for Naruto: The Leveling Shinobi3/16/2022 c9 Insitreader
I love this story I hope you continue as for weapon it would be cool for something like akame la kill ninja wire mostly because Naruto can de very resourceful with it and unpredictable with it as for a different weapon daggers after all Naruto in canon dual wield kunai
As for fight I will have to agree with you for now
I love this story I hope you continue as for weapon it would be cool for something like akame la kill ninja wire mostly because Naruto can de very resourceful with it and unpredictable with it as for a different weapon daggers after all Naruto in canon dual wield kunai
As for fight I will have to agree with you for now
3/16/2022 c2 mshade656
#1 lightning
#pairings no one in konoha
# make hinata be like lit sis and sakura be big sis for naruto char development
#1 lightning
#pairings no one in konoha
# make hinata be like lit sis and sakura be big sis for naruto char development
3/16/2022 c9 Koncor the great
As for the wemon it should be something unique and fitting but also uncommon seeing how gun exist in the wave arc im temted to say twin sawed off dubble barrel shotguns as it would be funny but seriously i think it should be something like a yumi for range and dule Kabutowari for close range naruto is shaping up for a arcane trickster / assassination build so giving him some brutal close range and some stelthy long range wepons built to eliminate enemies pretty vicious and effectively would be best. But i still want to say i stand by my original point of Raiga Kurosuki is scum and zabuza won't respect naruto till he gets his hands on the kiba and lives up to his potential clansmen Ameyuri Ringo who is by far my favorite of the 7 swordsman of the mist and potentially my favorite female naruto character who only got enough relavince and development in like 5 minutes to out shine sakura in the entire whole of naruto i mean its surprising how many characters get less than a episode to shine and out shine hinita and sakura.
Shrug theres really no good answer for this honestly i mean lee vs. Gaara is obviously the hight of it but i think i like kabato vs. Kakashi i mean kabato has balls of steal and did quite some impressive things while in the general arc i might give the main cast some hevy slack for mo one seeing through kabato but hes a highly talented individual.
Nice great chapter btw.
As for the wemon it should be something unique and fitting but also uncommon seeing how gun exist in the wave arc im temted to say twin sawed off dubble barrel shotguns as it would be funny but seriously i think it should be something like a yumi for range and dule Kabutowari for close range naruto is shaping up for a arcane trickster / assassination build so giving him some brutal close range and some stelthy long range wepons built to eliminate enemies pretty vicious and effectively would be best. But i still want to say i stand by my original point of Raiga Kurosuki is scum and zabuza won't respect naruto till he gets his hands on the kiba and lives up to his potential clansmen Ameyuri Ringo who is by far my favorite of the 7 swordsman of the mist and potentially my favorite female naruto character who only got enough relavince and development in like 5 minutes to out shine sakura in the entire whole of naruto i mean its surprising how many characters get less than a episode to shine and out shine hinita and sakura.
Shrug theres really no good answer for this honestly i mean lee vs. Gaara is obviously the hight of it but i think i like kabato vs. Kakashi i mean kabato has balls of steal and did quite some impressive things while in the general arc i might give the main cast some hevy slack for mo one seeing through kabato but hes a highly talented individual.
Nice great chapter btw.
3/15/2022 c3 Guest
I'm probably late but get all 5 chakra natures and maybe kekei genkais bit for chakra natures he needs either ALOT of training or finish a hard quest related to that chakra nature like "reach max respect with kakashi to gain a lightning affinity" my favorite villain in naruto has to be madara and ship should be an oc or something maybe someone with the gamer system
I'm probably late but get all 5 chakra natures and maybe kekei genkais bit for chakra natures he needs either ALOT of training or finish a hard quest related to that chakra nature like "reach max respect with kakashi to gain a lightning affinity" my favorite villain in naruto has to be madara and ship should be an oc or something maybe someone with the gamer system
3/15/2022 c8 
45Sue-Drae
Good chapter as always! Just a heads up, though; right after Ubuki introduces himself, Kurotsuchi refers to Naruto by his real name and not his alias. It looks like she uses the fake name the rest of the time, but you may want to go back and change that one bit!
Happy writing!
45Sue-DraeGood chapter as always! Just a heads up, though; right after Ubuki introduces himself, Kurotsuchi refers to Naruto by his real name and not his alias. It looks like she uses the fake name the rest of the time, but you may want to go back and change that one bit!
Happy writing!
3/15/2022 c9 1Thoughtful Bean
Kakashi teaching him the hiding in the mist technique seems like a pretty bad idea from Kakashi's viewpoint considering Naruto would be just as blind in the mist as everyone else.
