for Naruto: The Leveling Shinobi1/29/2022 c2 JRZTT1246
Pairing I preferred genfic but Hinata is fine with me, absolutely no harem and no Anko and Tsunade or any character above 20 please, felt like pedo wanna eat young children.
Nature, sure why not with gamer it's possible for him to have all
I dislike her at 1st for physically abuse Naruto but I'm neutral toward her now, but not as Naruto lover though
Pairing I preferred genfic but Hinata is fine with me, absolutely no harem and no Anko and Tsunade or any character above 20 please, felt like pedo wanna eat young children.
Nature, sure why not with gamer it's possible for him to have all
I dislike her at 1st for physically abuse Naruto but I'm neutral toward her now, but not as Naruto lover though
1/29/2022 c2 
2TheWriterOfVoid
Great chapter! I hope Naruto doesn't lose too much of his personality in the process and that he can stay true to his roots. :)
2TheWriterOfVoidGreat chapter! I hope Naruto doesn't lose too much of his personality in the process and that he can stay true to his roots. :)
1/27/2022 c2 Guest
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1/27/2022 c1 Guest
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1/27/2022 c1 8ScepticalOne
Alright, I feel like the website ate my first review so I'll reiterate it here: I think you're already surpassing a lot of other Naruto fic's simply based on how in character everyone is. Most people exaggerate the more negative qualities of characters or start them out with their Shippuden versions, but everything you've written has been something I can honestly see the characters at this time doing. So kudo's for that alone.
Pairing is a tough one, I'm the type of person who's down for just about anything, so while I'm going to try and make a case for all the girls I can think of, my vote is for whatever you feel is most natural with the type of story you want to tell.
1st up, Sakura:. She's got proximity to Naruto going for her in terms of building up a romantic interest. The biggest problem is her devotion towards Sasuke, which could be used for an arc of her trying to sort out her feelings if you pick her.
2nd up, Hinata. She's probably the easiest to justify beyond them being on different teams, Hinata already has feelings for Naruto and just needs to work up the courage to ask him out, after that it's up to Naruto to realize what's going on.
3rd, Ino. Take what I said about Sakura, and remove the proximity bonus.
4th, Ten Ten. She's basically a blank slate. Thats all I can really say for her.
5th, Karin. With the Chunin exams it could be very easy for Naruto to make the same impression on her Sasuke did, which will put her in a similar camp as Hinata. The biggest hurdle after that is getting Karin in the leaf, which can be the groundwork for some political machinations.
6th Tayuya. Tayuya is probably the most difficult to justify of the gals in Narutos age range. The only thing I can really see going for her (beyond a redemption arc) is the fact she may be an Uzumaki. Tayuya being captured by the leaf and ending up as a war bride for Naruto due to clan reasons is probably the easiest way that could start.
7th Haku. Either the second most difficult girl, or most difficult boy depending on how you spin things. Regardless, Haku is probably the easiest villain to pair Naruto with since they had a fairly strong connection during their brief time together, and both can empathize with the others past.
As for people outside of Naruto's age group, I think Anko would be an interesting option. She's able to empathize with Naruto on being an outcast and bearing a cursed mark. But she's twice his age so that's a bit of a problem.
Same for about any other female I can think of, but I believe I've made my point.
Now for the chapter 2 questions:
#1 I'd be fine with Naruto getting a second element, but not if it means you'll be giving him a combination release like Ice or Blaze. I'm not fond o that trope in fanfiction, although a Gamer is probably the only path I would be willing to accept it.
#2 Sakura is wasted potential, both in the actual story of Naruto and how far too many authors write or bash her out of plot relevance. She's the only one of the rookie 9 who can give any insight into the normal life of the leaf since she's the only non-ninja clan one of them. I feel like she gets too much hate in fanfiction. As for an actual favorite in Fanfiction, I would have to say it's the Naruto in "Naruto: Strings and Theory", simply because I think that is a good edgy Naruto that's done right.
Anyways, great chapter! keep up the good work!
