for Naruto: The Leveling Shinobi9/24 c35 
1uchiha-rune
Hooray, new chapter. I’ve been really excited with where you left us off. Thanks for thenew chapter Author-dono
1uchiha-runeHooray, new chapter. I’ve been really excited with where you left us off. Thanks for thenew chapter Author-dono
9/24 c23 hennessyswagg83
Why would Naruto cheer for Hinata when she's fighting against his teammate and why would Sakura have a 'dangerous' look in her eye as if threatening him to cheer for her against their teammate...smh I've always been of mind that a person doesn't need to like or show interest just because it known by others that a person is infatuated with them just like how in the series Kurenai encourages Naruto to take the healing balm from Hinata when he didn't honestly need it and he'd just beaten her teammate or later how Sakura persuade Naruto to have feelings towards Hinata.
Why would Naruto cheer for Hinata when she's fighting against his teammate and why would Sakura have a 'dangerous' look in her eye as if threatening him to cheer for her against their teammate...smh I've always been of mind that a person doesn't need to like or show interest just because it known by others that a person is infatuated with them just like how in the series Kurenai encourages Naruto to take the healing balm from Hinata when he didn't honestly need it and he'd just beaten her teammate or later how Sakura persuade Naruto to have feelings towards Hinata.
9/23 c21 hennessyswagg83
I just realized that in the Encountering the Jinchūriki Quest your factoring the Kyūbi but thats Naruto so it shouldn't be out of 9 but 8.
I just realized that in the Encountering the Jinchūriki Quest your factoring the Kyūbi but thats Naruto so it shouldn't be out of 9 but 8.
9/23 c8 hennessyswagg83
I feel you've underscored Sakura's intelligence stat remember she completed the written exam without cheating and was known to be very intelligent so she should've at the least had a stat of at least 10 or more with the wisdom of at least 7
I feel you've underscored Sakura's intelligence stat remember she completed the written exam without cheating and was known to be very intelligent so she should've at the least had a stat of at least 10 or more with the wisdom of at least 7
9/22 c1 010283772shuwhsyhah72727171
One thing I like your fic that you didn't have Naruto tell everyone including their grandma about his power...I swear in most gamer abilities especially maxfic story always have naruto exposed his ability for no reason..
One thing I like your fic that you didn't have Naruto tell everyone including their grandma about his power...I swear in most gamer abilities especially maxfic story always have naruto exposed his ability for no reason..
9/20 c2 AdrianVnz
Late answers but for a pairing i prefer Hinata followed by Ino and Tenten tied in second, honestly with Naruto fanfics i prefer harems, my only requests are to not bash a character so he can get their girl (example would be making Asuma a jerk so you can have Kurenai leave him) or including grown women (you can adjust their ages in some cases but you should make clear they aren't their canon ages).
Honestly with Naruto nearly any pairing can be made to work with enough dedication (i still prefer Hinata), i think the only exception would be Sakura unless you work extra hard to make it work.
As for elements, i say give him wind but make him work towards surpassing Hiruzen, as in mastering all five elements with hard training (slowly obviously)
Late answers but for a pairing i prefer Hinata followed by Ino and Tenten tied in second, honestly with Naruto fanfics i prefer harems, my only requests are to not bash a character so he can get their girl (example would be making Asuma a jerk so you can have Kurenai leave him) or including grown women (you can adjust their ages in some cases but you should make clear they aren't their canon ages).
Honestly with Naruto nearly any pairing can be made to work with enough dedication (i still prefer Hinata), i think the only exception would be Sakura unless you work extra hard to make it work.
As for elements, i say give him wind but make him work towards surpassing Hiruzen, as in mastering all five elements with hard training (slowly obviously)
9/18 c34 Lamont
Probably the jutsus used by a Ataski member uses to steal other people's hearts and chakra network
Probably the jutsus used by a Ataski member uses to steal other people's hearts and chakra network
9/18 c34 RevMoreno
Oh man I should have seen sleight of hand coming! I was too focused on how Naruto fights and who he went up against. Love this story!
Oh man I should have seen sleight of hand coming! I was too focused on how Naruto fights and who he went up against. Love this story!