for Bonded4/11 c58 EVIL-SAGE
Well done great chapter! you honestly caught me a little off guard with the last part. As any great author should!
Well done great chapter! you honestly caught me a little off guard with the last part. As any great author should!
4/11 c72 zenheim
For once, I'm not surprised that Fudge refuses to acknowledge Voldemort's return. Without context, it really does sound impossible that Harry bitch-slapped Voldy xd
For once, I'm not surprised that Fudge refuses to acknowledge Voldemort's return. Without context, it really does sound impossible that Harry bitch-slapped Voldy xd
4/11 c72 DaV1nc136
Nicely done with this chapter!
As always, no matter what version of fanfiction of Harry Potter, Cornelius Fudge is a sycophantic politician to the bitter end.
I can’t wait to see how Harry dispenses with him and his ilk along wirh Voldemort and his Death Eaters.
Every, last, one.
Of course, hopefully after we see harry finally confide in Tonks and Fleur about his extraterrestrial symbiotic hitchhiker.
And perhaps a good lemon here and there between the three of them?
See you for the next chapter!
Nicely done with this chapter!
As always, no matter what version of fanfiction of Harry Potter, Cornelius Fudge is a sycophantic politician to the bitter end.
I can’t wait to see how Harry dispenses with him and his ilk along wirh Voldemort and his Death Eaters.
Every, last, one.
Of course, hopefully after we see harry finally confide in Tonks and Fleur about his extraterrestrial symbiotic hitchhiker.
And perhaps a good lemon here and there between the three of them?
See you for the next chapter!
4/11 c72 Archdruid89
Personally, I think you should've written that Harry actually calls Fumbling Fudge the following to his face in the Hospital Wing, which would've gotten the windbag even more royally pissed off:
X.) Death Eater stooge
X.) Death Eater apple-polisher
X.) Death Eater cocksucker
And Fudge's face would turn as purple as his uncle's because Fudge is SO stupid to the point of actually agreeing with the Death Eaters because they bribed him into silence and whatever else against Harry and Dumbledore.
I hope that you'll write in future chapters that Harry will be working with Fleur and Dora about what they can do to fight against Voldemort along with the Tonks and Delacour families, too regardless of what Fumbling Fudge will do in an attempt to destroy Harry and Dumbledore politically and publicly, which Harry will fight back against with the help of those who believe him about Snakeface and those who support him.
I think a small, but powerful portion of Venom should be split from Harry into both Fleur and Dora via naughty intimacy, which gives them both the power to be hosts of a symbiote à la Carnage and they would call themselves something similar to She-Venom. For Fleur's symbiote, her color will be maybe gold and Dora's symbiote color will be purple.
Another thing is that I believe in another future chapter, Harry has FINALLY reached the end of his rope with Fumbling Fudge, and Venom agrees. They both work on ideas on what they can and will do to scare Fudge by exposing themselves via transforming into Venom, which will scare Fudge shitless to the point of either wetting or soiling himself, making him horrified of the "monster," even whimpering for his mummy. Harry as Venom will make a strong statement to everybody that has supported Fumbling Fudge are nothing short of corrupt and dishonest, believing they can get away with playing God, some of which will make them scared of Venom, but others will retaliate in outraged indignity, because there are some wizards and witches who work in the Ministry of Magic who believe it is their birthright to play God with whomever, whatever, wherever, whenever, and however without getting in trouble, believing they are above the law when they clearly aren't.
Personally, I think you should've written that Harry actually calls Fumbling Fudge the following to his face in the Hospital Wing, which would've gotten the windbag even more royally pissed off:
X.) Death Eater stooge
X.) Death Eater apple-polisher
X.) Death Eater cocksucker
And Fudge's face would turn as purple as his uncle's because Fudge is SO stupid to the point of actually agreeing with the Death Eaters because they bribed him into silence and whatever else against Harry and Dumbledore.
I hope that you'll write in future chapters that Harry will be working with Fleur and Dora about what they can do to fight against Voldemort along with the Tonks and Delacour families, too regardless of what Fumbling Fudge will do in an attempt to destroy Harry and Dumbledore politically and publicly, which Harry will fight back against with the help of those who believe him about Snakeface and those who support him.
I think a small, but powerful portion of Venom should be split from Harry into both Fleur and Dora via naughty intimacy, which gives them both the power to be hosts of a symbiote à la Carnage and they would call themselves something similar to She-Venom. For Fleur's symbiote, her color will be maybe gold and Dora's symbiote color will be purple.
