for Naruto: The Leveling Shinobi7/24/2024 c26 UIRyujin
honestly Naruto with sun breathing or thunder breathing from Demon Slayer or Haki from One Piece would be sick.
oh i think you touched on Naruto needing an original Taijutsu style of his own, how about Renewal Taekwondo from God of Highschool? just some suggestions lol
im really enjoying the story so far.
honestly Naruto with sun breathing or thunder breathing from Demon Slayer or Haki from One Piece would be sick.
oh i think you touched on Naruto needing an original Taijutsu style of his own, how about Renewal Taekwondo from God of Highschool? just some suggestions lol
im really enjoying the story so far.
7/24/2024 c26 lycnt
Another great chapter!
Love the black flash btw, in my opinion Naruto has to fight with his fist and jutsus, I'm not a big fan of him using weapons as a main fighting style, occasionally is good tho.
As for him leaving the village, I really never liked the idea, konoha is part of who he is. It's your choice of course, just not my cup of tea.
Also, I want Naruto to meet Jiraya so bad... Anyway, keep the great work!
Another great chapter!
Love the black flash btw, in my opinion Naruto has to fight with his fist and jutsus, I'm not a big fan of him using weapons as a main fighting style, occasionally is good tho.
As for him leaving the village, I really never liked the idea, konoha is part of who he is. It's your choice of course, just not my cup of tea.
Also, I want Naruto to meet Jiraya so bad... Anyway, keep the great work!
7/23/2024 c26 taiwoeretan1
If you want something from demon slayer, you could give him the transparent world, it's basically a discount Byakugan but it does provide some precognition like the Sharingan.
If you want something from demon slayer, you could give him the transparent world, it's basically a discount Byakugan but it does provide some precognition like the Sharingan.
7/23/2024 c26 DenSha
For a new skill something to keep in mind is that while you have made his class be necromancer with using the dead as shadows you have not really explored that path further with skills that would fit the necromancer style of use.
For a new skill something to keep in mind is that while you have made his class be necromancer with using the dead as shadows you have not really explored that path further with skills that would fit the necromancer style of use.
7/23/2024 c26 Terracotta Tortilla
Fuu took both Hidan and Kakuzu in canon to take down, similar to Yugito. Fuu has 5 more tails than Yugito... Fuu is an endgame roaming enemy that has shown up in the beginners area. Even some of the Kage can't stand up to the 7 tails and a jinchuuriki that it's friendly with.
Unless you decide to heavily nerf her, drop in a red cloud black cloak member, or some other plot railroad; that invasion is not going to go well for Sand and Oto if she gets involved.
Good chapter, but just kind of confused on to what is next. Maybe she's actually an opportunist who will let everyone die, just to get Naruto and Gaara? OOC for sure, but I've seen worse in Naruto fics.
Fuu took both Hidan and Kakuzu in canon to take down, similar to Yugito. Fuu has 5 more tails than Yugito... Fuu is an endgame roaming enemy that has shown up in the beginners area. Even some of the Kage can't stand up to the 7 tails and a jinchuuriki that it's friendly with.
Unless you decide to heavily nerf her, drop in a red cloud black cloak member, or some other plot railroad; that invasion is not going to go well for Sand and Oto if she gets involved.
Good chapter, but just kind of confused on to what is next. Maybe she's actually an opportunist who will let everyone die, just to get Naruto and Gaara? OOC for sure, but I've seen worse in Naruto fics.
7/23/2024 c26 
1uchiha-rune
Great chapter, given hoe I dont know many anime, I dont have any actually good responses to the question of the day. If I were to name a few abilities from other snime, one would be reinforcement magecraft from fate/stay night; naruto in this fanfiction seems ro get into taijutsu combat quite often; reinforcement does something like closing in flaws in an object or the users body, use it on a kunai and it becomes much more durable and sharper, the main character of Fate/Stay Night can use it on himself, making his physical body go reach extremely high levels of physical prowess when compared to the average magus or human.
This would be useful for naruto as right noe, correct if me Im wrong, but Naruto is lacking skills or mobes that can increase his speed and strength, reinforcement would fix that problem, plus it could help fix any flaes that stops naruto from being able to physically handle the V2 cloak.
Like I said, I dont know many anime, I hope this suggestion can help. Great chaoter, you’re a great author, cys next time
1uchiha-runeGreat chapter, given hoe I dont know many anime, I dont have any actually good responses to the question of the day. If I were to name a few abilities from other snime, one would be reinforcement magecraft from fate/stay night; naruto in this fanfiction seems ro get into taijutsu combat quite often; reinforcement does something like closing in flaws in an object or the users body, use it on a kunai and it becomes much more durable and sharper, the main character of Fate/Stay Night can use it on himself, making his physical body go reach extremely high levels of physical prowess when compared to the average magus or human.
This would be useful for naruto as right noe, correct if me Im wrong, but Naruto is lacking skills or mobes that can increase his speed and strength, reinforcement would fix that problem, plus it could help fix any flaes that stops naruto from being able to physically handle the V2 cloak.
Like I said, I dont know many anime, I hope this suggestion can help. Great chaoter, you’re a great author, cys next time
7/23/2024 c26 uchiha-rune
Hopray, new chapter, given how I just read the first bit of the chapter, I wonder if naruto will choose a new skill on the skill tree mid invasion, using it like emergency stat points
Hopray, new chapter, given how I just read the first bit of the chapter, I wonder if naruto will choose a new skill on the skill tree mid invasion, using it like emergency stat points
7/23/2024 c26 Samuel2072
excellent chapter as always. but i feel you made fuu a lil too op idk. also the end of every chap could we see narutos stats its hard to always remember where he's at reading wise
excellent chapter as always. but i feel you made fuu a lil too op idk. also the end of every chap could we see narutos stats its hard to always remember where he's at reading wise
7/23/2024 c26 1Eldaxerus
A power from another anime? Get him Epitaph from Jojo.
The ability to see the future a few seconds forward without any ability to change it.
No need to bring in Stands or anything, just that one ability. I think you could write quite a lot of drama using that "I know the future and I can't change it".
1EldaxerusA power from another anime? Get him Epitaph from Jojo.
The ability to see the future a few seconds forward without any ability to change it.
No need to bring in Stands or anything, just that one ability. I think you could write quite a lot of drama using that "I know the future and I can't change it".
7/23/2024 c26 7D3adstarkll3r
Question of the day: Nezuko's Exploding Blood from Demon slayer or tiens Solar flaire from dragon ball
7D3adstarkll3rQuestion of the day: Nezuko's Exploding Blood from Demon slayer or tiens Solar flaire from dragon ball
7/23/2024 c26 Ghust95
there is the rokushikii from one piece, the advance and niko style from kengan ashura, somethig like the boostedrgear from high school dxd
there is the rokushikii from one piece, the advance and niko style from kengan ashura, somethig like the boostedrgear from high school dxd
7/20/2024 c1 marquis.shax
kinda ironic an Uchiha complaining about copying considering that's all they're good for as they have absolutely NOTHING unique about them other than perhaps arrogance since while not as bad as in fanfic Sasuke and Obidara were both quite arrogant and then there's Madara himself
kinda ironic an Uchiha complaining about copying considering that's all they're good for as they have absolutely NOTHING unique about them other than perhaps arrogance since while not as bad as in fanfic Sasuke and Obidara were both quite arrogant and then there's Madara himself