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fanfiction is having issues. I've just finished ch.68. great job so far. thanks.
fanfiction is having issues. I've just finished ch.68. great job so far. thanks.
3/1 c68 Guest
Just crap...now story is going as canon...what the need of writting these to lengthen the plot when u easily resurrected the dark lord...this story is another let down and trash compared to other abandoned trash here
Just crap...now story is going as canon...what the need of writting these to lengthen the plot when u easily resurrected the dark lord...this story is another let down and trash compared to other abandoned trash here
2/28 c65 Lucifer-Satani
First, for some reason FFN refused to allow me to post a review, so I'm posting this as a Guest. Now, here's the review lol
God, this chapter was amazing. First, there's nothing "probable" about the legality of what Hagrid did. Ironically, despite everything that happens in the books, that's one of the most illegal acts that was talked about. Second. God I loved Harry/Venoms "greetings" to Chicken-Legs. Loved that.
Now, obviously you got the last reference. I admit, I couldn't really think of any, so that was rather easy.
This chapters fun fact is kinda weird, in that I couldn't really think of any (I've had an off week), so this is less histroy or anything, and more Pop Culture. The Lady Gaga/Bruno Mars song "Die With A Smile" (I'm sure you've heard it) was actually written by by Bruno at the end of Attack on Titan from the Perspective of Eren. It's supposed to be an inner dialogue of his thoughts after everything (won't spoil it, don't know if you've watched it.)
Please have Harry say something like this too Voldemore "Okay. Look. We both said a lot of things that you're going to regret. But I think we can put our differences behind us. For science. You monster."
First, for some reason FFN refused to allow me to post a review, so I'm posting this as a Guest. Now, here's the review lol
God, this chapter was amazing. First, there's nothing "probable" about the legality of what Hagrid did. Ironically, despite everything that happens in the books, that's one of the most illegal acts that was talked about. Second. God I loved Harry/Venoms "greetings" to Chicken-Legs. Loved that.
Now, obviously you got the last reference. I admit, I couldn't really think of any, so that was rather easy.
This chapters fun fact is kinda weird, in that I couldn't really think of any (I've had an off week), so this is less histroy or anything, and more Pop Culture. The Lady Gaga/Bruno Mars song "Die With A Smile" (I'm sure you've heard it) was actually written by by Bruno at the end of Attack on Titan from the Perspective of Eren. It's supposed to be an inner dialogue of his thoughts after everything (won't spoil it, don't know if you've watched it.)
Please have Harry say something like this too Voldemore "Okay. Look. We both said a lot of things that you're going to regret. But I think we can put our differences behind us. For science. You monster."
2/28 c65 Guest
Seriously should have Tommy boy and his cult of fools get surprised and most of the death eaters get butchered by venom
Seriously should have Tommy boy and his cult of fools get surprised and most of the death eaters get butchered by venom
2/28 c68 yoto
bon chapitre
bon chapitre
2/28 c68 Fire turtle
Ok managed to figure it out (had to go back to a previous chapter for some reason), and for some reason I wasn’t getting any new chapters after c65. So how will the blood thing work out? Will it back fire and let harry blood bend Tom, or maybe Tom will gain the powers of a symbiote but because he isn’t compatible it ends up eating him from the inside out. Also is the plump woman umbridge?
Ok managed to figure it out (had to go back to a previous chapter for some reason), and for some reason I wasn’t getting any new chapters after c65. So how will the blood thing work out? Will it back fire and let harry blood bend Tom, or maybe Tom will gain the powers of a symbiote but because he isn’t compatible it ends up eating him from the inside out. Also is the plump woman umbridge?
2/28 c64 Fire turtle
Hey for some reason I can only look up to chapter 64. What’s going on?
Hey for some reason I can only look up to chapter 64. What’s going on?
2/28 c68 Sci-fi FREAK
Will Knull be in this story? I feel like he will be an even more dangerous and powerful villain than that “pale face” creep.
Will Knull be in this story? I feel like he will be an even more dangerous and powerful villain than that “pale face” creep.
3/2 c68 Lord Chronus
While I did appreciate how you (through Venom) asked what's the point of the judges in the third task (I've been trying to figure that one for ages), you win if you grab the cup. The acromantula scene was rather perfect, and honestly, I forgot about Winky. Nice move there. And what happened to Barty? Both of em.
Also, quick q: Venom used to hate loud noises, and fire right? While he's now fire proof, what about the Venom strand in the wand? If there's a sonic burst of sound hitting Harry/Venom(and also the wand), won't the wand:
1. Shatter, since loud bursts of noice can cause concrete to crack, glass to shatter, etc.
2. Be affected by the noise, since a Venom strand was used in the creation of the wand?
Also, my respect for you kinda doubled(or tripled. Trying to figure out which), cause wrestling a kid while trying to use a computer while not breaking said computer is hard. Managing to use that computer while wrestling the kid? Call Ethan Hunt, cause that's Mission Impossible-level impossible.
While I did appreciate how you (through Venom) asked what's the point of the judges in the third task (I've been trying to figure that one for ages), you win if you grab the cup. The acromantula scene was rather perfect, and honestly, I forgot about Winky. Nice move there. And what happened to Barty? Both of em.
Also, quick q: Venom used to hate loud noises, and fire right? While he's now fire proof, what about the Venom strand in the wand? If there's a sonic burst of sound hitting Harry/Venom(and also the wand), won't the wand:
1. Shatter, since loud bursts of noice can cause concrete to crack, glass to shatter, etc.
2. Be affected by the noise, since a Venom strand was used in the creation of the wand?
Also, my respect for you kinda doubled(or tripled. Trying to figure out which), cause wrestling a kid while trying to use a computer while not breaking said computer is hard. Managing to use that computer while wrestling the kid? Call Ethan Hunt, cause that's Mission Impossible-level impossible.
3/2 c64 justanfanboy
i do hope voldie didnt get a symbonite lol cause if he can work together with one he is way to OP then lol
i do hope voldie didnt get a symbonite lol cause if he can work together with one he is way to OP then lol
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