Another thing is that I believe in another future chapter, Harry has FINALLY reached the end of his rope with Fumbling Fudge, and Venom agrees. They both work on ideas on what they can and will do to scare Fudge by exposing themselves via transforming into Venom, which will scare Fudge shitless to the point of either wetting or soiling himself, making him horrified of the "monster," even whimpering for his mummy. Harry as Venom will make a strong statement to everybody that has supported Fumbling Fudge are nothing short of corrupt and dishonest, believing they can get away with playing God, some of which will make them scared of Venom, but others will retaliate in outraged indignity, because there are some wizards and witches who work in the Ministry of Magic who believe it is their birthright to play God with whomever, whatever, wherever, whenever, and however without getting in trouble, believing they are above the law when they clearly aren't.
4/10 c72 
2Home of the Brave
You don't plan to put up with Fudge and Umbridge for an entire year, do you? I can't read a re-hash of 5th year again. I hope he bites off Fudges head over the summer.
2Home of the BraveYou don't plan to put up with Fudge and Umbridge for an entire year, do you? I can't read a re-hash of 5th year again. I hope he bites off Fudges head over the summer.
4/10 c72 Lord Chronus
So. Harry's playing the long game like Dumbledore did in book 5? Okay. While I did enjoy this filler chapter, I was hoping for a bit more of Fudge bashing, but I suppose even the writers of FF would be disgusted but the git to give him too much screen time.
Is Venom impervious to Dementors? Like, will he die? Sure, Harry can cast a Patronus, and Prongs can protect them, but if Harry's 5th Year summer similarly to canon, there's a dementor attack. But that would be harder to do, since Harry is either with Sirius or Tonks due to Venom offing the Dursleys. Though it would be easy to get Harry while he's on a walk near Tonks' house... wait. Oh. Shit. I forgot about the toad. Umbitch is gonna be here, right? I wonder how fast Venom will deal with her BS. Oh, I wanna see his reaction to Umbitch so bad right now. It's gonna be hilarious.
Whoo hoo! Tonks is gonna be back in the story. More Tonks! Tonksie! Tonksie! Tonksie! Tonksie! Tonksie! Tonksie! Tonksie!
I read your response to kishnokurobi, and I agree. That's terrifying. Time-Travelling Voldy is terrifying enough, add the Fidelius, near-unstoppable.
So. Harry's playing the long game like Dumbledore did in book 5? Okay. While I did enjoy this filler chapter, I was hoping for a bit more of Fudge bashing, but I suppose even the writers of FF would be disgusted but the git to give him too much screen time.
Is Venom impervious to Dementors? Like, will he die? Sure, Harry can cast a Patronus, and Prongs can protect them, but if Harry's 5th Year summer similarly to canon, there's a dementor attack. But that would be harder to do, since Harry is either with Sirius or Tonks due to Venom offing the Dursleys. Though it would be easy to get Harry while he's on a walk near Tonks' house... wait. Oh. Shit. I forgot about the toad. Umbitch is gonna be here, right? I wonder how fast Venom will deal with her BS. Oh, I wanna see his reaction to Umbitch so bad right now. It's gonna be hilarious.
Whoo hoo! Tonks is gonna be back in the story. More Tonks! Tonksie! Tonksie! Tonksie! Tonksie! Tonksie! Tonksie! Tonksie!
I read your response to kishnokurobi, and I agree. That's terrifying. Time-Travelling Voldy is terrifying enough, add the Fidelius, near-unstoppable.
4/10 c72 Misaamane10
Hi! I wanted to let you know how much I admire your writing. Your story truly stood out to me, and I couldn’t help but imagine how incredible it would be as a comic.
I’m a commission-based digital artist with experience working on comics in collaboration with authors. If you’re open to the idea, I’d love to explore the possibility of working together to bring your story to life in a visual format.
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Hi! I wanted to let you know how much I admire your writing. Your story truly stood out to me, and I couldn’t help but imagine how incredible it would be as a comic.
I’m a commission-based digital artist with experience working on comics in collaboration with authors. If you’re open to the idea, I’d love to explore the possibility of working together to bring your story to life in a visual format.
Feel free to contact me on Discord (ervin_mg0679) or Twitter ( kelley_lee22629) if this interests you. I’d love to hear your thoughts!
4/10 c72 8Jebest4781
And now Harry and Venom will be dealing with the bullshittery of the 5th year events. It’ll take herlucean efforts for them to not kill a lot of people until the fight at the ministry.
8Jebest4781And now Harry and Venom will be dealing with the bullshittery of the 5th year events. It’ll take herlucean efforts for them to not kill a lot of people until the fight at the ministry.
4/10 c72 Seananagan
Slightly torn on you removing that particular advantage for Voldemort, it might have made things more interesting in terms of challenge. But overall I am glad he doesn’t have it. I am not sure Harry and Venom at this stage could handle him with that. Thanks for more content, looking forward to your next update!
Slightly torn on you removing that particular advantage for Voldemort, it might have made things more interesting in terms of challenge. But overall I am glad he doesn’t have it. I am not sure Harry and Venom at this stage could handle him with that. Thanks for more content, looking forward to your next update!