
2/22/2022 c6 taiwoeretan1
Not really sure about the next person to summon. Favourite arc is definetly the pain arc. Naruto shippuden just cause almost everything about it was really good.
Not really sure about the next person to summon. Favourite arc is definetly the pain arc. Naruto shippuden just cause almost everything about it was really good.
2/22/2022 c6
17Auren02
Best person after Haku? There is a lot of dead people in the Chunin exams. 3rd Hokage...hold on a minute. Can shadow extraction negate Reanimation Jutsu and can it be used on reanimation people cause then Madara could be a choice.

Best person after Haku? There is a lot of dead people in the Chunin exams. 3rd Hokage...hold on a minute. Can shadow extraction negate Reanimation Jutsu and can it be used on reanimation people cause then Madara could be a choice.
2/22/2022 c6 Uchiha.Izuna602
Ummm... Just wanna ask if the hp and mp levels are gonna remain the same
Ummm... Just wanna ask if the hp and mp levels are gonna remain the same
2/22/2022 c6
10Uniquebooks
Keep up the amazing work.
From people that are dying, there was an examiner who died. His name is Hayate Gekko. Elsewise you could include the Naruto movies that aired.
My favorite Naruto Arc, in general, were the beginning stages, growing, developing, and seeing how the main cast learned in a group.
While Naruto Shippuden had amazing battles and showed the viewer the sheer might of the past Ninjas, for my taste, everything went down a little bit too fast.

Keep up the amazing work.
From people that are dying, there was an examiner who died. His name is Hayate Gekko. Elsewise you could include the Naruto movies that aired.
My favorite Naruto Arc, in general, were the beginning stages, growing, developing, and seeing how the main cast learned in a group.
While Naruto Shippuden had amazing battles and showed the viewer the sheer might of the past Ninjas, for my taste, everything went down a little bit too fast.
2/22/2022 c6
6SeiferBoy
I know the perfect person for Naruto to summon! Mito Uzumaki! She can teach Naruto sealing, clan history and about the Uzumaki sealing chains!

I know the perfect person for Naruto to summon! Mito Uzumaki! She can teach Naruto sealing, clan history and about the Uzumaki sealing chains!
2/22/2022 c6 InnocentxPsycho
I vote for Tayuya and Kimimaro
I think any of the hokages would be to OP even if you lower level them
A maybe to Hayate and Kin or an animal from the forest of death
Maybe for later Kushina when naruto meets her or Rin when he is inside the 3 tails
I vote for Tayuya and Kimimaro
I think any of the hokages would be to OP even if you lower level them
A maybe to Hayate and Kin or an animal from the forest of death
Maybe for later Kushina when naruto meets her or Rin when he is inside the 3 tails
2/22/2022 c6
1StrangestQuark
Hmmmm, I have to wonder, is Shadow extraction summoning people according to the body they died in or their prime? If it's the 2nd it would be really cool to see prime Hiruzen in shadow form. Seeing as he fought 3 kage level shinobi to a standstill before his death he is probably the strongest non-reincarnation Konoha shinobi in the series with the only possible competition being Minato or Gai with full gates. On the other hand, Naruto trying and failing to summon him would be a really big character motivation moment...
Anyways, I enjoyed the chapter quite a bit, so thanks for sharing and update soon!
p.s.: original for writing Shippuden for story(too many fillers)

