3/11/2022 c8 jvines1
for question one I would pick Karui or kurotsuchi they are both strong ladies with a good grasp of there element. for question 2 I would pick an older lady mabui (raikage's assistant) she should be around 25 at this point in time but I am imagining sort of one-way admiration from naruto at this point in time. it could I stay as a crush or you could develop it in the shuppiden time line. I belive it makes more sense for naruto to be more focased on training at this point in time and due learning about the chunin exams early it would be nice if he picked up a weapon. my thought would be on a staff as it lets him fight without killing if you are keeping true to his original personally or move to spears if he is willing to kill.
for question one I would pick Karui or kurotsuchi they are both strong ladies with a good grasp of there element. for question 2 I would pick an older lady mabui (raikage's assistant) she should be around 25 at this point in time but I am imagining sort of one-way admiration from naruto at this point in time. it could I stay as a crush or you could develop it in the shuppiden time line. I belive it makes more sense for naruto to be more focased on training at this point in time and due learning about the chunin exams early it would be nice if he picked up a weapon. my thought would be on a staff as it lets him fight without killing if you are keeping true to his original personally or move to spears if he is willing to kill.
3/11/2022 c8 Guest
Woah Amazng. Truly mind-blowing
Woah Amazng. Truly mind-blowing
3/11/2022 c8 Seaoddon014
Love the setup for the chunin exams personally I'd love to see for the pairings, I'd like to see how you'd handle a Kurotsuchi or Karui pairing as we don't see to many of them
Love the setup for the chunin exams personally I'd love to see for the pairings, I'd like to see how you'd handle a Kurotsuchi or Karui pairing as we don't see to many of them
3/11/2022 c8 Dbot15112002
I hope Naruto will at least be in the top 5 in terms of strength(not rank in the exam) before he enters the test. I know you are hell bent on not making Naruto too powerful but I hope that there will be a very noticeable difference between him and others of his generation.
I hope Naruto will at least be in the top 5 in terms of strength(not rank in the exam) before he enters the test. I know you are hell bent on not making Naruto too powerful but I hope that there will be a very noticeable difference between him and others of his generation.
3/11/2022 c8 Koncor the great
The answer to both question is the same oddly enough.
Kurotsuchi.
Oddly enough for tye same reason shes basically a compadent female naruto who isn't shugger coated to have clean hands and be ninja jesus plus magma and storm release are a inspired combo of mass destruction it gets me gitty the only way it could be better is if she has goku for some reson the 4 tails is by far my favorite tailed beast and honestly this darker naruto and her would be a fasanating rivalry and ship the only way it gets better is if shes the one who gets the curse seal instead of sauske. Ok spewing my love for my 4th favorite ship Kurotsuchi X naruto aside.
Is it strange I could seriously see hef kicking sauskes teeth in and both being super into it? Anyway theres a lot of potential for this arc are sumai and the 2 tails going to be proticapating will all 5 nations design a single test whats orchimaru going to do will the samari get some rep here honestly theres so many ways this can pop off i am amped.
The answer to both question is the same oddly enough.
Kurotsuchi.
Oddly enough for tye same reason shes basically a compadent female naruto who isn't shugger coated to have clean hands and be ninja jesus plus magma and storm release are a inspired combo of mass destruction it gets me gitty the only way it could be better is if she has goku for some reson the 4 tails is by far my favorite tailed beast and honestly this darker naruto and her would be a fasanating rivalry and ship the only way it gets better is if shes the one who gets the curse seal instead of sauske. Ok spewing my love for my 4th favorite ship Kurotsuchi X naruto aside.
Is it strange I could seriously see hef kicking sauskes teeth in and both being super into it? Anyway theres a lot of potential for this arc are sumai and the 2 tails going to be proticapating will all 5 nations design a single test whats orchimaru going to do will the samari get some rep here honestly theres so many ways this can pop off i am amped.
3/11/2022 c8 tempace
2.
-Naruto x Fuu: I always wanted to save her and is an unused character that most of the autors forget tha she was in the original chunning exams, also she understands the charge of being a jinjuriki and the smile maak of naruto so they would understand well eachother, learn together and she had a scuse to change village to konoha were she would be more safe.
