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3/1/2022 c7 Ben Turner1
Well damn that's a really hard choice. A part of me wants to go for the canon wind affinity because he did some really cool stuff with that especially the shuriken resangon, but part of me wants to see what he could do with a different element but then I have absolutely no idea which one. If I remember correctly his dad had a lightning affinity and that was how he was able to do his special teleportation thing so maybe that and he can use it when he eventually finds out about it? If there's a chance for him to eventually learn a second one I would probably go for earth for it's defensive capabilities and then water because I think that made wood though it's been years since I've actually read the series.
3/1/2022 c7 JaimonDosFendu
I don't even like the fact he can choose his affinity from the start. And truthfully any element could be useful, I just prefer the classic wind for him
2/28/2022 c6 1rubas 273
Honestly? Hayate, the proctor from the chunnin exams who was killed, maybe not as a "combat" shadow but a training one, with Zabuza they could turn Naruto into a powerful kenjutsu user
2/26/2022 c6 chris75599
Hayate Gekkō would be a good shadow. he can get a fellow konoha Shinobi, and some training.
2/26/2022 c6 2rahad
You keep uploading the same chapter twice... is getting annoying.
2/26/2022 c6 Guest
Wow, this is amze shit bro. Eagerly await a new chapter
2/26/2022 c6 Ezeakel
Well interesting, but i am not very pleased with the development.
A necromancer in naruto universe? I hoped to see something different, not copy from solo leveling.
For example that the creator of the system is an otsutsuki searching for a proper vessel to incarnate in and naruto we can say was lucky or unlucky, everyone one has his proper opinion.
The existence of mana also unnecessairy, it was to be replaced with chakra.
What i am trying to say is as the event are happening in narutoverse, the system and the powers should be in accorde with narutoverse, something i did not find here.
2/26/2022 c6 ShadowVladimirSilverBlood
So he leveled up from lvl 7 to lvl 7, switched his title from "Genin of Konoha" back to "the gamer" and got the same class reward from the "survive" job quest and the "Protection of Tazuna" quest? Since you gave him the job change ability one would think he would receive a second class from the second quest completion or at least a class upgrade from receiving the same class twice. Also I thought this was going to be a crossover of naruto and the gamer but you seem to be going away from the gamer and into solo leveling.
2/25/2022 c6 2Xerzo LotCN
Also why can they talk so soon that wasn't something until they reached a much stronger advanced shadow rank

Besides that idk kinda annoyed it went this route lol
2/25/2022 c2 Xerzo LotCN
Also entirely forgot so mp is stamina maybe martial points i guess or something but doesn't Naruto have an incredible amount of stamina?
Or is it something else
2/25/2022 c3 Xerzo LotCN
Also entirely forgot to mention why do you have Naruto luck at 1 id say he pretty lucky canon with gambling and stuff
Sure bad stuff happens to him cause discrimination or evil peoples plans but that just plot not his actual luck

Because i got side tracked on the wasted job quest
As i had been keeping it in mind prior to comment when i reached the latest chapter
2/25/2022 c4 Xerzo LotCN
I wasnt gonna comment until i caught up but this chapter was bit upsetting and even if late i wanted to answer questions

I cant believe you did the job quest so early he is no where near the level for it to pop yet he wasnt ready yet
why do it to just make kt a massive waste and to gave him necromancer ugh id be just as upset as shadow lord class as well
i was looking forward to something that fit naruto not something useless that get him in massive trouble using
And to only have 2 nin and then bring out the 1st to just end it immediately
Also 12 second i honestly figured if you were doing it so stupidly early to waste it he pop into the seal not that it change much kyuubi rampaging against the 1st or Naruto using kyuubi chakra but still to crank uo the time
Also does not really make any sense to get that class he hasnt killed anyone nor really does he so it doesn't fit at all

Especially as you aren't giving him 1 point in each stat each level and you arent giving him workout quest so he finds out he can train to get stats so it be better to save extra points til the grind is harder

Now onto my answer to the question lol

Pairing id like it if it was harem cause Naruto deserves love and i like naruto x harem please and thank you who ever is fine be it from leaf or other villages the fem containers older women girls his age changing stuff so some females aren't dead to waifu them what

Chakra natures well id like if one of 2 thing either he has multiple natures ie the ones his parents have
or the game doesnt give him an advantage or a disadvantage by default and natures are strength by leveling the natures ie on the chakra oaper it show as all 5 but he would have to level them to make them useful but he doesn't have strong or weak and he can train them all to be strong without the hindrance of weaker natures he doesn't have affinity to being harder

I dont hate sakura i do think she is a bit fucked to naruto
but i dont mind her actually being with Naruto in a naruto x harem pairing
but both her and hinata honestly should not be the solo pairing with naruto sure both can work and both are ok
but sakura to stuck in her ways and hinata not enough interaction to rushed to just happen
Also i hate the boruto series and despise boruto lol also i hate naruto older hair style short looks bad on him

As cliche as it is a ninja swords lols but i honestly dont care if it sword or staff or daggers whatever or none at all completely fine

Favorite villian sure thus main antagonist are cool but i like the hot female villianesses lol

No no shadow army please change his job it be pointless and it would fit naruto verse also it piss the death god off stealing his souls also he be killed by someone for doing necromancer would not have shadow army only the lord does necro have legitimate corpses of the dead

Well toad works i guess
but something actually cool be nice
As over done as it is dragon or demons or foxes

Also honestly he should not have been able to deny the tutorial quest that makes no sense
Also im still upset you forced the job quest to waste it
I honestly thought it was the battle of the bridge starting and he had to save tsunami and the kid from bandits cause he pissed haku off instead of befriending them cause he stopped their joke of im a boy by calling them out then dissing zabs
Etc
2/24/2022 c1 1Literally useless
damn, the game nerf Naruto's luck
it's hard mode now
2/24/2022 c6 Koncor the great
1. A. Hanzo the salamander...? If you want a why I don't have one well other than the man who made the leafs 3 sages famous for being on the list as long as a single hands fingers of people who did not become unalive to hanzo the salamander would be a great teacher to this naruto not to mention dudes got swager.

2. Wave odly enough.

3. Original I mean shipuden kinda was just one power wank after another unlike start naruto were ninjas weren't walking thermonuclear natural disasters in human skin.
1. B. Or hayate I mean I would much rather this be literally the only story that someone calls out mister ninja info cards on the like 37 levels of obvious traitor he's giving off and hayate dosn't investigate a man who killed 8 ambu and was still fresh enough to fake out kakashi then sneak back into the hospital and kill or capture two people who were not in life-threatening injury without raising any alarms alone I mean obviously hayate's death is like several paradoxical how's in canon and honestly if naruto can see through him he can extort the sound 3 pretty easily after all it dosn't take a genius to do the math that their master set them up to die and they survived and didn't trust them with the obvious info on his spy who was being obvious needless to say naruto being wiser probably will pick up on things and hayate can live till tsunade returns and save him because leaf medical ninja are kinda incompetent.
2/24/2022 c2 Ozmat125
I don’t know if this is too late or not but I think as Naruto gets closer to females he should get a date quest that increase their affection level and whoever seems to be the most popular pairing he goes out with, as for chakra nature,realistically he should be able to get them all through the game and extensive training, but I think his natural affinitys should be the same as Minatos,(water wind and lightning) and fire when he’s using kuramas chakra
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