8ScepticalOneAlright, I feel like the website ate my first review so I'll reiterate it here: I think you're already surpassing a lot of other Naruto fic's simply based on how in character everyone is. Most people exaggerate the more negative qualities of characters or start them out with their Shippuden versions, but everything you've written has been something I can honestly see the characters at this time doing. So kudo's for that alone.
Pairing is a tough one, I'm the type of person who's down for just about anything, so while I'm going to try and make a case for all the girls I can think of, my vote is for whatever you feel is most natural with the type of story you want to tell.
1st up, Sakura:. She's got proximity to Naruto going for her in terms of building up a romantic interest. The biggest problem is her devotion towards Sasuke, which could be used for an arc of her trying to sort out her feelings if you pick her.
2nd up, Hinata. She's probably the easiest to justify beyond them being on different teams, Hinata already has feelings for Naruto and just needs to work up the courage to ask him out, after that it's up to Naruto to realize what's going on.
3rd, Ino. Take what I said about Sakura, and remove the proximity bonus.
4th, Ten Ten. She's basically a blank slate. Thats all I can really say for her.
5th, Karin. With the Chunin exams it could be very easy for Naruto to make the same impression on her Sasuke did, which will put her in a similar camp as Hinata. The biggest hurdle after that is getting Karin in the leaf, which can be the groundwork for some political machinations.
6th Tayuya. Tayuya is probably the most difficult to justify of the gals in Narutos age range. The only thing I can really see going for her (beyond a redemption arc) is the fact she may be an Uzumaki. Tayuya being captured by the leaf and ending up as a war bride for Naruto due to clan reasons is probably the easiest way that could start.
7th Haku. Either the second most difficult girl, or most difficult boy depending on how you spin things. Regardless, Haku is probably the easiest villain to pair Naruto with since they had a fairly strong connection during their brief time together, and both can empathize with the others past.
As for people outside of Naruto's age group, I think Anko would be an interesting option. She's able to empathize with Naruto on being an outcast and bearing a cursed mark. But she's twice his age so that's a bit of a problem.
Same for about any other female I can think of, but I believe I've made my point.
Now for the chapter 2 questions:
#1 I'd be fine with Naruto getting a second element, but not if it means you'll be giving him a combination release like Ice or Blaze. I'm not fond o that trope in fanfiction, although a Gamer is probably the only path I would be willing to accept it.
#2 Sakura is wasted potential, both in the actual story of Naruto and how far too many authors write or bash her out of plot relevance. She's the only one of the rookie 9 who can give any insight into the normal life of the leaf since she's the only non-ninja clan one of them. I feel like she gets too much hate in fanfiction. As for an actual favorite in Fanfiction, I would have to say it's the Naruto in "Naruto: Strings and Theory", simply because I think that is a good edgy Naruto that's done right.
Anyways, great chapter! keep up the good work!
1/27/2022 c2 m o r e
...gimme more ;-;
...gimme more ;-;
1/27/2022 c2 Blue Amateur
One vote for the Ino pairing.
Sakura is fine so long as you don't make her a caricature of herself where she belittles Naruto or is unreasonable for no reason.
Your Sasuke is already more human than most, so I am sure your Sakura will end up fine.
Your Naruto has to be better than canon Naruto by a lot.
You might not want him to be OP, but if he struggles in the same manner as he did in canon, the continuity of your story goes out the window.
He doesn't have to be able to beat Orochimaru during the Chunin Exam, but there is absolutely no reason for him to struggle against the likes of Kiba, Neji or any other person his age beyond maybe Gaara or Lee.
One vote for the Ino pairing.
Sakura is fine so long as you don't make her a caricature of herself where she belittles Naruto or is unreasonable for no reason.
Your Sasuke is already more human than most, so I am sure your Sakura will end up fine.
Your Naruto has to be better than canon Naruto by a lot.
You might not want him to be OP, but if he struggles in the same manner as he did in canon, the continuity of your story goes out the window.
He doesn't have to be able to beat Orochimaru during the Chunin Exam, but there is absolutely no reason for him to struggle against the likes of Kiba, Neji or any other person his age beyond maybe Gaara or Lee.
