for Origin5/24 c5 10tailsJinchurikiNaruto
Can you add Hinata, ino, kurenai and Yugao Uzuki (purple hair anbu) to the harem please
Can you add Hinata, ino, kurenai and Yugao Uzuki (purple hair anbu) to the harem please
4/25 c4 
1NarutoTiny0852
How dare you, you need to make it so the genra is romance there's to many romantic things in this story.
1NarutoTiny0852How dare you, you need to make it so the genra is romance there's to many romantic things in this story.
2/1 c5 Borello
interesting work.
interesting work.
1/29 c4 Borello
good work.
good work.
1/31 c5 4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Whoowee! Insane chapter! And ooooh crud! Not only has Zabuza been powered up (likely Haku as well), but both Kisame AND Itachi are here as well! This can only end up going one way: utter chaos! I’m already getting excited at the possible prospects this could bring! I’m also really enjoying Sasuke’s and Kiba’s interactions along with the former beginning to lighten up! And oh~? Seems Kurenai might consider Kakashi as a (possibly) better BF than Asuma! Fascinating…
4Antex-The Legendary ZoroarkWhoowee! Insane chapter! And ooooh crud! Not only has Zabuza been powered up (likely Haku as well), but both Kisame AND Itachi are here as well! This can only end up going one way: utter chaos! I’m already getting excited at the possible prospects this could bring! I’m also really enjoying Sasuke’s and Kiba’s interactions along with the former beginning to lighten up! And oh~? Seems Kurenai might consider Kakashi as a (possibly) better BF than Asuma! Fascinating…
1/28 c3 Borello
good work. but i wonder if naruto relate to a thunder god as zeus or thor.
good work. but i wonder if naruto relate to a thunder god as zeus or thor.
1/27 c2 Borello
nice work.
nice work.
1/26 c2 Guest
I’m not sure on kuro for the harem maybe mei or haku or both instead. I like that I got rid of Sakura she’s just a worthless bitch. Mikoto as mage was a wonderful surprising twist. Maybe make naruto in the future learn kenjutsu to honor his mother besides fuin honors both parents
I’m not sure on kuro for the harem maybe mei or haku or both instead. I like that I got rid of Sakura she’s just a worthless bitch. Mikoto as mage was a wonderful surprising twist. Maybe make naruto in the future learn kenjutsu to honor his mother besides fuin honors both parents
1/26 c1 Guest
This is excellent! Truly amazing! U should however maybe make some fights close like with zabuza since he hasn’t learned kenjutsu yet maybe make it close but he still wins. Same with if he were to fight rock lee lee is a physical power house and naruto is honorable so he could fight him in only Taijutsu and still win or lose up to u just some ideas
This is excellent! Truly amazing! U should however maybe make some fights close like with zabuza since he hasn’t learned kenjutsu yet maybe make it close but he still wins. Same with if he were to fight rock lee lee is a physical power house and naruto is honorable so he could fight him in only Taijutsu and still win or lose up to u just some ideas