for Naruto: The Leveling Shinobi5/18/2022 c16 Amogo21
Nice chapter. I discovered your story today and wasn’t so sure if another gamer fic would be up to the par but I’ve been pleasantly surprised. I really enjoy this story
Nice chapter. I discovered your story today and wasn’t so sure if another gamer fic would be up to the par but I’ve been pleasantly surprised. I really enjoy this story
5/18/2022 c8 
2TheSlySage
you don't see why wind? that is shortsided. you can literally take peoples ability to breathe away(vacuum abilities see Danzo)
cut them to shreds with blades of wind, Wind is one of the most offensive elements. for good examples check out Third Fang's story yet again with a little help many fantastic examples of wind element usage. its also his actual affinity lol not that canon every really utilized it that well and only ever leveled up his rasengan due to it being easy to animate.
2TheSlySageyou don't see why wind? that is shortsided. you can literally take peoples ability to breathe away(vacuum abilities see Danzo)
cut them to shreds with blades of wind, Wind is one of the most offensive elements. for good examples check out Third Fang's story yet again with a little help many fantastic examples of wind element usage. its also his actual affinity lol not that canon every really utilized it that well and only ever leveled up his rasengan due to it being easy to animate.
5/18/2022 c8 TheSlySage
fuckkkkkkkkk water realllllllll_yyyyy? damn it. it makes sense with the shadows but ugh lol Wind is technically the best element. its AIR the element that is literally alaways around. you might not have a body of water, but air is always there. but eh its your story. water works its just ... eh
fuckkkkkkkkk water realllllllll_yyyyy? damn it. it makes sense with the shadows but ugh lol Wind is technically the best element. its AIR the element that is literally alaways around. you might not have a body of water, but air is always there. but eh its your story. water works its just ... eh
5/18/2022 c4 TheSlySage
i wouldn't worry about op. the gamer ability... is OP. ITS SUPPOSED TO BE OP lol
i wouldn't worry about op. the gamer ability... is OP. ITS SUPPOSED TO BE OP lol
5/18/2022 c5 TheSlySage
btw if Haku DOESN'T die. she is my fave choice for pairing. Haku is not a guy. don't care what Canon says i won't accept that
btw if Haku DOESN'T die. she is my fave choice for pairing. Haku is not a guy. don't care what Canon says i won't accept that
5/18/2022 c3 TheSlySage
Zabuza is actually my favorite Villian he was killed way too early. beside that... hm Danzo as a villian he actually has true motives and has an assumed Character progression that started when he failed to become Hokage that lead him down a dark path he is TRYING to do good but he lacks morals as he has to. he isn't strong enough to fight on the high road so he doesn't.
Zabuza is actually my favorite Villian he was killed way too early. beside that... hm Danzo as a villian he actually has true motives and has an assumed Character progression that started when he failed to become Hokage that lead him down a dark path he is TRYING to do good but he lacks morals as he has to. he isn't strong enough to fight on the high road so he doesn't.
5/18/2022 c2 TheSlySage
I can't really imagine taijutsu style's being active skills however. this is awesome. but it would make more sense if they were passive skills that didn't drain mp
I can't really imagine taijutsu style's being active skills however. this is awesome. but it would make more sense if they were passive skills that didn't drain mp
5/18/2022 c16 Koncor the great
Thats a rough qestion while my favorite beast is 4 i hate roshi kinda you know potential uzamaki paradox and all. But roughly my favorite jincuriki is Yugito Nii or fuu they are pretty equal for similar reasons and the rest of the jincuriki all being kinda well pants shitting terrifying in principle i mean 5 has a steam powerd mech suit 4 kinda makes me terrified of what happens in his cabin to strangers all the stranger danger boxs are ticked garra is cool but honestly i hate how weak he kinda became compared to naruto if garra and naruto went on that training trip they would push the limits of eachother (also works for and preferably for fuu "wink") thee comited a genocide and has one of the most apsolutely broken non-clan non-bloodline jutsu in the verse 6 acidic bubbles of death no beno and b is a gem but by the time he was introduced he wasnt exactly relavent witch is sad as b is awesome sadly like i said naruto really under utilized the jincuriki i hope to see 2 and 8 real soon because i loved sing fuu here you actually mixed two of my favorite interpretations of her character in the best possible way the juggernaut with the personality of positive fuu is fun and i hope she stays relavent for a good long while it would be sad if she just got cannoned that was a out right depressing take on fuu that she was so done with being a jincuriki she happily went with ghe men who killed her team to not be one even if it killed her i wanted to give poor path of obito fuu a hug.
Thats a rough qestion while my favorite beast is 4 i hate roshi kinda you know potential uzamaki paradox and all. But roughly my favorite jincuriki is Yugito Nii or fuu they are pretty equal for similar reasons and the rest of the jincuriki all being kinda well pants shitting terrifying in principle i mean 5 has a steam powerd mech suit 4 kinda makes me terrified of what happens in his cabin to strangers all the stranger danger boxs are ticked garra is cool but honestly i hate how weak he kinda became compared to naruto if garra and naruto went on that training trip they would push the limits of eachother (also works for and preferably for fuu "wink") thee comited a genocide and has one of the most apsolutely broken non-clan non-bloodline jutsu in the verse 6 acidic bubbles of death no beno and b is a gem but by the time he was introduced he wasnt exactly relavent witch is sad as b is awesome sadly like i said naruto really under utilized the jincuriki i hope to see 2 and 8 real soon because i loved sing fuu here you actually mixed two of my favorite interpretations of her character in the best possible way the juggernaut with the personality of positive fuu is fun and i hope she stays relavent for a good long while it would be sad if she just got cannoned that was a out right depressing take on fuu that she was so done with being a jincuriki she happily went with ghe men who killed her team to not be one even if it killed her i wanted to give poor path of obito fuu a hug.
5/17/2022 c16 deniswanheda
Siempre me agrado gaara ( su sueño en el tsukuyomi infinito me rompió el corazón) y fuu, tal vez podrías hacer que ella se quede en konoha, o algo así, me agrado también ver a Naruto en modo manipulador/ tramposo, y el hecho de que coqueteara con kurotsuchi fue fantástico, esto me huele a harén, Vito por kurotsuchi, Temari, fuu y hinata
Siempre me agrado gaara ( su sueño en el tsukuyomi infinito me rompió el corazón) y fuu, tal vez podrías hacer que ella se quede en konoha, o algo así, me agrado también ver a Naruto en modo manipulador/ tramposo, y el hecho de que coqueteara con kurotsuchi fue fantástico, esto me huele a harén, Vito por kurotsuchi, Temari, fuu y hinata
5/17/2022 c16 8ScepticalOne
Honestly if I where to make any complaint about OP status, I think Sasuke, Lee, and Neji did better then I would've expected for this point. But that's more a minor gripe.
Gaara would be my favorite of the Jinchuriki since I'm not counting Naruto since he's the protaganist. Although being a Manga only fan at the moment basically means that the only Options are Naruto, Bee, and Gaara since everyone else is a named extra. I guess Madara and Obito would count from the ten tails though.
Good chapter!
8ScepticalOneHonestly if I where to make any complaint about OP status, I think Sasuke, Lee, and Neji did better then I would've expected for this point. But that's more a minor gripe.
Gaara would be my favorite of the Jinchuriki since I'm not counting Naruto since he's the protaganist. Although being a Manga only fan at the moment basically means that the only Options are Naruto, Bee, and Gaara since everyone else is a named extra. I guess Madara and Obito would count from the ten tails though.
Good chapter!