1/27/2022 c2 5cg037
A nice update, keep up the good work.
I guess I would like it to be a Naruto X Yugito paring.
I'm not the biggest fan of Sakura, mostly because she always hits Naruto for everything she doesn't agree with him on but when Sasuke says the same or agrees with what Naruto said she praises him. And I know that Sakura is supposed to be a tsundare, but wouldn't it be the one she loves she acts like a tsun and dare towards. She shouldn't only be a dare towards Sasuke, she should mostly use her tsun part of her tsundare personality on Sasuke as well. Unless I have misunderstood it. But yes, I do not like Sakura, especially early Sakura. She becomes okayish after the three-year time-skip, but that is about it.
My favorite character in Naruto-fanfiction is Female Naruto/Naruko/Naru.
5cg037A nice update, keep up the good work.
I guess I would like it to be a Naruto X Yugito paring.
I'm not the biggest fan of Sakura, mostly because she always hits Naruto for everything she doesn't agree with him on but when Sasuke says the same or agrees with what Naruto said she praises him. And I know that Sakura is supposed to be a tsundare, but wouldn't it be the one she loves she acts like a tsun and dare towards. She shouldn't only be a dare towards Sasuke, she should mostly use her tsun part of her tsundare personality on Sasuke as well. Unless I have misunderstood it. But yes, I do not like Sakura, especially early Sakura. She becomes okayish after the three-year time-skip, but that is about it.
My favorite character in Naruto-fanfiction is Female Naruto/Naruko/Naru.
1/26/2022 c2 Koncor the great
1. Depending on the out come and ship if you're keeping the sauske foil angle water it strengthens lighting but is strong to fire making naruto and sauske warped reflections of each other. But if you ship say haku in any way I'm a fan of scorch release as the dynamic opposite of ice release making them synergies in being opposing forces that are at their strongest together. But generally wind is a offensive element and earth would be the best in a general rule to filter naruto though balancing.
2. Not a fan of sakura sorry I'm anamie fan and honestly it's only really been brought to my attention that the anamie adaptation is drastically different from the manga so I'm working on trying to not see her best application for use to be a mayter of how not taking the job seriously leads to bad ends and honestly I still to this day refuse to accept haku as a male to say that kisamodo has one well written female character what's more logistically theres a lot of potential reason for a fem haku to try and pass as a male.
3. Tayuya is still my number 1 pick for ship theres a lot of potential for her character structure even if it's purely for the fact that theres a mostly blank slate with a lot of potential implications. But like I said I ship ino and naruto pretty hard because everything ino likes in sakura is in naruto and naruto and ino are similar to each other.
Ever read hunter X hunter I think a restriction system would really make this pop imposing restrictions and prices to improve powers and gain abilities.
1. Depending on the out come and ship if you're keeping the sauske foil angle water it strengthens lighting but is strong to fire making naruto and sauske warped reflections of each other. But if you ship say haku in any way I'm a fan of scorch release as the dynamic opposite of ice release making them synergies in being opposing forces that are at their strongest together. But generally wind is a offensive element and earth would be the best in a general rule to filter naruto though balancing.
2. Not a fan of sakura sorry I'm anamie fan and honestly it's only really been brought to my attention that the anamie adaptation is drastically different from the manga so I'm working on trying to not see her best application for use to be a mayter of how not taking the job seriously leads to bad ends and honestly I still to this day refuse to accept haku as a male to say that kisamodo has one well written female character what's more logistically theres a lot of potential reason for a fem haku to try and pass as a male.
3. Tayuya is still my number 1 pick for ship theres a lot of potential for her character structure even if it's purely for the fact that theres a mostly blank slate with a lot of potential implications. But like I said I ship ino and naruto pretty hard because everything ino likes in sakura is in naruto and naruto and ino are similar to each other.
Ever read hunter X hunter I think a restriction system would really make this pop imposing restrictions and prices to improve powers and gain abilities.
