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4/12/2022 c12 Spellbat
1: Iron skin. He is the transmigrant of Asura, the one with the body of the SoSP, even if he doesn't know it.

2: Make your own bracket. There are more new Genin hopefuls here that have a chance to be in the finals.
4/12/2022 c12 Guest
oh man those are actually hard choices iron skin would be pretty good choice here for enhancing his physique but enhanced eyesight also sounds like it leads to something more in the long run if there is a way for him to get both somehow that would probably be best im not exactly sure how the skill tree mechanic works in your system yet as it was just introduced in this chapter (also if i could ask one thing please dont make the Rinnegan an evolution of the sharingan it ruins the dojitsitu trinity in cannon so dont let it ruin it here sure you can have a fusion of them later like the rinne-sharingan or even the EM rinne-sharingan but acknowledge what this should be a fusion which created an entirely new dojitsu greater than the sum of its parts also remember the byakugan has an evolution form too just like the EMS the Tenseigan ive noticed alot of authors seam to forget that)
4/12/2022 c12 deniswanheda
Las peleas creo que algunas deberían ser las mismas, en especial la de Naruto, obviamente la pelea en si cambiara con el canon ya que esté Naruto vencera más fácilmente a kiba, y en cuanto a la habilidad, mm creo que piel de hierro es mejor ya que el jutsu de esconderse en la niebla bloquea la vista
4/12/2022 c12 Koncor the great
1. Iron skin no offense but this is naruto i honestly dont see him picking enhanced vision without some promising flag that this will become a doujutsu i mean if it said proto doujutsu thats a different argument it is still just a buff to vison at first but and naruto is going to feal riped off but as a starting point for a personalized doujutsu that could potentially surpass all others thats a small piece. But yeah iron skin i dont even think naruto is going to qestion it.

2. Costume no offense but the bracket was god awful in canon and i would like to see some good beatdowns on sakura and ino. Kin will mind rape ino into a coma lets be honest ino has nothing to help her aim wihile drunk and isnt shikamaru and tenten or hinita vs. Sakura would just be funny hinita is literally fighting the one person we could see snap and go yandere on especially if sakura uter anything poor about naruto from her whores mouth and tenten would just asume sakura put any effort in to bring a ninja and would win so casually that she would be trying to disspell a non-existent gen jutsu lets be honest sakura is classified as top female so sakura vs. Her equal is poor for development both ino and sakura's fight was abysmal there was some crafty moments but lets be honst ino won hands down insanity is not something you can have a countermeasure for and ino did a lot more in that fight and probably blew her load on her big win condition but ino and sakura vs. Anyone else is almost a death sentence and a hard lesson they need to learn. As for the others theres so many facanatig permutations like choji vs. Zaku aka choji didn't mean to turn him into paste who uses a presure attack on a bolder and dosnt expect to lunch in it uncontrollably and most likely killing someone probably zaku. Gaara vs. Neji so on so forth.
4/12/2022 c11 AvexedAuthor
Hmm, probably Iron Skin. He would realise that while enhanced eyesight is useful Iron Skin helps immediately for the Chunin exams. 2] While a fresh mix up is nice, only if you actually have a reason for it. A well written canon match will always be better than randomly putting Ino versus Gaara...
4/12/2022 c12 Matthew Davis1
I think Naruto would probably pick Iron skin I mean admittedly it depends what in Enhanced eyesight would do for him I do hope this is the start of him getting a bit more powerful because he’s not really that much stronger than he was before at this point in canon and although I don’t mind him not being a OP The idea of the game system is so they can get skills and/or stronger quicker I do know he is stronger it’s just at this point outside of the rookie 9 and one or two others I can’t imagine him actually being much of challenge for anyone never mind actually beating them I also would’ve thought with his intelligence where is and the fact he’s got his vitality up through training he would of figure out how to get some of his other skills up naturally instead of having to spend points constantly just my view of the story I’m enjoying it though keep up the good work
4/12/2022 c12 2Van der Ay
Thanks for the update
4/12/2022 c11 OmniHein
bruh, that math stuff is literally what they have to do lol. anyway

1. Iron skin.

2. Keep canon-like.
4/12/2022 c12 2LightSpecter141
I’m thinking of keeping the fights Canon except for the fight between Hinata and Negi, well maybe have the former awaken a different form of the gamer ability of her own?
4/12/2022 c12 Guest
Iron skin!
4/12/2022 c9 Glitner
You failed hardcore when u have the shadows Theorin old personality takes away the fear aspekt pdf the shadow lol for whatever reason the tiger party probably think he is a stupid ninja with a shadow bloodline and for fuck saké make naruto kill something and make the fight more bloody Nothing about this fanfic is rated m damm i Woolf Hardly give it a rated T anywyas everything else is good
4/12/2022 c12 yayas11
ofcourse he should pick iron skin, because that would be quite helpful with shadow clones by increasing their durability, i havent read any fanfics using kakazu's Hard Skin jutsu by shadow clones.
4/12/2022 c12 Bigguy45
Eyesight would be intresting leveling up to max to be like sharingan or a byakugan but choose ironskin level it up and it can be as hard as a hierro from bleach especially like nnorita since he had the hardest and toughest one so i would choose ironskin
4/12/2022 c12 demissedwaifu
nice 1
4/12/2022 c12 yochan123
thanks for the new chapter!

i think it would be fun to have different matchups!
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