for Naruto: The Leveling Shinobi8/29/2022 c4 NarutofemKyuubi
You should give naruto a shadow summoning contract.
You should give naruto a shadow summoning contract.
8/25/2022 c2 4Alucard
I know I am late to this question but I really like Ino. Sakura gets to much screen time and even though Hinata is great it’s been used a lot. If you used Tenten you have to add more to her as she seemed like a boring character. Temari is great to. If I had to choose a paring it would be any of the listed Ino and Temari. Outside of his age group my fav girls would be Mei, Tsunade, Kushina, and Anko
I know I am late to this question but I really like Ino. Sakura gets to much screen time and even though Hinata is great it’s been used a lot. If you used Tenten you have to add more to her as she seemed like a boring character. Temari is great to. If I had to choose a paring it would be any of the listed Ino and Temari. Outside of his age group my fav girls would be Mei, Tsunade, Kushina, and Anko
8/22/2022 c22 Guest
Love your story
Love your story
8/19/2022 c1 BuddhaBuddha
Sasuke and his comment about how blue narutos eyes are has me worried...is this gonna be a yaoi fic? Nothing against it but they aren't my cup of tea. And this Fandom is full of them so it's a reasonable worry.
Sasuke and his comment about how blue narutos eyes are has me worried...is this gonna be a yaoi fic? Nothing against it but they aren't my cup of tea. And this Fandom is full of them so it's a reasonable worry.
8/19/2022 c18 
6The Orange Maelstrom
Check my Pa treon if you want to read the next chapter tomorrow! It's www. / PaladinKaladin or search PaladinKaladin on the site. It's 2$ for 1 chapter ahead, that's being posted tmr. 5$ for 2 chapters ahead that's posted day after tmr. 15 for 3, 20 for 3 chaps plus other stuff.
You're not only gouging people, you're doing something illegal and you know it, since you're breaking the name of the website up yourself. Man up and either write for the enjoyment or for the fandom, or get good and make money of your own writing. Greed isn't a good look for someone piggybacking off another person's success, an act that can put a full stop on the entire fandom. Reported and dropped.
6The Orange MaelstromCheck my Pa treon if you want to read the next chapter tomorrow! It's www. / PaladinKaladin or search PaladinKaladin on the site. It's 2$ for 1 chapter ahead, that's being posted tmr. 5$ for 2 chapters ahead that's posted day after tmr. 15 for 3, 20 for 3 chaps plus other stuff.
You're not only gouging people, you're doing something illegal and you know it, since you're breaking the name of the website up yourself. Man up and either write for the enjoyment or for the fandom, or get good and make money of your own writing. Greed isn't a good look for someone piggybacking off another person's success, an act that can put a full stop on the entire fandom. Reported and dropped.
8/19/2022 c17 The Orange Maelstrom
It's a nice story, but selling your fanfic in any form is both against the spirit of the community and also just asking for legal fandom that can shut down an entire fandom. If you want to make money off your writing, please work on your original stuff.
It's a nice story, but selling your fanfic in any form is both against the spirit of the community and also just asking for legal fandom that can shut down an entire fandom. If you want to make money off your writing, please work on your original stuff.
8/13/2022 c12 Glmo11
naruto is still naive if he observed people he coukd have known that they have a traitor in there village.
naruto is still naive if he observed people he coukd have known that they have a traitor in there village.
8/11/2022 c22 Jaacra
I would say Kurenai perhaps, Genjutsu Mistress yet all we see is one failed one on Itachi.
I don't remember seeing her fighting other times.
I would say Kurenai perhaps, Genjutsu Mistress yet all we see is one failed one on Itachi.
I don't remember seeing her fighting other times.
8/9/2022 c17 1Ashmodai
This story is so bad... what is even the point of stats and HP/MP if they don't have an effect and everyone has 100 HP/MP.
It's a really badly written Gamer Fic...
1AshmodaiThis story is so bad... what is even the point of stats and HP/MP if they don't have an effect and everyone has 100 HP/MP.
It's a really badly written Gamer Fic...
8/5/2022 c11 aries12345251
fhere really was a lot of problem with the stats you are making yeah you are quantifying the stata yet they dont show up for example int it should corresponds to mana or chakra and yet nothing happens even if you add a number on it,it looks like they're just a display with no uses and only the mp is useful since he can used it even the HP is just a fkng display he was hit when he was fighting and yet his HP is remain the same and that also makes the VIT useless, you're making a gamer xover fic yet you dont even know the basics on how stats work
fhere really was a lot of problem with the stats you are making yeah you are quantifying the stata yet they dont show up for example int it should corresponds to mana or chakra and yet nothing happens even if you add a number on it,it looks like they're just a display with no uses and only the mp is useful since he can used it even the HP is just a fkng display he was hit when he was fighting and yet his HP is remain the same and that also makes the VIT useless, you're making a gamer xover fic yet you dont even know the basics on how stats work
8/4/2022 c22 marzionmartin96
Love your work. good quality, excellent plot, and creative mind to go with it. Easily one of my favorites.
Love your work. good quality, excellent plot, and creative mind to go with it. Easily one of my favorites.
8/4/2022 c22 TehStorm
Liking the story so far, though the last few were chapters were so VERY weird. Like how the hell did Ay allowed his brother to travel to konoha to train a FOREIGN Jinchuriki?! Jinchiriki's are the greatest weapons of shinobi villages so to hear Killer Bee training Naruto is SO INCREDIBLY weird...Especially since Bee's movements even inside Kumo are very restricted by his brother, for him to be in Konoha for WEEKS to train a konoha shinobi...It kinda broke my immersion in the story tbh...
This is like, the EUA sending their best nuclear scientists to help Russia develop their Nukes. Like, WUT?
Not to mention that Danzo would probably prefer to slit his own throat then allow a foreign shinobi to train Konoha's Jinchuriki. Hell, even Hiruzen would raise a fuss over this...
Anyways, i hope Naruto will start to somehow training his shadow powers because it's almost painful to see such an insanely powerful ability not being trained by him. It's like someone having a top grade sword but insisting to train and fight with a normal knife instead...
Liking the story so far, though the last few were chapters were so VERY weird. Like how the hell did Ay allowed his brother to travel to konoha to train a FOREIGN Jinchuriki?! Jinchiriki's are the greatest weapons of shinobi villages so to hear Killer Bee training Naruto is SO INCREDIBLY weird...Especially since Bee's movements even inside Kumo are very restricted by his brother, for him to be in Konoha for WEEKS to train a konoha shinobi...It kinda broke my immersion in the story tbh...
This is like, the EUA sending their best nuclear scientists to help Russia develop their Nukes. Like, WUT?
Not to mention that Danzo would probably prefer to slit his own throat then allow a foreign shinobi to train Konoha's Jinchuriki. Hell, even Hiruzen would raise a fuss over this...
Anyways, i hope Naruto will start to somehow training his shadow powers because it's almost painful to see such an insanely powerful ability not being trained by him. It's like someone having a top grade sword but insisting to train and fight with a normal knife instead...