest of all girls and also have respectable fortune as well. Yet she is being pushed towards John Lucas whose father's estate is even smaller than longbourn and who has many siblings as well while her mother thinks that plain Mary may catch wealthy husband from netherfield. Even fickle Bingley prefers Charlotte than Lizzy? And Georgiana and even Darcy thinks of Mary more than Lizzy. He even remembered her eye colour and certainly haven't paid any special attention to Elizabeth at all. I am starting to wonder who is main heroine of this story. Mary is certainly portrayed as more popular, more accomplished, more favoured and more active with tenants as well as having more part in the story. Frankly this Elizabeth is plain both in personality and beauty as well?
I don't understand Darcy's objections as well. This Bennett is perfectly respectable. They may not have very large fortune or connections to nobility but neither does Bingley. Bingley couldn't purchase an estate bigger than longbourn even of that size, so near of London. And being just recently out of trade they must have most if not all their relatives in trade. Their connection to higher circle come through Darcy and yet Darcy has no objection to them. Just their fortune and their flattering him makes them more worthy.”
Everything you said here guest I agree with.
“Guest
I don't understand why Mrs Bennett is trying to push Elizabeth towards Lucas boy. Afterall with no Jane, Elizabeth must be prettiest of all girls and also have respectable fortune as well. Yet she is being pushed towards John Lucas whose father's estate is even smaller than longbourn and who has many siblings as well while her mother thinks that plain Mary may catch wealthy husband from netherfield. Even fickle Bingley prefers Charlotte than Lizzy? And Georgiana and even Darcy thinks of Mary more than Lizzy. He even remembered her eye colour and certainly haven't paid any special attention to Elizabeth at all. I am starting to wonder who is main heroine of this story. Mary is certainly portrayed as more popular, more accomplished, more favoured and more active with tenants as well as having more part in the story. Frankly this Elizabeth is plain both in personality and beauty as well?
I don't understand Darcy's objections as well. This Bennett is perfectly respectable. They may not have very large fortune or connections to nobility but neither does Bingley. Bingley couldn't purchase an estate bigger than longbourn even of that size, so near of London. And being just recently out of trade they must have most if not all their relatives in trade. Their connection to higher circle come through Darcy and yet Darcy has no objection to them. Just their fortune and their flattering him makes them more worthy.”
11/30/2022 c21 jlm638j
I just found this story yesterday, an love it! I hope you will leave it up a little longer so I can finish it.
I just found this story yesterday, an love it! I hope you will leave it up a little longer so I can finish it.
11/30/2022 c26 Guest
So, today is Nov 30th, lunchtime. Are you going to publish an epilogue, or not? I won't be able to read it tonight.
Thank you for sharing your story.
So, today is Nov 30th, lunchtime. Are you going to publish an epilogue, or not? I won't be able to read it tonight.
Thank you for sharing your story.
11/29/2022 c25 exoplanet3000
. Hello, it's me again. I just like to add how I love your writing skills. You have this talent of weaving an epic of a story, with an easy flow and interesting scenarios, one can easily engage. The longer you write, the more it gets addictive. Your additional characters with back story is a bonus too. See, you are amazing!
. Hello, it's me again. I just like to add how I love your writing skills. You have this talent of weaving an epic of a story, with an easy flow and interesting scenarios, one can easily engage. The longer you write, the more it gets addictive. Your additional characters with back story is a bonus too. See, you are amazing!
11/29/2022 c26 exoplanet3000
... One thing though, I hope Caroline atleast, should have tried to apologize to her family and extended ones...( Bennet family...If she realized her mistakes, she will feel guilty, make amends before finding contentment. Im not in favor that she had her happiness just like that, and still not learning some bits of humility or make an effort for an olive branch.
... One thing though, I hope Caroline atleast, should have tried to apologize to her family and extended ones...( Bennet family...If she realized her mistakes, she will feel guilty, make amends before finding contentment. Im not in favor that she had her happiness just like that, and still not learning some bits of humility or make an effort for an olive branch.
11/29/2022 c26 exoplanet3000
Thank you very much for this story. Very lovely indeed! I craved for the fluffy parts, and you were generous to include a lot. I think the couple deserved that so much happiness after some torturous moments. So, yes. A lot of cheers to the ending!
Thank you very much for this story. Very lovely indeed! I craved for the fluffy parts, and you were generous to include a lot. I think the couple deserved that so much happiness after some torturous moments. So, yes. A lot of cheers to the ending!
11/27/2022 c14 exoplanet3000
I do not know anymore, who is more annoying, Caroline or Charles and Jane? The couple is too lame, giver and pushover. And why Charles is so unaware of Caroline's cruel treatment to his wife? The picture is so big infront that Jane needs to go to her relatives to find some peace and emotional comfort...
I do not know anymore, who is more annoying, Caroline or Charles and Jane? The couple is too lame, giver and pushover. And why Charles is so unaware of Caroline's cruel treatment to his wife? The picture is so big infront that Jane needs to go to her relatives to find some peace and emotional comfort...