for Naruto: The Leveling Shinobi2/8/2022 c3 NaruCrazy
When Naruto "convinced" the other three to continue the mission, that was persuasion, not public speaking considering there were only 3 other people.
How is 'will of fire' different from persuasion?
When Naruto "convinced" the other three to continue the mission, that was persuasion, not public speaking considering there were only 3 other people.
How is 'will of fire' different from persuasion?
2/8/2022 c4 Guest
fox summoning
fox summoning
2/8/2022 c4 NerullianZenith
Yo, very good start so far. I’m a big sucker for gamer fics, but a lot of them are pretty bad(not that that detracts from my enjoyment of them). You didn’t fall into the trope of having Naruto power leveling before even leaving Konoha, which is already a pretty big step up from most. You’re writing is also better than where a lot of gamer fics start off with, and it’s seen a bit of improvement since chapter 1, which I’m hoping is a trend that will continue.
Your Naruto is obviously progressing much quicker than canon already, but it’s not on a scale that seems improbable or that’s pushing him way past his teammates super early on, he’s catching up with Sasuke in some regards, while his gamer abilities let him pull ahead in skills they’re both new to. This, as we can already see, is pushing Sasuke to not only try harder to catch up to Naruto, but also he’s beginning to open up socially as well, with his request for help showing that, even if it’s just to gain more power, he’s willing to engage with Naruto. Fairly, even, as he accepted the trade.
I’m not sure what you’re going to do with Sakura, but she seemingly noticed that Naruto is changing, and hopefully that will make her calm down some when interacting with him.
When I saw this was a Solo Leveling xover, I knew shadow monarch was inevitable. I’m a fan of the series, and the shadow monarch skills are super badass. I’m looking forward to seeing how Naruto reacts to and utilizes those abilities, as well as whatever else you decide to give him.
You’re doing really well, and I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes, keep up the good work!
Yo, very good start so far. I’m a big sucker for gamer fics, but a lot of them are pretty bad(not that that detracts from my enjoyment of them). You didn’t fall into the trope of having Naruto power leveling before even leaving Konoha, which is already a pretty big step up from most. You’re writing is also better than where a lot of gamer fics start off with, and it’s seen a bit of improvement since chapter 1, which I’m hoping is a trend that will continue.
Your Naruto is obviously progressing much quicker than canon already, but it’s not on a scale that seems improbable or that’s pushing him way past his teammates super early on, he’s catching up with Sasuke in some regards, while his gamer abilities let him pull ahead in skills they’re both new to. This, as we can already see, is pushing Sasuke to not only try harder to catch up to Naruto, but also he’s beginning to open up socially as well, with his request for help showing that, even if it’s just to gain more power, he’s willing to engage with Naruto. Fairly, even, as he accepted the trade.
I’m not sure what you’re going to do with Sakura, but she seemingly noticed that Naruto is changing, and hopefully that will make her calm down some when interacting with him.
When I saw this was a Solo Leveling xover, I knew shadow monarch was inevitable. I’m a fan of the series, and the shadow monarch skills are super badass. I’m looking forward to seeing how Naruto reacts to and utilizes those abilities, as well as whatever else you decide to give him.
You’re doing really well, and I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes, keep up the good work!
2/8/2022 c2 NaruCrazy
So persuasion, battle strategy and so many "skills", I am surprised breathing isn't one...
So persuasion, battle strategy and so many "skills", I am surprised breathing isn't one...
2/8/2022 c4 
8ScepticalOne
Have I mentioned how much I love your character writing?
Cause I absolutely love it! Sakura is a fan girl without going into full parody banshee mode, Sasuke is angsty but he's not the arrogant shit-stick people like to think he was, and Naruto is a dimwit with a petty streak. Most other authors min-max these traits or just bastardize the characters all together.
Ya know, I think I may have to take inspiration from how you do the class change. I have a project that's litterally giving a Naruto character the Shadow Monarch class, and your approach sounds a whole hell of a lot easier to write the. the mess I was thinking.
Well, depending on how Wave ends up going, Haku or Zabuza make sense as Naruto's firsts (out of context statements born from a spoil free review)
Summons are a bit of a weird thing in Naruto, most of them require a fair bit of OC generation, so I wouldn't fault you for sticking with the base Toad. Although considering what Naruto's build is going to look like, I don't think he needs a summons.
I prefer more realistic approaches to these stories, but I ultimately like when characters are in character and logistically grow into the OP! or SMART! archetypes. Although that can lead to a debate about what's a core character trait or not.
Anyways, Great Chapter and Keep up the good work!
8ScepticalOneHave I mentioned how much I love your character writing?
Cause I absolutely love it! Sakura is a fan girl without going into full parody banshee mode, Sasuke is angsty but he's not the arrogant shit-stick people like to think he was, and Naruto is a dimwit with a petty streak. Most other authors min-max these traits or just bastardize the characters all together.
Ya know, I think I may have to take inspiration from how you do the class change. I have a project that's litterally giving a Naruto character the Shadow Monarch class, and your approach sounds a whole hell of a lot easier to write the. the mess I was thinking.
Well, depending on how Wave ends up going, Haku or Zabuza make sense as Naruto's firsts (out of context statements born from a spoil free review)
Summons are a bit of a weird thing in Naruto, most of them require a fair bit of OC generation, so I wouldn't fault you for sticking with the base Toad. Although considering what Naruto's build is going to look like, I don't think he needs a summons.