1Thoughtful BeanKakashi teaching him the hiding in the mist technique seems like a pretty bad idea from Kakashi's viewpoint considering Naruto would be just as blind in the mist as everyone else.
3/15/2022 c9 4dcoon
You should have Naruto change weapons based on persona. Like Naruto uses a sword, Ryuji uses a bow. Something to further differentiate the characters.
4dcoonYou should have Naruto change weapons based on persona. Like Naruto uses a sword, Ryuji uses a bow. Something to further differentiate the characters.
3/15/2022 c9 Guest
Wohoooo! Amazing update. I'm living it
Wohoooo! Amazing update. I'm living it
3/15/2022 c9 8ScepticalOne
I like the chapter!
With Zabuza as a shadow, Naruto is now in a better position of being a swordsman, particularly one who uses greatswords. Although Haku also means senbon are also on the table, but Naruto seems like the type who would initially gravitate towards the sword. Although I don't think he'd have the discipline to stick with it. So probably attempt Greatsword and then realize learning Haku's senbon would be quicker and probably more benifical given how his fighting style is developing?
Sakura vs. Ino is probably my favorite fight to rag on either character for since it's so laughable and is either one of or the highlight of either girls. Legit favorite fight is Lee vs. Gaara, although my less basic choice would be Shino vs. Zaku.
And Boruto did do Lee dirty, at least we got Metal Lee out of it, and subsequently a confirmation that Rock Lee got laid.
8ScepticalOneI like the chapter!
With Zabuza as a shadow, Naruto is now in a better position of being a swordsman, particularly one who uses greatswords. Although Haku also means senbon are also on the table, but Naruto seems like the type who would initially gravitate towards the sword. Although I don't think he'd have the discipline to stick with it. So probably attempt Greatsword and then realize learning Haku's senbon would be quicker and probably more benifical given how his fighting style is developing?
Sakura vs. Ino is probably my favorite fight to rag on either character for since it's so laughable and is either one of or the highlight of either girls. Legit favorite fight is Lee vs. Gaara, although my less basic choice would be Shino vs. Zaku.
And Boruto did do Lee dirty, at least we got Metal Lee out of it, and subsequently a confirmation that Rock Lee got laid.
3/15/2022 c9 1ColdFoxVII
Q1:
I drawing inspiration from the Nubari to say a rope dartmeteor hammer; a special rope/small chain with interchangeable weapon heads and ether a wakizashi or a quarterstaff for enclosed spaces.
Q2:
Lee and Gara was the best. the others had their place with Neji picking apart Hinata, naruto edging out the win with a fart against Kiba, and Temari showing that even with basic knowledge of Elemental manipulation training can stomp your opponent i.e. Tenten. IMO Ino and Sakura should have quit right before the preliminaries.
Bonus:
please allow Naruto to keep the sexy technique/ninja center-fold Naruko from; to change or alter how ever you like.
1ColdFoxVIIQ1:
I drawing inspiration from the Nubari to say a rope dartmeteor hammer; a special rope/small chain with interchangeable weapon heads and ether a wakizashi or a quarterstaff for enclosed spaces.
Q2:
Lee and Gara was the best. the others had their place with Neji picking apart Hinata, naruto edging out the win with a fart against Kiba, and Temari showing that even with basic knowledge of Elemental manipulation training can stomp your opponent i.e. Tenten. IMO Ino and Sakura should have quit right before the preliminaries.
Bonus:
please allow Naruto to keep the sexy technique/ninja center-fold Naruko from; to change or alter how ever you like.
3/15/2022 c9 Ginzo
Hey just a quick one, right after Naruto introduces himself as Ryuji, in the next dialogue when Kurotsuchi is askhing him a question she should have said what do you think Ryuji rather than what do you think Naruto as she doesn't know that the real name is Naruto. Great story so far other than that keep up the momentum!
Hey just a quick one, right after Naruto introduces himself as Ryuji, in the next dialogue when Kurotsuchi is askhing him a question she should have said what do you think Ryuji rather than what do you think Naruto as she doesn't know that the real name is Naruto. Great story so far other than that keep up the momentum!
3/15/2022 c9 2Hiremsage00
First you have some grammar and story errors second a naruto with hinata and kurotsuchi as both his lovers I want to see. Finally maybe a spear and sword combo. Look at gilgamesh vs lancelot and that is my point.
2Hiremsage00First you have some grammar and story errors second a naruto with hinata and kurotsuchi as both his lovers I want to see. Finally maybe a spear and sword combo. Look at gilgamesh vs lancelot and that is my point.