2/15/2022 c5 Damien8d
Aaaand you killed Haku...
Well that is a huge disappointment and a huge missed opportunity for Haku to become a follower of Naruto due to the shadow of Zabuza.
If you just let Canon events happen regardless of the changes you made it will become lazy.
A fem!Haku as his friend/lover/mentor with Zabuza as a shadow who slowly regains more and more conscience would have been interesting...
BTW you still have not added all the other skills and traits he should have at this point!
Aaaand you killed Haku...
Well that is a huge disappointment and a huge missed opportunity for Haku to become a follower of Naruto due to the shadow of Zabuza.
If you just let Canon events happen regardless of the changes you made it will become lazy.
A fem!Haku as his friend/lover/mentor with Zabuza as a shadow who slowly regains more and more conscience would have been interesting...
BTW you still have not added all the other skills and traits he should have at this point!
2/14/2022 c4 Lobo YT
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2/14/2022 c4 OmniHein
nice, please read my other review and
1: I personally don't really care who you add.
2: Do a combination of the two, not to OP but not nerfed.
nice, please read my other review and
1: I personally don't really care who you add.
2: Do a combination of the two, not to OP but not nerfed.
2/14/2022 c2 OmniHein
bro, I rarely review a chapter that's not the latest but I ask of you not to pair him with Hinata or Sakura or anyone that has been done hundreds/thousands of times before
please do something rare like the cat anbu Yugao Uzuki or Karin or anyone that is rarely used.
bro, I rarely review a chapter that's not the latest but I ask of you not to pair him with Hinata or Sakura or anyone that has been done hundreds/thousands of times before
please do something rare like the cat anbu Yugao Uzuki or Karin or anyone that is rarely used.
2/13/2022 c4 Dragonnaruto
Yo! The chapter was great, can't wait for the next chapter lol. Btw i think you can add haku and zabuza in his army if you are planning to kill them or else you can make gato his slave by any necromancy ritual , well anyway it was just a suggestion, i will be waiting for the next chapter bro.
Yo! The chapter was great, can't wait for the next chapter lol. Btw i think you can add haku and zabuza in his army if you are planning to kill them or else you can make gato his slave by any necromancy ritual , well anyway it was just a suggestion, i will be waiting for the next chapter bro.
2/13/2022 c4 2rahad
I don't know about solo leveling with the gamer ability is a little bit to much. He has already op with gamer alone.
I don't know about solo leveling with the gamer ability is a little bit to much. He has already op with gamer alone.
2/13/2022 c3 rahad
God... you need to re read your damn story... I'm pretty even at chapter 179, the ''uchiwa taijutsu'' will still be at lvl 1...
God... you need to re read your damn story... I'm pretty even at chapter 179, the ''uchiwa taijutsu'' will still be at lvl 1...
2/13/2022 c2 rahad
Dude you need to check your stat carefully. Naruto has already lvl 2 at the uchiwa taijutsu from his fight last chapter.
Dude you need to check your stat carefully. Naruto has already lvl 2 at the uchiwa taijutsu from his fight last chapter.
2/12/2022 c4 Guest
Same asshat, again.
To be clear on the smart/op front. Of course we want Naruto to improve, but don't start blowing shit out the water with it just yet. More just improving a little faster than Canon did. And in different ways (Canon did have him pretty fucking OP by the end and he didn't stay a dumb idiot, just a smart idiot) i can guess we're shifting away from typical Jinchuriki stuff (Maybe the nine tails can be a Shadow Army Summon? Scaled down a fuck ton naturally even at 9 tails, and each tail being a stage of the summon, first being none simply to fuck with the Fox.) But I would like us to not go mad with it, keep the shadows more to a team or group than full blown army.
As for summon contracts. No idea what he should have, IF he should have anything.
I may not have much in the way of hope considering the class you went with, but fuck it, i trust you to try and keep this more it's own.
Same asshat, again.
To be clear on the smart/op front. Of course we want Naruto to improve, but don't start blowing shit out the water with it just yet. More just improving a little faster than Canon did. And in different ways (Canon did have him pretty fucking OP by the end and he didn't stay a dumb idiot, just a smart idiot) i can guess we're shifting away from typical Jinchuriki stuff (Maybe the nine tails can be a Shadow Army Summon? Scaled down a fuck ton naturally even at 9 tails, and each tail being a stage of the summon, first being none simply to fuck with the Fox.) But I would like us to not go mad with it, keep the shadows more to a team or group than full blown army.
As for summon contracts. No idea what he should have, IF he should have anything.
I may not have much in the way of hope considering the class you went with, but fuck it, i trust you to try and keep this more it's own.
2/12/2022 c1 BJJPanda
His HP should be much higher, he is an Uzumaki, jinchuuriki and the reincarnation of Ashura. All of that means he has an op healing factor and a lot of vitality. Why did the running skill not show up in his current skills?
His HP should be much higher, he is an Uzumaki, jinchuuriki and the reincarnation of Ashura. All of that means he has an op healing factor and a lot of vitality. Why did the running skill not show up in his current skills?
2/12/2022 c4 Guest
Same anon as just now, In the end you asked about OP/smart Naruto. Here's the thing, i liked this up until now because he Wasn't really OP, stronger sure but not stupidly so and he didn't suddenly become super smart, he's still pretty much naruto and the system just gives him new mistakes to make and qays to be a bit... dim, the ability to observe and know shit sometimes isn't the best for him since he does mostly what canon would likely do with it. I really fucking liked that because it made it stand out from the other Gamer!Naruto stuff. This WAS more it's own. And then the Necromancer job happened (and you confirmed shadow army in the AN) so that's out the window. Still I'll check on this from time to time as just any old thing to read to pass time.
Same anon as just now, In the end you asked about OP/smart Naruto. Here's the thing, i liked this up until now because he Wasn't really OP, stronger sure but not stupidly so and he didn't suddenly become super smart, he's still pretty much naruto and the system just gives him new mistakes to make and qays to be a bit... dim, the ability to observe and know shit sometimes isn't the best for him since he does mostly what canon would likely do with it. I really fucking liked that because it made it stand out from the other Gamer!Naruto stuff. This WAS more it's own. And then the Necromancer job happened (and you confirmed shadow army in the AN) so that's out the window. Still I'll check on this from time to time as just any old thing to read to pass time.
2/12/2022 c4 Guest
Ah. Ah just straight up solo levelling's shite. Again. Oh well.
Ah. Ah just straight up solo levelling's shite. Again. Oh well.
2/11/2022 c4 d.wilson654
this gamer is a jerk who puts the god of shinobi as a under lvl 10 job quest thats a lvl 100 quest maybe
this gamer is a jerk who puts the god of shinobi as a under lvl 10 job quest thats a lvl 100 quest maybe