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8/27 c31 blackicethunder
Should give Naruto the summoner class, but not personal summons more like armies of the already shown summon clans
8/27 c31 soniclord100
is summoner a choice for subclass?
8/27 c31 1AlphaShenron
To answer question 1; Naruto as a fighter really exemplifies two traits, battle tactics and being an absolute tank. Naruto is simply so hard to put down or tag in his fights that he is able to eventually come up with a plan, or simply wait for reinforcements, before he losing. He uses misdirection with his clones and transformations and when they don't cut it his natural healing and sturdiness allow him to stay in the fight far longer than normal and that isn't even counting Kuruma. His necromancy class abilities have mostly been using the summons for their gear and abilities, not the actual summon itself. Naruto's subclass could be that of a necromancer who gains skills/attributes/abilities of the person they summon. Zabuza and Haku's water affinities would be added onto Naruto's own as well as certain skills of theirs like water jutsu as well as their signature techniques. Zabuza's kenjutsu would pair well with Naruto's own and I can only imagine trying to add Kukiribocho to the 7-sword fighting style.

Question 2 is mostly due to they thought of Obito's abilities too late in the story to use it, but as a back end explanation it seems to be arrogance. Obito isn't the one getting his hands dirty except in the cases of killing his clan with Itachi and fucking over the Hidden Mist with Yagura. That childhood laziness of his has morphed into arrogant sloth, which is why he prefers to fight using proxies. That's my opinion at least.

Can't wait to read more! See you next week.
8/27 c31 Guest
Hello, does everyone just forget that Obito and Zetsu had an easy time spying on Minato using the reaper death seal on the kyuubi, splitting it in half and putting a far stronger seal on Naruto than what Kushina has? The reason Obito never personally went after Naruto again, is because it likely just wouldn't have worked until Naruto himself weakened and opened the seal. Kushina's seal could be opened because it a single four trigrams seal on her stomach, and she just gave birth. Naruto's seal is an eight trigrams seal, reinforced by the God of Death. The partially reawakened Juubi had to ensnare the Kyuubi to properly absorb it, and by then the legendary Uzumaki seal was opened. Obito couldn't risk nabbing the Kyuubi again because the reaper death seal was likely to just Perma-kill the Kyuubi.
8/27 c31 Uvuvwevwevwe Onyetenyevwe Ugwe
Subclass wraith. wraith are soulless creatures and only feel devastating emotions like hatred and despair. They are a type of ghost, but can also be considered to be a type of demon. wraith can dissappear using their transparency, sucking spirits or emotions to restore oneself magic power, flying with smokeless substance, etc. usually the appearance of wraith create cold surroundings and force people to relieve their worst memories
8/27 c31 Alexander4443
Good chapter
8/27 c31 The Jabberwock of OZ
1 considering Naruto has some weird abilities so far
Timing based attacks, necromancy, fighting abilities based on his MP, and his DnD abilities
Maybe he should have something Again out of left field
Actually Maybe he should have a talk with the 9 Tails.
He is considering having Necromancy being a result of the Kyubi, maybe there should be a conversation between them discussing that.

2.
WHY doesn't Tobi just nab the Biju?
I think it was explained in manga that Tobi was slowly making the Nation's fight and weaken each other so that the eventual stealing and take over would be easier.
Taking the Biju now would probably work for the plan, but would have more speed bumps for the plan
8/27 c31 Herikliz
This chapter was simply epic! The intensity of the battle between Gai and Kisame was insane, especially when Gai unleashed the Inner Gates; it was grand and exhilarating! Plus, Tobi’s appearance was really cool, adding an extra layer of tension that made me absolutely thrilled! The feeling of helplessness that Naruto and Fuu experience at the end of the chapter was also very well portrayed. They, who are usually so confident and capable, suddenly find themselves confronted with the vast power gap that separates genin from the true monsters of the ninja world.

About the question: I read the other readers’ comments and I agree with Terracotta Tortilla; I think Naruto should have a subclass that focuses on tanking or regenerative abilities. I also agree with OFARiolu and auraarzadon07; I think he should learn fuinjutsu.
8/27 c31 auraarzadon07
Dear Author san.
Let him learn his Uzumaki's family side of Fuinjutsu and be able to sabotage Obito by disabling his capacity to teleport in and out.
8/27 c31 Terracotta Tortilla
Might want to make him a tank or regenerator, like canon. Dude boosted an entire army and fought for however long the war lasted, without rest...and then fought Sasuke who was boosted by all of the bijuu except Kurama. Our boy needs a class that can get remotely close to that level, otherwise this AU is gonna look like everyone is sandbagging. Tobi is already sandbagging and I'd imagine you've probably upgraded certain enemies for reasons or whatever, probably even included new ones in the form of expy villains.

Good chapter. Tobi hasn't simply destroyed all the villages in this story with his "nothing can touch me no jutsu" and his ability to make fire tornadoes for the same reason he didn't do so in canon, it'd be boring. Also, the random mention of a leader of the jinchuuriki from Fuu makes me think this AU has some changes, so it's useless to speculate.
8/27 c31 naruto the heaven demon
Great. As always no pair, no harem , no leaving konoha
8/27 c4 Cain
Necromancer is a trash class
8/27 c31 TheInfiniteweeaboo
Subclass: Maelstrom of Hope

Overview:The Maelstrom of Hope is a subclass of the Necromancer, blending the destructive forces of chaos with the revitalizing energy of hope.

These necromancers have mastered channelling life and death in a whirlpool of conflicting energies.

They become a beacon of radiant chaos when they act, embodying the storm's fury and the calm after it. Their powers summon the dead and breathe life into their allies, spinning them into a vortex of unpredictable action.
8/27 c31 ThisIsStorm101
Nice chapter
8/27 c31 TheInfiniteweeaboo
I think his sub class should be a mix of the words hope and chaos, a whirlpool of hopeful chaos that spins and bursts into action.
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