for Naruto: The Leveling Shinobi8/27 c31 Herikliz
This chapter was simply epic! The intensity of the battle between Gai and Kisame was insane, especially when Gai unleashed the Inner Gates; it was grand and exhilarating! Plus, Tobi’s appearance was really cool, adding an extra layer of tension that made me absolutely thrilled! The feeling of helplessness that Naruto and Fuu experience at the end of the chapter was also very well portrayed. They, who are usually so confident and capable, suddenly find themselves confronted with the vast power gap that separates genin from the true monsters of the ninja world.
About the question: I read the other readers’ comments and I agree with Terracotta Tortilla; I think Naruto should have a subclass that focuses on tanking or regenerative abilities. I also agree with OFARiolu and auraarzadon07; I think he should learn fuinjutsu.
This chapter was simply epic! The intensity of the battle between Gai and Kisame was insane, especially when Gai unleashed the Inner Gates; it was grand and exhilarating! Plus, Tobi’s appearance was really cool, adding an extra layer of tension that made me absolutely thrilled! The feeling of helplessness that Naruto and Fuu experience at the end of the chapter was also very well portrayed. They, who are usually so confident and capable, suddenly find themselves confronted with the vast power gap that separates genin from the true monsters of the ninja world.
About the question: I read the other readers’ comments and I agree with Terracotta Tortilla; I think Naruto should have a subclass that focuses on tanking or regenerative abilities. I also agree with OFARiolu and auraarzadon07; I think he should learn fuinjutsu.
8/27 c31 auraarzadon07
Dear Author san.
Let him learn his Uzumaki's family side of Fuinjutsu and be able to sabotage Obito by disabling his capacity to teleport in and out.
Dear Author san.
Let him learn his Uzumaki's family side of Fuinjutsu and be able to sabotage Obito by disabling his capacity to teleport in and out.
8/27 c31 Terracotta Tortilla
Might want to make him a tank or regenerator, like canon. Dude boosted an entire army and fought for however long the war lasted, without rest...and then fought Sasuke who was boosted by all of the bijuu except Kurama. Our boy needs a class that can get remotely close to that level, otherwise this AU is gonna look like everyone is sandbagging. Tobi is already sandbagging and I'd imagine you've probably upgraded certain enemies for reasons or whatever, probably even included new ones in the form of expy villains.
Good chapter. Tobi hasn't simply destroyed all the villages in this story with his "nothing can touch me no jutsu" and his ability to make fire tornadoes for the same reason he didn't do so in canon, it'd be boring. Also, the random mention of a leader of the jinchuuriki from Fuu makes me think this AU has some changes, so it's useless to speculate.
Might want to make him a tank or regenerator, like canon. Dude boosted an entire army and fought for however long the war lasted, without rest...and then fought Sasuke who was boosted by all of the bijuu except Kurama. Our boy needs a class that can get remotely close to that level, otherwise this AU is gonna look like everyone is sandbagging. Tobi is already sandbagging and I'd imagine you've probably upgraded certain enemies for reasons or whatever, probably even included new ones in the form of expy villains.
Good chapter. Tobi hasn't simply destroyed all the villages in this story with his "nothing can touch me no jutsu" and his ability to make fire tornadoes for the same reason he didn't do so in canon, it'd be boring. Also, the random mention of a leader of the jinchuuriki from Fuu makes me think this AU has some changes, so it's useless to speculate.
8/27 c4 Cain
Necromancer is a trash class
Necromancer is a trash class
8/27 c31 TheInfiniteweeaboo
Subclass: Maelstrom of Hope
Overview:The Maelstrom of Hope is a subclass of the Necromancer, blending the destructive forces of chaos with the revitalizing energy of hope.
These necromancers have mastered channelling life and death in a whirlpool of conflicting energies.
They become a beacon of radiant chaos when they act, embodying the storm's fury and the calm after it. Their powers summon the dead and breathe life into their allies, spinning them into a vortex of unpredictable action.
Subclass: Maelstrom of Hope
Overview:The Maelstrom of Hope is a subclass of the Necromancer, blending the destructive forces of chaos with the revitalizing energy of hope.
These necromancers have mastered channelling life and death in a whirlpool of conflicting energies.
They become a beacon of radiant chaos when they act, embodying the storm's fury and the calm after it. Their powers summon the dead and breathe life into their allies, spinning them into a vortex of unpredictable action.
8/27 c31 TheInfiniteweeaboo
I think his sub class should be a mix of the words hope and chaos, a whirlpool of hopeful chaos that spins and bursts into action.
I think his sub class should be a mix of the words hope and chaos, a whirlpool of hopeful chaos that spins and bursts into action.
8/27 c31 borja.daconcepcion
I would probably say hunter, meaning that he is specialized in tracking down prey and preparing the ground to kill it. That is something he did with Pain and Kazuku. He took them to a terrain where he could defeat them.
You could give him the powers of Artemis, goddess of the hunt. Archery would be perfect for an army of clones.
I would probably say hunter, meaning that he is specialized in tracking down prey and preparing the ground to kill it. That is something he did with Pain and Kazuku. He took them to a terrain where he could defeat them.
You could give him the powers of Artemis, goddess of the hunt. Archery would be perfect for an army of clones.
8/27 c31 
4OFARiolu
Necromancer is the main class right? Maybe just a pure shadow user or work in kenjutsu? Lot of possibilities! Oh since he is a chuunin now maybe reveal his parentage and he takes up seals!
4OFARioluNecromancer is the main class right? Maybe just a pure shadow user or work in kenjutsu? Lot of possibilities! Oh since he is a chuunin now maybe reveal his parentage and he takes up seals!
8/25 c30 Uvuvwevwevwe Onyetenyevwe Ugwe
Yep pain are the best villain in naruto series. the second are itachi. at least they have believable background and cause. unlike obito, zetsu or even kaguya. obito is loser and simp
Yep pain are the best villain in naruto series. the second are itachi. at least they have believable background and cause. unlike obito, zetsu or even kaguya. obito is loser and simp