for Naruto: The Leveling Shinobi9/13 c33 
5That Random HP Roleplayer
Ability to use jutsus with his hands behind his back? At some point? Thats like a great utility thing that definitely isn't OP, since sensors and fast enough people can still react to jutsus that quick, but def a great turn around ability if he uses them right
5That Random HP RoleplayerAbility to use jutsus with his hands behind his back? At some point? Thats like a great utility thing that definitely isn't OP, since sensors and fast enough people can still react to jutsus that quick, but def a great turn around ability if he uses them right
9/12 c33 arana7
For Trickster moves, you should look into DMC, more specifically, Dante's movement/martial ablities. There is a whole Trickster style that would be awesome for Naruto.
For Trickster moves, you should look into DMC, more specifically, Dante's movement/martial ablities. There is a whole Trickster style that would be awesome for Naruto.
9/11 c33 vikraal
It was bad, I was disappointed; when I first read it, I thought you drew inspiration from Katrina Klaes, but the Council of Katrina is actually funny. Does this, however, mean that the ANBU surveiling Naruto thinks Naruto's crazy and also thinking of abandoning the village? Unless you wrote them off as being super busy with the village in disarray.
It was bad, I was disappointed; when I first read it, I thought you drew inspiration from Katrina Klaes, but the Council of Katrina is actually funny. Does this, however, mean that the ANBU surveiling Naruto thinks Naruto's crazy and also thinking of abandoning the village? Unless you wrote them off as being super busy with the village in disarray.
9/11 c2 1Ambition277
Surprise by how quick Sasuke decided to help, could be due to how common Sasuke small bash here in fanfiction but i like it
1Ambition277Surprise by how quick Sasuke decided to help, could be due to how common Sasuke small bash here in fanfiction but i like it
9/11 c1 Ambition277
I'm definitely hook after this first chapter, Love the grammar, way of story telling
I'm definitely hook after this first chapter, Love the grammar, way of story telling
9/11 c33 11Blandusername
At this point why even have the solo leveling stuff? It’s just a gamer story which is fine but honestly necromancer makes no sense especially when you’ve nerfed it so hard. Hell a lot of stuff here is pretty weak for the concept of “leveling”. Naruto is kinda just on par with everyone rather than leveling up that much.
11BlandusernameAt this point why even have the solo leveling stuff? It’s just a gamer story which is fine but honestly necromancer makes no sense especially when you’ve nerfed it so hard. Hell a lot of stuff here is pretty weak for the concept of “leveling”. Naruto is kinda just on par with everyone rather than leveling up that much.
9/11 c33 2AnimeFanReader01
im gonna guess the skill is 'Fake Out'. The higher the skill level, the more likely the enemy is to fall for it. higher levels work on higher level enemies.
2AnimeFanReader01im gonna guess the skill is 'Fake Out'. The higher the skill level, the more likely the enemy is to fall for it. higher levels work on higher level enemies.
9/10 c33 RevMoreno
Hmm judging by how tanky he is right now i guess either weakness or slow though more likely slow since he fought quite a few fast opponents and saw kisame and gai fight
Hmm judging by how tanky he is right now i guess either weakness or slow though more likely slow since he fought quite a few fast opponents and saw kisame and gai fight
9/10 c33 xXwolfsterXx644
Great chapter dude can't wait to see what skill he got from his subclass in the next update
Great chapter dude can't wait to see what skill he got from his subclass in the next update