for For It Is In Passing That We Achieve Immortality4/21 c1 Juliasimon77
A masterwork of storytelling that pulses with raw intensity, weaving threads of fate, longing, and quiet revelation into an unforgettable tapestry. Every character breathes with a depth that defies the page flawed yet luminous, their struggles carving echoes of our own joys and sorrows. The prose is a symphony: elegant yet unforced, each word chosen with the precision of an artist shaping light and shadow. Scenes unfold with a cinematic grace moments of hushed vulnerability giving way to thunderous emotion, leaving an imprint that lingers long after the final passage. Neither confined by genre nor bound by convention , this is a story that transcends, a journey that doesn’t just unfold but unravels, drawing the reader into a world at once distant and deeply intimate. It is not merely read it is felt, an experience to be carried, pondered, and revisited like a beloved relic of time itself.
A masterwork of storytelling that pulses with raw intensity, weaving threads of fate, longing, and quiet revelation into an unforgettable tapestry. Every character breathes with a depth that defies the page flawed yet luminous, their struggles carving echoes of our own joys and sorrows. The prose is a symphony: elegant yet unforced, each word chosen with the precision of an artist shaping light and shadow. Scenes unfold with a cinematic grace moments of hushed vulnerability giving way to thunderous emotion, leaving an imprint that lingers long after the final passage. Neither confined by genre nor bound by convention , this is a story that transcends, a journey that doesn’t just unfold but unravels, drawing the reader into a world at once distant and deeply intimate. It is not merely read it is felt, an experience to be carried, pondered, and revisited like a beloved relic of time itself.
4/18 c32 
1SavoryBrew
Great chapter, and incredible omake’s!
I love your main story (and I adore how you characterize Kay and Gareth), and experiencing your thoughts on the writtinglore, especially the spinoffs, at the end of a chapter always makes my day.
11 out of 10, there’s a reason I download your stories. They’re incredible, and you are a dedicated and tallented writter. I never worry about the time until the next chapter, because I always know it will be more than worth the wait.
1SavoryBrewGreat chapter, and incredible omake’s!
I love your main story (and I adore how you characterize Kay and Gareth), and experiencing your thoughts on the writtinglore, especially the spinoffs, at the end of a chapter always makes my day.
11 out of 10, there’s a reason I download your stories. They’re incredible, and you are a dedicated and tallented writter. I never worry about the time until the next chapter, because I always know it will be more than worth the wait.
4/16 c32 Highostrich
You are an exceptionally goo writer. Your character interaction are great and Jaune is especially in character.
The only thing you lack imo is decisiveness. You don't have to follow canon if the characters stay true to themselves. Jaune is also just there and not really doing anything to change. If him being there doesn't change anything than whats the point
You are an exceptionally goo writer. Your character interaction are great and Jaune is especially in character.
The only thing you lack imo is decisiveness. You don't have to follow canon if the characters stay true to themselves. Jaune is also just there and not really doing anything to change. If him being there doesn't change anything than whats the point
4/11 c1 Pixel Waves
Hello Wassup !
I've had a chance to look at your story For It Is In Passing That We Achieve Immortality and I must say it's really impressive! The characters, world building, and overall narrative have so much potential. I specialize in bringing stories to life with dynamic visuals that keep the audience engaged.
I'd love to collaborate with you to turn your amazing story into stunning comic that really speaks to your audience. Hoping for a positive response! Thanks.
if you'd like to discuss more or get started.
I'm excited about the chance to work together!
feel free to reach out to me on my Discord pixelwaves007
Instagram: lioraacomicstudios
Hello Wassup !
I've had a chance to look at your story For It Is In Passing That We Achieve Immortality and I must say it's really impressive! The characters, world building, and overall narrative have so much potential. I specialize in bringing stories to life with dynamic visuals that keep the audience engaged.
I'd love to collaborate with you to turn your amazing story into stunning comic that really speaks to your audience. Hoping for a positive response! Thanks.
if you'd like to discuss more or get started.
I'm excited about the chance to work together!
feel free to reach out to me on my Discord pixelwaves007
Instagram: lioraacomicstudios
4/10 c3 Alredy exist
I mean, one thing that could give away he's in another world is the Moon, since it isn't shattered here
I mean, one thing that could give away he's in another world is the Moon, since it isn't shattered here
4/9 c4 2TheSlySage
rereading and catching up. love Jaune's shenanigans here it also reminds me of Shirou from Fate in time with the farming knowledge upgrades lol
2TheSlySagerereading and catching up. love Jaune's shenanigans here it also reminds me of Shirou from Fate in time with the farming knowledge upgrades lol
4/9 c32 Guest
Well in legends Arthur was like him that's the problem and why the rebellion succeeded so well. Arthur sleeping with Morgan was completely consensual originally and he slept around and Morgan wasnt Uthers kid Fate likely changed that to remove the whole event and say it was slander Fates already known for that sort of thing Sieg helped gunther force himself on Brunhild we know in Fate this was removed Fates orgin for him is that story.