1/26/2022 c2 blacktarask
If you go to add a chakra nature. Generally water is used because 1. Naruto is an uzumakiso a water affinity is expected and 2. Haku and Zabusa make a great opportunity to learn jutsu in the beginning.
Apart from that, fire and thunder or not overly used because of sasuke so I would like to see what can you do with a fire or thunder attuned naruto.
Personnally, I don't like the original Sakura but I do like her in most fanfic.
If you go to add a chakra nature. Generally water is used because 1. Naruto is an uzumakiso a water affinity is expected and 2. Haku and Zabusa make a great opportunity to learn jutsu in the beginning.
Apart from that, fire and thunder or not overly used because of sasuke so I would like to see what can you do with a fire or thunder attuned naruto.
Personnally, I don't like the original Sakura but I do like her in most fanfic.
1/26/2022 c2 Maaz Khalid Qureshi
well for additional chakra nature I would like to see water and if can add a third one; lightning. you know the final result to be god of sky and ocean thing. for pairing I would like naruto/hinata if you can write it in a new or unique way that would be preferable but if you cant then I would settle for traditional naruhina
well for additional chakra nature I would like to see water and if can add a third one; lightning. you know the final result to be god of sky and ocean thing. for pairing I would like naruto/hinata if you can write it in a new or unique way that would be preferable but if you cant then I would settle for traditional naruhina
1/25/2022 c1 2Chrisfragger
You doing Naruto and Solo Leveling in a Crossover... I'm sold! I can't wait to read this.
2ChrisfraggerYou doing Naruto and Solo Leveling in a Crossover... I'm sold! I can't wait to read this.
1/25/2022 c2 darthjosh2112
Wind Lightning and Fire. Tri affinity. Pairings would love Harem Route but if i had to make a list 1 Anko 2 Tsume or Hana (kinda interchangeable because both are Inzuka woman just 1 is more bad ass and the other has 3 dogs and is a Veterinarian) 3 Temari, those would be my top 3 choices. Reasons : For Anko because she gets a shit hand and Iruka kinda sucks. His character has so many plot holes its ridiculous. Both of then thrown together just because 0/10. But Naruto understands her pain, and they could lift each other out of the darkness. The whole naruto helps her with her mark is kinda cliche but its still believable since naruto is a uzumaki and they are Fūinjutsu experts it should of been taught to him at some point since both parenrs were experts but looking back it seems like everyone was dead set on making him a leashed dog that has very few tricks and can only blunt force everything. Tsume and Hana because quite literally not much shown about them except for a small bit here and there so easily explorable characters while at the same time having some bad ass woman in Narutos life helping and guiding him. Granted he could grow with bad ass woman his own age but older women would help him Mature faster than with a girl his age. Now Temari just a nice thought because naruto saved her brother and is highly intelligent herself and a hard worker would help Naruto grow and help him improve.
Wind Lightning and Fire. Tri affinity. Pairings would love Harem Route but if i had to make a list 1 Anko 2 Tsume or Hana (kinda interchangeable because both are Inzuka woman just 1 is more bad ass and the other has 3 dogs and is a Veterinarian) 3 Temari, those would be my top 3 choices. Reasons : For Anko because she gets a shit hand and Iruka kinda sucks. His character has so many plot holes its ridiculous. Both of then thrown together just because 0/10. But Naruto understands her pain, and they could lift each other out of the darkness. The whole naruto helps her with her mark is kinda cliche but its still believable since naruto is a uzumaki and they are Fūinjutsu experts it should of been taught to him at some point since both parenrs were experts but looking back it seems like everyone was dead set on making him a leashed dog that has very few tricks and can only blunt force everything. Tsume and Hana because quite literally not much shown about them except for a small bit here and there so easily explorable characters while at the same time having some bad ass woman in Narutos life helping and guiding him. Granted he could grow with bad ass woman his own age but older women would help him Mature faster than with a girl his age. Now Temari just a nice thought because naruto saved her brother and is highly intelligent herself and a hard worker would help Naruto grow and help him improve.