for Naruto: The Leveling Shinobi2/18/2022 c3 yahiro365
Solid chapter! Love your enthusiasm. It really comes through in your writing. I'm curious how far the uchiha taijutsu will go, and if Naruto will eventually combine a bunch together instead of just one style. Also curious to see what'll happen when he eventually gets better at it than sasuke and how thatll turn out for them.
Solid chapter! Love your enthusiasm. It really comes through in your writing. I'm curious how far the uchiha taijutsu will go, and if Naruto will eventually combine a bunch together instead of just one style. Also curious to see what'll happen when he eventually gets better at it than sasuke and how thatll turn out for them.
2/18/2022 c5 Jowasut
Hiruzen Sarutobi, Third Hokage as the second shadow.
Gives Naruto plenty of time to figure things out with the first shadow.
Hiruzen Sarutobi, Third Hokage as the second shadow.
Gives Naruto plenty of time to figure things out with the first shadow.
2/18/2022 c5 Guest
What about the first hokages wife, she can teach him how to be a real uzumaki with Fujutsu. The next option could be shisu uchiha who was itachi’s best friend. Maybe you can make it a theme that all the shadows he have are ninjas who lived in the darkside of the ninja world, so they teach him and protect him from being tainted by it.
What about the first hokages wife, she can teach him how to be a real uzumaki with Fujutsu. The next option could be shisu uchiha who was itachi’s best friend. Maybe you can make it a theme that all the shadows he have are ninjas who lived in the darkside of the ninja world, so they teach him and protect him from being tainted by it.
2/18/2022 c5 blazes207
Anyone you add would be op for Naruto because they can also teach him something as well. Solo level the shadow also keep all their knowledge as well.
To tell you the truth Naruto is op with out solo lvl power. The boy only need a mouth of real training and he was strong then anyone in the village
Anyone you add would be op for Naruto because they can also teach him something as well. Solo level the shadow also keep all their knowledge as well.
To tell you the truth Naruto is op with out solo lvl power. The boy only need a mouth of real training and he was strong then anyone in the village
2/17/2022 c5 Arezeoz
I think it only makes sense for Naruto to use Haku's shadow, I mean it's Naruto he would want to keep the people he likes around, It doesn't make much sense character wise that he choose Zabuza and leave Haku.
I think it only makes sense for Naruto to use Haku's shadow, I mean it's Naruto he would want to keep the people he likes around, It doesn't make much sense character wise that he choose Zabuza and leave Haku.
2/17/2022 c5 
4DaDragon562
I'm a bit disappointed how you handled things with the shadow at the end. I almost wish you'd picked Haku over Zabuza if you were going to only take one of them as a shadow for him. Also that will of fire mode comment makes no sense, it would fit better with haku because naruto knows she had devotion for zabuza because he saved her. naruto knows nothing about what zabuzas devotion or motivations were so him empathizing with his existence makes little sense.
Additionally, Zabuza being an OP foe that he couldn't beat on his own suddenly becoming his shadow feels like it makes Naruto too OP. At least he beat Haku even if its only thanks to kyuubi's chakra. Plus Haku was only level 16 and forces Naruto to grow, Zabuza is so high he can't even see his level.
4DaDragon562I'm a bit disappointed how you handled things with the shadow at the end. I almost wish you'd picked Haku over Zabuza if you were going to only take one of them as a shadow for him. Also that will of fire mode comment makes no sense, it would fit better with haku because naruto knows she had devotion for zabuza because he saved her. naruto knows nothing about what zabuzas devotion or motivations were so him empathizing with his existence makes little sense.
Additionally, Zabuza being an OP foe that he couldn't beat on his own suddenly becoming his shadow feels like it makes Naruto too OP. At least he beat Haku even if its only thanks to kyuubi's chakra. Plus Haku was only level 16 and forces Naruto to grow, Zabuza is so high he can't even see his level.
2/17/2022 c4 DaDragon562
Interesting chapter especially the water walking progress as well as the survival challenge. Was a bit disappointed at his performance, surviving for 12 seconds literally to lose to his presence was pretty piss poor.
Necromancer seems a bit forced even though you tried to make it stick. I think maybe arguing Naruto wants to protect his precious people and if he fails there necromancer allows him to save them from death and keep them with him would be a potential explanation, but in that sense a naruto who has suffered and lost someone, ie having the class change after haku dies may have made more sense (as perceptually sasuke died and then haku leaving two people close to naruto dead and him desiring to save them anyway he can)
Interesting chapter especially the water walking progress as well as the survival challenge. Was a bit disappointed at his performance, surviving for 12 seconds literally to lose to his presence was pretty piss poor.