-Kurotsuchi X Temari: Two strongwilled girls that I think that they will get allong together and I agree with the autor of "Uzumaki Naruko: To the Victor, the Spoils V2 chapter 13" with: "Temari. I have always thought that having grown up with a homicidal brother, a brother who wears kitty-ear pyjamas and a father who might as well have been a hired guardian rather than their blood-father, she would have been put off men for life." Also, I think kurotsuchi situation is similar with his granfather hokage to stuborn for his own good (limitating her life) and his father, genin teamates and sensei and the rest of her family, controlig her life and what she can do or learn (all of them mans for what is showed in the program and all the fanfictions were she appears).
-Karin X Naruto / Sakura / Tenten: This I have a little selfcontroversy: In one hand I want to see Naruto and Karin together: I can see Naruto saving her and she falling in love with him for it, and because she is a sensor nin, recognice that he is his family, so she can sacape Kusa (were she was used as a heal slave battery) and orochimaru (or how I like to call him: Okamaru)(where she was experimented), also have the benefit that she can teach Naruto about his clan and the kekkei genkai of this clan that he can unlock. For the other hand If it's actualy pairings I prefer Naruto to be whith fuu. Another good pairing could be with Sakura: they can learn medic ninjutsu togeder and have simmilar personalitys so I can see they getting along and finnaly falling in love with each other. The problem is that I can't see Sakura saving her from the bear. That is the reason for the pairing with Tenten: I can see her saving Karin and take her to the tower with Lee help afther hearing the story ald his last name to bring her to know Naruto as his possible family and that would be a good star for them with karin not only fallin for Tenten for saving her, but also for bring her to his family. Also, I don't want her to fall for Sasuke the sociopath and I can see any of the male konha genin with her, exept Naruto, making a good pairing.
-Shikamaru for Kin Tsuchi: They are both very inteligent and I can see Shikamaru saving her and without Temari is a good pairing. Also, I can se a Shikamaru X Kin X Tayuya if the cards are well used and will be very funny to see how Shikamaru will deal not with one, but two, very "problematic" girls that will drag him to the relationship, he wants it or not.
- Anko X Yugito Nee: I can see them geting along easily and I never saw this pairing.
-If possible polyamorous relationship (in order of most wanted to less wanted for the girls), it would be: Naruto X Fuu X Karin X Ino (and optionals: X Tenten X Sakura X Hinata).
Sorry for my bad english, I am from Spain. And continue with you great work, It a good story.
2.
-Naruto x Fuu: I always wanted to save her and is an unused character that most of the autors forget tha she was in the original chunning exams, also she understands the charge of being a jinjuriki and the smile maak of naruto so they would understand well eachother, learn together and she had a scuse to change village to konoha were she would be more safe.
-Kurotsuchi X Temari: Two strongwilled girls that I think that they will get allong together and I agree with the autor of "Uzumaki Naruko: To the Victor, the Spoils V2 chapter 13" with: "Temari. I have always thought that having grown up with a homicidal brother, a brother who wears kitty-ear pyjamas and a father who might as well have been a hired guardian rather than their blood-father, she would have been put off men for life." Also, I think kurotsuchi situation is similar with his granfather hokage to stuborn for his own good (limitating her life) and his father, genin teamates and sensei and the rest of her family, controlig her life and what she can do or learn (all of them mans for what is showed in the program and all the fanfictions were she appears).
-Karin X Naruto / Sakura / Tenten: This I have a little selfcontroversy: In one hand I want to see Naruto and Karin together: I can see Naruto saving her and she falling in love with him for it, and because she is a sensor nin, recognice that he is his family, so she can sacape Kusa (were she was used as a heal slave battery) and orochimaru (or how I like to call him: Okamaru)(where she was experimented), also have the benefit that she can teach Naruto about his clan and the kekkei genkai of this clan that he can unlock. For the other hand If it's actualy pairings I prefer Naruto to be whith fuu. Another good pairing could be with Sakura: they can learn medic ninjutsu togeder and have simmilar personalitys so I can see they getting along and finnaly falling in love with each other. The problem is that I can't see Sakura saving her from the bear. That is the reason for the pairing with Tenten: I can see her saving Karin and take her to the tower with Lee help afther hearing the story ald his last name to bring her to know Naruto as his possible family and that would be a good star for them with karin not only fallin for Tenten for saving her, but also for bring her to his family. Also, I don't want her to fall for Sasuke the sociopath and I can see any of the male konha genin with her, exept Naruto, making a good pairing.
