for Naruto: The Leveling Shinobi2/22/2022 c6 Lamont
1: Who would be the best person to summon after Haku?
Would any of the hokages be a option? Since Naruto wants to be hokage then who better to try to summon and maybe try to help train him.
2: What's your favorite arc in Naruto?
The chunin exams as it's our first look at the other Shinobi nations.
3: Naruto shippuden or original?
Shippuden as most of the main cast are properly trained by the time.
1: Who would be the best person to summon after Haku?
Would any of the hokages be a option? Since Naruto wants to be hokage then who better to try to summon and maybe try to help train him.
2: What's your favorite arc in Naruto?
The chunin exams as it's our first look at the other Shinobi nations.
3: Naruto shippuden or original?
Shippuden as most of the main cast are properly trained by the time.
2/22/2022 c6 Jowasut
Third Hokage as the next shadow, when he dies.
Honestly, i think it would be cooler to have the shadows not retain their personality and just have a small will of their own that obeys Naruto.
Then, once they reach a certain level of strength, they regain their ability to speak and whatnot.
But you do you
Third Hokage as the next shadow, when he dies.
Honestly, i think it would be cooler to have the shadows not retain their personality and just have a small will of their own that obeys Naruto.
Then, once they reach a certain level of strength, they regain their ability to speak and whatnot.
But you do you
2/22/2022 c6 Exodus12345
Hmm Chunin exams are coming unless you are doing the filler arcs. So there are lots of choices there. lots of people from Sand, Sound, and the Leaf die in the invasion. So lots of Chunin, and maybe some Jonin to grab if he wants. After that any of the sound four might be good. Also definetly get Kimimaro.
Hmm Chunin exams are coming unless you are doing the filler arcs. So there are lots of choices there. lots of people from Sand, Sound, and the Leaf die in the invasion. So lots of Chunin, and maybe some Jonin to grab if he wants. After that any of the sound four might be good. Also definetly get Kimimaro.
2/22/2022 c6 taiwoeretan1
Not really sure about the next person to summon. Favourite arc is definetly the pain arc. Naruto shippuden just cause almost everything about it was really good.
Not really sure about the next person to summon. Favourite arc is definetly the pain arc. Naruto shippuden just cause almost everything about it was really good.
2/22/2022 c6 
17Auren02
Best person after Haku? There is a lot of dead people in the Chunin exams. 3rd Hokage...hold on a minute. Can shadow extraction negate Reanimation Jutsu and can it be used on reanimation people cause then Madara could be a choice.
17Auren02Best person after Haku? There is a lot of dead people in the Chunin exams. 3rd Hokage...hold on a minute. Can shadow extraction negate Reanimation Jutsu and can it be used on reanimation people cause then Madara could be a choice.
2/22/2022 c6 Uchiha.Izuna602
Ummm... Just wanna ask if the hp and mp levels are gonna remain the same
Ummm... Just wanna ask if the hp and mp levels are gonna remain the same
2/22/2022 c6 10Uniquebooks
Keep up the amazing work.
From people that are dying, there was an examiner who died. His name is Hayate Gekko. Elsewise you could include the Naruto movies that aired.
My favorite Naruto Arc, in general, were the beginning stages, growing, developing, and seeing how the main cast learned in a group.
While Naruto Shippuden had amazing battles and showed the viewer the sheer might of the past Ninjas, for my taste, everything went down a little bit too fast.
10UniquebooksKeep up the amazing work.
From people that are dying, there was an examiner who died. His name is Hayate Gekko. Elsewise you could include the Naruto movies that aired.
My favorite Naruto Arc, in general, were the beginning stages, growing, developing, and seeing how the main cast learned in a group.
While Naruto Shippuden had amazing battles and showed the viewer the sheer might of the past Ninjas, for my taste, everything went down a little bit too fast.
2/22/2022 c6 6SeiferBoy
I know the perfect person for Naruto to summon! Mito Uzumaki! She can teach Naruto sealing, clan history and about the Uzumaki sealing chains!
6SeiferBoyI know the perfect person for Naruto to summon! Mito Uzumaki! She can teach Naruto sealing, clan history and about the Uzumaki sealing chains!