Hmmmm, I have to wonder, is Shadow extraction summoning people according to the body they died in or their prime? If it's the 2nd it would be really cool to see prime Hiruzen in shadow form. Seeing as he fought 3 kage level shinobi to a standstill before his death he is probably the strongest non-reincarnation Konoha shinobi in the series with the only possible competition being Minato or Gai with full gates. On the other hand, Naruto trying and failing to summon him would be a really big character motivation moment...
Anyways, I enjoyed the chapter quite a bit, so thanks for sharing and update soon!
p.s.: original for writing Shippuden for story(too many fillers)
2/20/2022 c5 RavenGreenePrince
Hey, I've just read the first five chapters of your fanfic and as someone who likes to write as well, I had some questions and things I noticed. Not to bring you down, or to be mean, but just things I noticed in general.
Firstly, the class and job thing, I wondered why you added both a class and a job seeing as both are often seen as the same thing. The only way I personally could see the two is if the class were combat-related and the job was the crafting kind of class like an artificer, blacksmith, alchemist, or maybe even a merchant.
Second I noticed that sometimes things seem to be missing from the status page, for example, you have Naruto his Shadow Clone Jutsu listed under skills but based on the story I assume he had multiple skills already.
Also with fighting scenes, you always show him actively activating the Uchiha Taijutsu style, while I can understand the need/want to show us he is using the skill and its costs, you could also simply list it as an active skill which simply has a message say [Uchiha Taijutsu Style Activated] and keep it at that. Or in the story like; "As Naruto got ready to fight he easily slipped into the Uchiha Taijutsu Style."
I hope I didn't come across as mean, as I definitely didn't want to, but these were just a number of things I noticed about the story. I genuinely do like where you're going with this and the idea behind it, I just believe it could use maybe some refinement.
Hey, I've just read the first five chapters of your fanfic and as someone who likes to write as well, I had some questions and things I noticed. Not to bring you down, or to be mean, but just things I noticed in general.
Firstly, the class and job thing, I wondered why you added both a class and a job seeing as both are often seen as the same thing. The only way I personally could see the two is if the class were combat-related and the job was the crafting kind of class like an artificer, blacksmith, alchemist, or maybe even a merchant.
Second I noticed that sometimes things seem to be missing from the status page, for example, you have Naruto his Shadow Clone Jutsu listed under skills but based on the story I assume he had multiple skills already.
Also with fighting scenes, you always show him actively activating the Uchiha Taijutsu style, while I can understand the need/want to show us he is using the skill and its costs, you could also simply list it as an active skill which simply has a message say [Uchiha Taijutsu Style Activated] and keep it at that. Or in the story like; "As Naruto got ready to fight he easily slipped into the Uchiha Taijutsu Style."
I hope I didn't come across as mean, as I definitely didn't want to, but these were just a number of things I noticed about the story. I genuinely do like where you're going with this and the idea behind it, I just believe it could use maybe some refinement.
2/19/2022 c5 Alcov
I’d say go for haku as no one important is around and the longer they are dead the harder it is. No one would be worth it any time soon.
I’d say go for haku as no one important is around and the longer they are dead the harder it is. No one would be worth it any time soon.
2/19/2022 c5 qqn
Merci pour les retouches sur ce chapitre. En ce qui concerne te deuxième question, j’ai personnellement un faible pour Shikamaru, et je trouve que son personnage n’est pas assez développé et utilisé en général...
Merci pour les retouches sur ce chapitre. En ce qui concerne te deuxième question, j’ai personnellement un faible pour Shikamaru, et je trouve que son personnage n’est pas assez développé et utilisé en général...
2/19/2022 c5 JFalcon-TM
Shouldn't he become loyal upon becoming a shadow? In Solo Leveling, most human shadows would see the host as their king and even lose part of their personality. Can't imagine any of them calling him a 'brat.' Unless you've changed the ability's mechanics for your story.
Shouldn't he become loyal upon becoming a shadow? In Solo Leveling, most human shadows would see the host as their king and even lose part of their personality. Can't imagine any of them calling him a 'brat.' Unless you've changed the ability's mechanics for your story.
2/18/2022 c5 deniswanheda
Me gustaría q explotaras más el personaje de hinata, posible pareja de Naruto
Otra sombra podría ser Izumi ( la novia de itachi), o gato mismo, ( tener a alguien que sabe el lado oscuro del comercio y la política, el sub mundo criminal,y además de como hacer dinero le ayudaría mucho además de que el nivel no sería problema para Naruto
Me gustaría q explotaras más el personaje de hinata, posible pareja de Naruto
Otra sombra podría ser Izumi ( la novia de itachi), o gato mismo, ( tener a alguien que sabe el lado oscuro del comercio y la política, el sub mundo criminal,y además de como hacer dinero le ayudaría mucho además de que el nivel no sería problema para Naruto
2/18/2022 c4 yahiro365
Lmao Necro in the Naruto universe? This should be interesting. I can already see the invasion arc being cracked now. Orochimaru shows up and spawns his dudes and then Naruto's like "sup, I can do that too!"
That should be good fun!
Lmao Necro in the Naruto universe? This should be interesting. I can already see the invasion arc being cracked now. Orochimaru shows up and spawns his dudes and then Naruto's like "sup, I can do that too!"
That should be good fun!
2/18/2022 c3 yahiro365
Solid chapter! Love your enthusiasm. It really comes through in your writing. I'm curious how far the uchiha taijutsu will go, and if Naruto will eventually combine a bunch together instead of just one style. Also curious to see what'll happen when he eventually gets better at it than sasuke and how thatll turn out for them.
Solid chapter! Love your enthusiasm. It really comes through in your writing. I'm curious how far the uchiha taijutsu will go, and if Naruto will eventually combine a bunch together instead of just one style. Also curious to see what'll happen when he eventually gets better at it than sasuke and how thatll turn out for them.