I prefer more realistic approaches to these stories, but I ultimately like when characters are in character and logistically grow into the OP! or SMART! archetypes. Although that can lead to a debate about what's a core character trait or not.
Anyways, Great Chapter and Keep up the good work!
2/8/2022 c4 1zx20000006
You should definitely get naruto hooked on fuinjutsu, it’s in his blood , his Heritage the fact that the third hokage didn’t try to atleast see if naruto is talented in it as his parents baffles me. He has to start early so he can have a reasonable time table to be able to use high level fuinjutsu that can for example restrain bijuu or manipulate space/time continuum (hirishen) or find a way to block kamui through fuinjutsu.
1zx20000006You should definitely get naruto hooked on fuinjutsu, it’s in his blood , his Heritage the fact that the third hokage didn’t try to atleast see if naruto is talented in it as his parents baffles me. He has to start early so he can have a reasonable time table to be able to use high level fuinjutsu that can for example restrain bijuu or manipulate space/time continuum (hirishen) or find a way to block kamui through fuinjutsu.
2/8/2022 c3 zx20000006
About the pairings If you want to do something unique or at the very least early done you could make naruto go through multiple romantic relationships (not at the same time) where he learns more about how to be in a relationship and more about love. It allows you the chance to write naruto with multiple girls without it turning into a harem. For example a budding relationship with female haku until she dies in the final clash can give naruto a chance to grow out of his Naivety and start seeing the shinobi world for what it is. And a small relationship with ino can maybe teach him the dangers of shallow girls or a small thing with timari can teach him the dangers of dating a konichi from another village. This way you can easily write some drama , romance, and jealousy without making it too unrealistic and boring
About the pairings If you want to do something unique or at the very least early done you could make naruto go through multiple romantic relationships (not at the same time) where he learns more about how to be in a relationship and more about love. It allows you the chance to write naruto with multiple girls without it turning into a harem. For example a budding relationship with female haku until she dies in the final clash can give naruto a chance to grow out of his Naivety and start seeing the shinobi world for what it is. And a small relationship with ino can maybe teach him the dangers of shallow girls or a small thing with timari can teach him the dangers of dating a konichi from another village. This way you can easily write some drama , romance, and jealousy without making it too unrealistic and boring
2/8/2022 c4 3RizenKing
1. If you give him haiku because haiku still technically dies that will be understandable but if you want to give him his own first kills as his first resurrection choose the demon brothers.
2. Please know toad, dragon, or fox summoning. Since you are making him a necromancer please give him an animal that is thoroughly rooted in death. And since Itachi already has the crow summoning school please do not give him those. Like give him an Anubis over panther based summoning contract.
3RizenKing1. If you give him haiku because haiku still technically dies that will be understandable but if you want to give him his own first kills as his first resurrection choose the demon brothers.
2. Please know toad, dragon, or fox summoning. Since you are making him a necromancer please give him an animal that is thoroughly rooted in death. And since Itachi already has the crow summoning school please do not give him those. Like give him an Anubis over panther based summoning contract.
2/8/2022 c4 deniswanheda
Prefiero a Naruto leve op, En cuánto a la invocación, preferiría otra, tal vez más pequeño y útil, como lobos
Y a quien revivir primero, será o Zabuza o Haku (Fame)
Y espero un leve harén, con Fame Haku, hinata y Temari
Prefiero a Naruto leve op, En cuánto a la invocación, preferiría otra, tal vez más pequeño y útil, como lobos
Y a quien revivir primero, será o Zabuza o Haku (Fame)
Y espero un leve harén, con Fame Haku, hinata y Temari
2/8/2022 c4 Dbot15112002
I would prefer if he has something related to necromancy as his summons instead of toads, but I do want him to have senjustu.
I would prefer if he has something related to necromancy as his summons instead of toads, but I do want him to have senjustu.
2/8/2022 c4 2Snazzy Snake
No idea who to add to his shadow army but in regards to the second question I guess I like gradual OP gamers. The gamer system is an unfair advantage, it massively accelerates growth and considering Naruto already has a massive chakra pool, is a Jinchuriki and has shadow clones. Well… I’ll feel irritated if he doesn’t surpass Sasuke and aim to beat Rock Lee sooner rather than later. Still you are the author and this is your story, ultimately you have control of the direction it is going.
2Snazzy SnakeNo idea who to add to his shadow army but in regards to the second question I guess I like gradual OP gamers. The gamer system is an unfair advantage, it massively accelerates growth and considering Naruto already has a massive chakra pool, is a Jinchuriki and has shadow clones. Well… I’ll feel irritated if he doesn’t surpass Sasuke and aim to beat Rock Lee sooner rather than later. Still you are the author and this is your story, ultimately you have control of the direction it is going.
2/8/2022 c4 Ezeakel
Pretty good story until now.
I can not wait to see the next chapters.
For his job, necromancer? It's a crossover but it's happening in naruto universe so personally i find that giving job is unnecesairy.
I have no problem with OP character especially as naruto has a system but you must show the blood and tears, the hours of training and how much he pushed himself to be that strong.
Pretty good story until now.
I can not wait to see the next chapters.
For his job, necromancer? It's a crossover but it's happening in naruto universe so personally i find that giving job is unnecesairy.
I have no problem with OP character especially as naruto has a system but you must show the blood and tears, the hours of training and how much he pushed himself to be that strong.