for Bonded16h c1 Obsidian Dreamweaver
Hello dear Author,
I hope you're doing great!
I read your story "Bonded" yesterday, and I absolutely loved it. Your storytelling is captivating, and the way you build your world and characters is truly inspiring. As I read, I could vividly picture it as a stunning comic or even an animation it has so much potential!
I'm Lydia, a professional commission artist specializing in comics, manga, character designs, and illustrations. I’m passionate about bringing stories to life through art, and I would love the opportunity to visualize yours.
If you're interested, feel free to reach out:
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Looking forward to the possibility of working together!
Best regards,
Lydia
Hello dear Author,
I hope you're doing great!
I read your story "Bonded" yesterday, and I absolutely loved it. Your storytelling is captivating, and the way you build your world and characters is truly inspiring. As I read, I could vividly picture it as a stunning comic or even an animation it has so much potential!
I'm Lydia, a professional commission artist specializing in comics, manga, character designs, and illustrations. I’m passionate about bringing stories to life through art, and I would love the opportunity to visualize yours.
If you're interested, feel free to reach out:
Discord: lydiacrazy
Instagram: lydiacrazy1
Email:
Looking forward to the possibility of working together!
Best regards,
Lydia
2/16 c67 slydino
Wonderful chapter. Great job and keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Wonderful chapter. Great job and keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
2/14 c67 yoto
bon chapitre
bon chapitre
2/14 c67 Guest
Interesting chapter, keep up the great work.
Interesting chapter, keep up the great work.
2/16 c67 ulttoanova
I'm still annoyed Harry and Tonks still haven't gotten together and are still dancing around each other but over all I liked the past two chapters, and am glad since it seems like the tonks issue will resolve in the next chapter or two. I don't have much else to say other than being really excited for the next chapter.
I'm still annoyed Harry and Tonks still haven't gotten together and are still dancing around each other but over all I liked the past two chapters, and am glad since it seems like the tonks issue will resolve in the next chapter or two. I don't have much else to say other than being really excited for the next chapter.
2/16 c1 erlinggomez23
a la mierda, voy a re leer porque aparte de la lucha con el dragón casi nada mas me suena
a la mierda, voy a re leer porque aparte de la lucha con el dragón casi nada mas me suena
2/16 c56 erlinggomez23
... por cosas xomo esta leo historias completas xd
no recuerdo casi nada y no se si re leer o segur, hm
... por cosas xomo esta leo historias completas xd
no recuerdo casi nada y no se si re leer o segur, hm
2/14 c66 Guest
The chapter is well written but I hope the talk with Dumbledore explains things because that plot with Fleur’s mother really came out of nowhere. I can’t recall a single hint at all to it not even a vague one. Am I dim?
The chapter is well written but I hope the talk with Dumbledore explains things because that plot with Fleur’s mother really came out of nowhere. I can’t recall a single hint at all to it not even a vague one. Am I dim?
2/14 c65 Ep
Sympa
Sympa
2/14 c66 khr
Not sure if 'My mother sleeps around and such' and "My every instinct tells me to do as my mother does, to live a life as she does." part was actually necessary or not. I believe you've tried to show us that she refuses to be that kind of woman, yet the way you write it tells us that regardless of her actions, there will be temptetion in her heart.
Also charming-your-way-to-the-top kinda thing feels like it should bring ICW kind of attention (as I understand, they're magical NATO or something). It might get a pass for a school setting or something, but not sure about the actual government. Feels like in this setting, Veela charm is exceptionally dangerous, almost like Imperius.
Apologies for only criticising, love your works but I felt like someone should point these things out.
And of course, thanks for the chapter.
Not sure if 'My mother sleeps around and such' and "My every instinct tells me to do as my mother does, to live a life as she does." part was actually necessary or not. I believe you've tried to show us that she refuses to be that kind of woman, yet the way you write it tells us that regardless of her actions, there will be temptetion in her heart.
Also charming-your-way-to-the-top kinda thing feels like it should bring ICW kind of attention (as I understand, they're magical NATO or something). It might get a pass for a school setting or something, but not sure about the actual government. Feels like in this setting, Veela charm is exceptionally dangerous, almost like Imperius.
Apologies for only criticising, love your works but I felt like someone should point these things out.
And of course, thanks for the chapter.