for Naruto: The Leveling Shinobi8/11/2022 c22 Jaacra
I would say Kurenai perhaps, Genjutsu Mistress yet all we see is one failed one on Itachi.
I don't remember seeing her fighting other times.
I would say Kurenai perhaps, Genjutsu Mistress yet all we see is one failed one on Itachi.
I don't remember seeing her fighting other times.
8/9/2022 c17 
1Ashmodai
This story is so bad... what is even the point of stats and HP/MP if they don't have an effect and everyone has 100 HP/MP.
It's a really badly written Gamer Fic...
1AshmodaiThis story is so bad... what is even the point of stats and HP/MP if they don't have an effect and everyone has 100 HP/MP.
It's a really badly written Gamer Fic...
8/5/2022 c11 aries12345251
fhere really was a lot of problem with the stats you are making yeah you are quantifying the stata yet they dont show up for example int it should corresponds to mana or chakra and yet nothing happens even if you add a number on it,it looks like they're just a display with no uses and only the mp is useful since he can used it even the HP is just a fkng display he was hit when he was fighting and yet his HP is remain the same and that also makes the VIT useless, you're making a gamer xover fic yet you dont even know the basics on how stats work
fhere really was a lot of problem with the stats you are making yeah you are quantifying the stata yet they dont show up for example int it should corresponds to mana or chakra and yet nothing happens even if you add a number on it,it looks like they're just a display with no uses and only the mp is useful since he can used it even the HP is just a fkng display he was hit when he was fighting and yet his HP is remain the same and that also makes the VIT useless, you're making a gamer xover fic yet you dont even know the basics on how stats work
8/4/2022 c22 marzionmartin96
Love your work. good quality, excellent plot, and creative mind to go with it. Easily one of my favorites.
Love your work. good quality, excellent plot, and creative mind to go with it. Easily one of my favorites.
8/4/2022 c22 TehStorm
Liking the story so far, though the last few were chapters were so VERY weird. Like how the hell did Ay allowed his brother to travel to konoha to train a FOREIGN Jinchuriki?! Jinchiriki's are the greatest weapons of shinobi villages so to hear Killer Bee training Naruto is SO INCREDIBLY weird...Especially since Bee's movements even inside Kumo are very restricted by his brother, for him to be in Konoha for WEEKS to train a konoha shinobi...It kinda broke my immersion in the story tbh...
This is like, the EUA sending their best nuclear scientists to help Russia develop their Nukes. Like, WUT?
Not to mention that Danzo would probably prefer to slit his own throat then allow a foreign shinobi to train Konoha's Jinchuriki. Hell, even Hiruzen would raise a fuss over this...
Anyways, i hope Naruto will start to somehow training his shadow powers because it's almost painful to see such an insanely powerful ability not being trained by him. It's like someone having a top grade sword but insisting to train and fight with a normal knife instead...
Liking the story so far, though the last few were chapters were so VERY weird. Like how the hell did Ay allowed his brother to travel to konoha to train a FOREIGN Jinchuriki?! Jinchiriki's are the greatest weapons of shinobi villages so to hear Killer Bee training Naruto is SO INCREDIBLY weird...Especially since Bee's movements even inside Kumo are very restricted by his brother, for him to be in Konoha for WEEKS to train a konoha shinobi...It kinda broke my immersion in the story tbh...
This is like, the EUA sending their best nuclear scientists to help Russia develop their Nukes. Like, WUT?
Not to mention that Danzo would probably prefer to slit his own throat then allow a foreign shinobi to train Konoha's Jinchuriki. Hell, even Hiruzen would raise a fuss over this...
Anyways, i hope Naruto will start to somehow training his shadow powers because it's almost painful to see such an insanely powerful ability not being trained by him. It's like someone having a top grade sword but insisting to train and fight with a normal knife instead...
8/2/2022 c22 Guest
Maaaad fight. Insane use of tactics
Maaaad fight. Insane use of tactics
8/2/2022 c22 rm.r.kula
I do have a question, why in the name of Gaia Naruto don't get more mana. Plus you kind of nerfed Gamer Naruto a little too much, it feels like he wins by plot armor.
I do have a question, why in the name of Gaia Naruto don't get more mana. Plus you kind of nerfed Gamer Naruto a little too much, it feels like he wins by plot armor.
8/1/2022 c2 SMB
You f**ked up with the prodigy quest. He actually did manage to steal the bells. Kakashi stealing them back does NOT invalidate the quest. There was no stipulation that Naruto had to KEEP them.
So, f**k this crap. You're intentionally nerfing this even more than I thought you were going to.
You f**ked up with the prodigy quest. He actually did manage to steal the bells. Kakashi stealing them back does NOT invalidate the quest. There was no stipulation that Naruto had to KEEP them.
So, f**k this crap. You're intentionally nerfing this even more than I thought you were going to.
8/1/2022 c1 SMB
You completely lost me when you had Naruto give up 1000 exp for skipping the tutorial because of an errant thought of denial! When the game starts, it takes MENTAL FORTITUDE to use mental commands. Naruto is TOO STUPID to understand how mental commands work. I read the rest of the chapter, just to see how much you could screw it up, and you screwed it up a lot.
How do you screw up a Naruto gamer fic? By nerfing it, of course!
One attribute point for leveling? Really? All that work and he only gets rewarded with ONE F**KING POINT PER LEVEL?! I think I'd kill myself and hope for a new system in my next life if that is the crap system he has.
You completely lost me when you had Naruto give up 1000 exp for skipping the tutorial because of an errant thought of denial! When the game starts, it takes MENTAL FORTITUDE to use mental commands. Naruto is TOO STUPID to understand how mental commands work. I read the rest of the chapter, just to see how much you could screw it up, and you screwed it up a lot.
How do you screw up a Naruto gamer fic? By nerfing it, of course!
One attribute point for leveling? Really? All that work and he only gets rewarded with ONE F**KING POINT PER LEVEL?! I think I'd kill myself and hope for a new system in my next life if that is the crap system he has.
8/1/2022 c22 Grunty
Sweet! Pure taijutsu vs Tricky taijutsu!
Sweet! Pure taijutsu vs Tricky taijutsu!