
7/2/2024 c6 Barbatus Lupus Rex
Strange. You know that as a shadow he shouldn’t be able to rebel much less hurt naruto right ?
Strange. You know that as a shadow he shouldn’t be able to rebel much less hurt naruto right ?
7/2/2024 c23 ShadowStalker3424
Don't care about the chapter length but I do want to see Naruto progress whether he in the village or not. I want him to learn Rasengan and Sage Mode and Toad Kata from Jiraiya before cutting ties with Konoha temporarily
Don't care about the chapter length but I do want to see Naruto progress whether he in the village or not. I want him to learn Rasengan and Sage Mode and Toad Kata from Jiraiya before cutting ties with Konoha temporarily
7/2/2024 c23
10reo00
Good luck on your exams! As for your questions I would like to see him leave just becaue its not something we would originally see and it would bring changes to the others along with naruto having his own personal journey and mission to do out there. And yes I personally prefer longer chapters. Also now that the uzumaki clan is being brought up will karin come back into the story?

Good luck on your exams! As for your questions I would like to see him leave just becaue its not something we would originally see and it would bring changes to the others along with naruto having his own personal journey and mission to do out there. And yes I personally prefer longer chapters. Also now that the uzumaki clan is being brought up will karin come back into the story?
7/2/2024 c23 uchiha-rune
HOORAYYYYYY! New chaoter, it feels like its been forever. Just take you time though, no need to prioritize this, take your own pade.
HOORAYYYYYY! New chaoter, it feels like its been forever. Just take you time though, no need to prioritize this, take your own pade.
7/2/2024 c23 speedyninja
great chapter, i like the idea of him leaving the village and exploring his origins. maybe even getting the uzumaki back together. keep it up!
great chapter, i like the idea of him leaving the village and exploring his origins. maybe even getting the uzumaki back together. keep it up!
4/29/2024 c1 agod5022
its not really a review more of a question how did he get the leveling system or what caused it to pop up im on part 4 on the youtube and there is still no refrence to what happend for him to get i know i dont speak for everybody but that something that should of been pointed out in chap 1
P.S. I AM IN NO WAY SAYING THIS IS A BAD FIC I WENT INTO WANTING TO HATE BUT YOU DID REALLY REALLY REALLY GOOD
its not really a review more of a question how did he get the leveling system or what caused it to pop up im on part 4 on the youtube and there is still no refrence to what happend for him to get i know i dont speak for everybody but that something that should of been pointed out in chap 1
P.S. I AM IN NO WAY SAYING THIS IS A BAD FIC I WENT INTO WANTING TO HATE BUT YOU DID REALLY REALLY REALLY GOOD
3/29/2024 c7 Guest
fk you bitch, i remember this shit
fk you bitch, i remember this shit
3/1/2024 c22
2panda353
I love it! Can't wait to see what you write next. Please continue, so I can see how the tournament ends.

I love it! Can't wait to see what you write next. Please continue, so I can see how the tournament ends.
2/19/2024 c1 Bluenait
well this is still useless pussy Naruto just with a Gamer System so fuck this shit
well this is still useless pussy Naruto just with a Gamer System so fuck this shit