2/22/2022 c6 InnocentxPsycho
I vote for Tayuya and Kimimaro
I think any of the hokages would be to OP even if you lower level them
A maybe to Hayate and Kin or an animal from the forest of death
Maybe for later Kushina when naruto meets her or Rin when he is inside the 3 tails
I vote for Tayuya and Kimimaro
I think any of the hokages would be to OP even if you lower level them
A maybe to Hayate and Kin or an animal from the forest of death
Maybe for later Kushina when naruto meets her or Rin when he is inside the 3 tails
2/22/2022 c6 1StrangestQuark
Hmmmm, I have to wonder, is Shadow extraction summoning people according to the body they died in or their prime? If it's the 2nd it would be really cool to see prime Hiruzen in shadow form. Seeing as he fought 3 kage level shinobi to a standstill before his death he is probably the strongest non-reincarnation Konoha shinobi in the series with the only possible competition being Minato or Gai with full gates. On the other hand, Naruto trying and failing to summon him would be a really big character motivation moment...
Anyways, I enjoyed the chapter quite a bit, so thanks for sharing and update soon!
p.s.: original for writing Shippuden for story(too many fillers)
1StrangestQuarkHmmmm, I have to wonder, is Shadow extraction summoning people according to the body they died in or their prime? If it's the 2nd it would be really cool to see prime Hiruzen in shadow form. Seeing as he fought 3 kage level shinobi to a standstill before his death he is probably the strongest non-reincarnation Konoha shinobi in the series with the only possible competition being Minato or Gai with full gates. On the other hand, Naruto trying and failing to summon him would be a really big character motivation moment...
Anyways, I enjoyed the chapter quite a bit, so thanks for sharing and update soon!
p.s.: original for writing Shippuden for story(too many fillers)
2/20/2022 c5 RavenGreenePrince
Hey, I've just read the first five chapters of your fanfic and as someone who likes to write as well, I had some questions and things I noticed. Not to bring you down, or to be mean, but just things I noticed in general.
Firstly, the class and job thing, I wondered why you added both a class and a job seeing as both are often seen as the same thing. The only way I personally could see the two is if the class were combat-related and the job was the crafting kind of class like an artificer, blacksmith, alchemist, or maybe even a merchant.
Second I noticed that sometimes things seem to be missing from the status page, for example, you have Naruto his Shadow Clone Jutsu listed under skills but based on the story I assume he had multiple skills already.
Also with fighting scenes, you always show him actively activating the Uchiha Taijutsu style, while I can understand the need/want to show us he is using the skill and its costs, you could also simply list it as an active skill which simply has a message say [Uchiha Taijutsu Style Activated] and keep it at that. Or in the story like; "As Naruto got ready to fight he easily slipped into the Uchiha Taijutsu Style."
I hope I didn't come across as mean, as I definitely didn't want to, but these were just a number of things I noticed about the story. I genuinely do like where you're going with this and the idea behind it, I just believe it could use maybe some refinement.
Hey, I've just read the first five chapters of your fanfic and as someone who likes to write as well, I had some questions and things I noticed. Not to bring you down, or to be mean, but just things I noticed in general.
Firstly, the class and job thing, I wondered why you added both a class and a job seeing as both are often seen as the same thing. The only way I personally could see the two is if the class were combat-related and the job was the crafting kind of class like an artificer, blacksmith, alchemist, or maybe even a merchant.
Second I noticed that sometimes things seem to be missing from the status page, for example, you have Naruto his Shadow Clone Jutsu listed under skills but based on the story I assume he had multiple skills already.
Also with fighting scenes, you always show him actively activating the Uchiha Taijutsu style, while I can understand the need/want to show us he is using the skill and its costs, you could also simply list it as an active skill which simply has a message say [Uchiha Taijutsu Style Activated] and keep it at that. Or in the story like; "As Naruto got ready to fight he easily slipped into the Uchiha Taijutsu Style."
I hope I didn't come across as mean, as I definitely didn't want to, but these were just a number of things I noticed about the story. I genuinely do like where you're going with this and the idea behind it, I just believe it could use maybe some refinement.
2/19/2022 c5 Alcov
I’d say go for haku as no one important is around and the longer they are dead the harder it is. No one would be worth it any time soon.
I’d say go for haku as no one important is around and the longer they are dead the harder it is. No one would be worth it any time soon.
2/19/2022 c5 qqn
Merci pour les retouches sur ce chapitre. En ce qui concerne te deuxième question, j’ai personnellement un faible pour Shikamaru, et je trouve que son personnage n’est pas assez développé et utilisé en général...
Merci pour les retouches sur ce chapitre. En ce qui concerne te deuxième question, j’ai personnellement un faible pour Shikamaru, et je trouve que son personnage n’est pas assez développé et utilisé en général...