-Shikamaru for Kin Tsuchi: They are both very inteligent and I can see Shikamaru saving her and without Temari is a good pairing. Also, I can se a Shikamaru X Kin X Tayuya if the cards are well used and will be very funny to see how Shikamaru will deal not with one, but two, very "problematic" girls that will drag him to the relationship, he wants it or not.
- Anko X Yugito Nee: I can see them geting along easily and I never saw this pairing.
-If possible polyamorous relationship (in order of most wanted to less wanted for the girls), it would be: Naruto X Fuu X Karin X Ino (and optionals: X Tenten X Sakura X Hinata).
Sorry for my bad english, I am from Spain. And continue with you great work, It a good story.
3/11/2022 c8 Wolf FallenSerpent
Lee would be good for naruto to fight to show strength he was probably the strongest Genin besides neji
I have no real opinion for pairings outside of the village I personally would skip all pairings of girls outside except maybe tamari
Lee would be good for naruto to fight to show strength he was probably the strongest Genin besides neji
I have no real opinion for pairings outside of the village I personally would skip all pairings of girls outside except maybe tamari
3/11/2022 c8 The-Funeral-Pyre
Question #1: I'd honestly hope to see him face another water user (possibly from Kiri, though Ame works as well, if they're involved at all) just to potentially show him outshining them and having some interesting techniques and jutsu that will have people questioning themselves, and probably leading them to think he learned quite a lot from just watching Zabuza and Haku- and that obviously they had a big impact on him. :V
Might be difficicult to figure out who to use from their end if not an OC, though.
Also just looking forward to him potentially learning Toad Oil techniques like Jiraiya and then using his fancy new fireball to light shit up. With all the clones that's a terrifying potential for ungodly flammability and catastrophic conflagration. Cooler than him having to do it with an explosive tag as a combo with toads in the manga.
Question #1: I'd honestly hope to see him face another water user (possibly from Kiri, though Ame works as well, if they're involved at all) just to potentially show him outshining them and having some interesting techniques and jutsu that will have people questioning themselves, and probably leading them to think he learned quite a lot from just watching Zabuza and Haku- and that obviously they had a big impact on him. :V
Might be difficicult to figure out who to use from their end if not an OC, though.
Also just looking forward to him potentially learning Toad Oil techniques like Jiraiya and then using his fancy new fireball to light shit up. With all the clones that's a terrifying potential for ungodly flammability and catastrophic conflagration. Cooler than him having to do it with an explosive tag as a combo with toads in the manga.
3/11/2022 c7 Blue Amateur
Question 1: Naruto fighting Gaara early is always a treat, but if not, one of the Orochimaru goons is always an option for him to learn Chakra Scalpel through imitation.
Question 2: Ino is probably the best pairing personality wise for anyone of Naruto's age.
Question 1: Naruto fighting Gaara early is always a treat, but if not, one of the Orochimaru goons is always an option for him to learn Chakra Scalpel through imitation.
Question 2: Ino is probably the best pairing personality wise for anyone of Naruto's age.
3/11/2022 c8 pippothehippo
I think having Naruto meet Karin during the Chuunin Exams would be an interesting event due to them being distant cousins.
I think having Naruto meet Karin during the Chuunin Exams would be an interesting event due to them being distant cousins.
3/11/2022 c8 SidRyuu14
Naruto is an uzumaki will he be getting chakra chains? or kenjutsu style? or fuinjutsu?
Naruto vs Samui would be as she says a "cool" fight and if you give her the storm release Naruto can technically copy it.
One serious question since Naruto has the shadow of haku can he access hyoton for himself?
Naruto is an uzumaki will he be getting chakra chains? or kenjutsu style? or fuinjutsu?
Naruto vs Samui would be as she says a "cool" fight and if you give her the storm release Naruto can technically copy it.
One serious question since Naruto has the shadow of haku can he access hyoton for himself?