Necromancer seems a bit forced even though you tried to make it stick. I think maybe arguing Naruto wants to protect his precious people and if he fails there necromancer allows him to save them from death and keep them with him would be a potential explanation, but in that sense a naruto who has suffered and lost someone, ie having the class change after haku dies may have made more sense (as perceptually sasuke died and then haku leaving two people close to naruto dead and him desiring to save them anyway he can)
2/17/2022 c3 DaDragon562
Good chapter, I like the altered Zabuza entry
Guessing the skill he gets at end of this arc is his shadow summoning class that lets him resurrect zabuza/haku
Good chapter, I like the altered Zabuza entry
Guessing the skill he gets at end of this arc is his shadow summoning class that lets him resurrect zabuza/haku
2/17/2022 c2 DaDragon562
Interesting way of handling things, I like how naruto is raising his respect while growing, and still failing on these stretch goals like prodigy quest
I really liked him using Shikamaru as a way to guide him howto move forward
Interesting way of handling things, I like how naruto is raising his respect while growing, and still failing on these stretch goals like prodigy quest
I really liked him using Shikamaru as a way to guide him howto move forward
2/17/2022 c3 Dash6217
I would say katana or a sword. Also, can you make Naruto a sealing master and no sealing does need calligraphy to draw seals but you can also mold them like chakra it just the molding ones would A require more chakra which Naruto should almost never run out and B they may not last as long as painting/drawing it with calligraphy.
Madara is the best villian
I would say katana or a sword. Also, can you make Naruto a sealing master and no sealing does need calligraphy to draw seals but you can also mold them like chakra it just the molding ones would A require more chakra which Naruto should almost never run out and B they may not last as long as painting/drawing it with calligraphy.
Madara is the best villian
2/17/2022 c2 Dash6217
Love the story so far in all honesty though please no Hinata Sakura, or Ino. They are all quite shallow when it comes to their 'love' for people. I would suggest more than 1 love interest for Naruto which would probably fit him quite decently would be Tayuya (make part Uzumaki), Haku, or/and Hanabi(make her younger than Naruto than one year and more like her Baruto counterpart) for cannon but non-cannon and if you are going for Naruto being the last Uzumaki with politics I suggest Shion, Saara, and/or Shion. Also, if you go on the harem route no more than 7.
Chakra nature wind is great maybe give him water too since it would since Naruto personality in free going like the wind and as deep as water and the more you find out the darker he is on the inside as seen with Yami Naruto. I also suggest getting Naruto to stop wanting to be Hokage since the only thing he ever wanted was love thus being a Hokage is useless to him once that happens.
I hate Sakura fans and could honestly care less about Sakura. Please don't focus on her please there really isn't anything she can do for the team but slow them down. Second, Naruto's luck stat should be extremely high, he has luck all the time.
Love the story so far in all honesty though please no Hinata Sakura, or Ino. They are all quite shallow when it comes to their 'love' for people. I would suggest more than 1 love interest for Naruto which would probably fit him quite decently would be Tayuya (make part Uzumaki), Haku, or/and Hanabi(make her younger than Naruto than one year and more like her Baruto counterpart) for cannon but non-cannon and if you are going for Naruto being the last Uzumaki with politics I suggest Shion, Saara, and/or Shion. Also, if you go on the harem route no more than 7.
Chakra nature wind is great maybe give him water too since it would since Naruto personality in free going like the wind and as deep as water and the more you find out the darker he is on the inside as seen with Yami Naruto. I also suggest getting Naruto to stop wanting to be Hokage since the only thing he ever wanted was love thus being a Hokage is useless to him once that happens.
I hate Sakura fans and could honestly care less about Sakura. Please don't focus on her please there really isn't anything she can do for the team but slow them down. Second, Naruto's luck stat should be extremely high, he has luck all the time.
2/17/2022 c5 qqn
J'aime beaucoup ta fic pour l'instant et j'ai hâte de lire la suite ! Pour ce qui est de la deuxième ombre de Naruto le premier nom qui m'est venue à l'esprit (autre que Haku du coup) c'est Kimimaro du clan Kaguya... En tout cas j'attends avec impatience la suite parce que j'aime bien le genre de fiction où Naruto est un gamer mais il y en a peu que je trouve vraiment réussite!
J'aime beaucoup ta fic pour l'instant et j'ai hâte de lire la suite ! Pour ce qui est de la deuxième ombre de Naruto le premier nom qui m'est venue à l'esprit (autre que Haku du coup) c'est Kimimaro du clan Kaguya... En tout cas j'attends avec impatience la suite parce que j'aime bien le genre de fiction où Naruto est un gamer mais il y en a peu que je trouve vraiment réussite!
2/16/2022 c5 2LightSpecter141
Question 1: I'd prefer Nagato.
Question 2: Hope I'm not being too farfetched here but perhaps you can explore either Hinata or her sister, Hanabi. Specifically, what if either one of them also acquires the Gamer ability but in such a way as to use and be skilled in firearms?
2LightSpecter141Question 1: I'd prefer Nagato.
Question 2: Hope I'm not being too farfetched here but perhaps you can explore either Hinata or her sister, Hanabi. Specifically, what if either one of them also acquires the Gamer ability but in such a way as to use and be skilled in firearms?