It's because Fate writers are lazy and folded like 16 different women into her Morgan was his loyal follower originally Morgawse was the traitorous sister alot of stuff starts to make sense when you realise the changes. Why was Mordreds rebellion against against the perfect king so successful? Because Arthur wasn't the literal stated reason was Arthur wouldn't stop with wars even as late as Lmort Darthur. Why is Mordred capable enough to kill so many? Lancelot stole Mordreds feats including Guinevere and was originally a very cool guy Amhar was the rebellious son. And Arthur being hated for waging war and a bloodthirst personality will cause a little laugh when you realise that was infact his job he was the War leader king was a later story.
Yes Merlin absolutely would fail Fate has a hype issue as you pointed out Morgan in Fate was an idiot plenty of Fgo villains greatest enemies were themselves. Ritsuka and Sefar wouldn't be issues if this wasn't the case.
Well in legends Arthur was like him that's the problem and why the rebellion succeeded so well. Arthur sleeping with Morgan was completely consensual originally and he slept around and Morgan wasnt Uthers kid Fate likely changed that to remove the whole event and say it was slander Fates already known for that sort of thing Sieg helped gunther force himself on Brunhild we know in Fate this was removed Fates orgin for him is that story.
It's because Fate writers are lazy and folded like 16 different women into her Morgan was his loyal follower originally Morgawse was the traitorous sister alot of stuff starts to make sense when you realise the changes. Why was Mordreds rebellion against against the perfect king so successful? Because Arthur wasn't the literal stated reason was Arthur wouldn't stop with wars even as late as Lmort Darthur. Why is Mordred capable enough to kill so many? Lancelot stole Mordreds feats including Guinevere and was originally a very cool guy Amhar was the rebellious son. And Arthur being hated for waging war and a bloodthirst personality will cause a little laugh when you realise that was infact his job he was the War leader king was a later story.
Yes Merlin absolutely would fail Fate has a hype issue as you pointed out Morgan in Fate was an idiot plenty of Fgo villains greatest enemies were themselves. Ritsuka and Sefar wouldn't be issues if this wasn't the case.
4/8 c1 Interex
Not offense but just make another story. I think you’re burnt out on the main plot.
Not offense but just make another story. I think you’re burnt out on the main plot.
4/8 c32 2Zevren
I quite like the omake this chapter. I would actually like to read that as it's own story.
No offense to this story. But just haven't loved it like your other stories and ideas.
2ZevrenI quite like the omake this chapter. I would actually like to read that as it's own story.
No offense to this story. But just haven't loved it like your other stories and ideas.
4/7 c32 Al319
P.S. thank you for all the work you have been putting in this this story. keep up the good work.
P.S. thank you for all the work you have been putting in this this story. keep up the good work.
4/7 c32 Al319
I generally love the omake. also, this just made me remember how much I hate Merlin in fate series, all the things he could have prevented but he ignored for self-pleasure and sheer laziness. And I kind of feel like aretoria probably shouldn't that became King not just from this but I recently started going to the Fate lore on her.
I generally love the omake. also, this just made me remember how much I hate Merlin in fate series, all the things he could have prevented but he ignored for self-pleasure and sheer laziness. And I kind of feel like aretoria probably shouldn't that became King not just from this but I recently started going to the Fate lore on her.
4/7 c32 calderoneric758
Any chance for a sotry with fairy queen Morgan with her daughters with jaune like barghest
Any chance for a sotry with fairy queen Morgan with her daughters with jaune like barghest
4/7 c32 Ingrid SSR
If you are really going with the it’s my story and I do whatever I want path. Then you better just remove guest reviews entirely. Cause people who’ve held out of respect are about to say whatever they want about your fic bro.
Yeah it’s your story, but you posted it within a public setting. It ain’t above criticism unless you specified prior that this fic was just for shenanigans and nothing substantial.
TL:DR - You published something to be scrutinized, don’t get mad when it gets scrutinized.
If you are really going with the it’s my story and I do whatever I want path. Then you better just remove guest reviews entirely. Cause people who’ve held out of respect are about to say whatever they want about your fic bro.
Yeah it’s your story, but you posted it within a public setting. It ain’t above criticism unless you specified prior that this fic was just for shenanigans and nothing substantial.
TL:DR - You published something to be scrutinized, don’t get mad when it gets scrutinized.
4/7 c32 X3runner
Kay has to be constantly internally screaming as now not only does his “nephew” but also his “niece” both seem to have a thing for the same guy and aparantly the guy is one of the new people close enough to have the near complete trust of his sister. I could see him thinking they are almost like guinea pigs, just crawling all over each other. I cracked up with him being not only worried but annoyed at how jaune is connected to we’ll all of his family in a way that it almost seems if he ends up with any of them the rest of the family would be at a loss
Kay has to be constantly internally screaming as now not only does his “nephew” but also his “niece” both seem to have a thing for the same guy and aparantly the guy is one of the new people close enough to have the near complete trust of his sister. I could see him thinking they are almost like guinea pigs, just crawling all over each other. I cracked up with him being not only worried but annoyed at how jaune is connected to we’ll all of his family in a way that it almost seems if he ends up with any of them the rest of the family would be at a loss