for Origin1/13 c1 Guest
Utter trash. Do no bother wasting your time.
Utter trash. Do no bother wasting your time.
9/19/2023 c5 Guest
So this is just smut with no plot and an unnecessary rape scene, and you narutards wonder why both every other fanbase base gives you all well justified shit and hate as well as no one from any other fanbase respects/ takes yoall seriously its because of these pedo stories thats why
So this is just smut with no plot and an unnecessary rape scene, and you narutards wonder why both every other fanbase base gives you all well justified shit and hate as well as no one from any other fanbase respects/ takes yoall seriously its because of these pedo stories thats why
8/17/2023 c5 Guest
Also I don't like how naruto has everything handed to him like he became kage level at eight and tensigan he's not even hyuga like makes no sense and there's zero character development all his fights are gonna be ease it's so boring cause there is no character development you add cringe Japanese phrases in the nickname just call them there actually names with the phrases and then all of a sudden he gets all chakra natures he doesn't even train there's zero development for naruto
Also I don't like how naruto has everything handed to him like he became kage level at eight and tensigan he's not even hyuga like makes no sense and there's zero character development all his fights are gonna be ease it's so boring cause there is no character development you add cringe Japanese phrases in the nickname just call them there actually names with the phrases and then all of a sudden he gets all chakra natures he doesn't even train there's zero development for naruto
8/17/2023 c2 Guest
The only thing i do not like about this story is that you add nicknames with the Japanese phrases like chan san baachan and it's annoying I don't want to read
Suki-chan abd tayu-chan it gets annoying can you just say there names.
The only thing i do not like about this story is that you add nicknames with the Japanese phrases like chan san baachan and it's annoying I don't want to read
Suki-chan abd tayu-chan it gets annoying can you just say there names.
9/12/2022 c5 SPark681
Hmm, so Itachi and Kisame might be going after Naruto their funeral anyways keep up the great work!
Hmm, so Itachi and Kisame might be going after Naruto their funeral anyways keep up the great work!
5/24/2022 c5 
310tailsJinchurikiNaruto
Can you add Hinata, ino, kurenai and Yugao Uzuki (purple hair anbu) to the harem please
310tailsJinchurikiNarutoCan you add Hinata, ino, kurenai and Yugao Uzuki (purple hair anbu) to the harem please
4/25/2022 c4 1NarutoTiny0852
How dare you, you need to make it so the genra is romance there's to many romantic things in this story.
1NarutoTiny0852How dare you, you need to make it so the genra is romance there's to many romantic things in this story.
2/1/2022 c5 Borello
interesting work.
interesting work.
1/29/2022 c4 Borello
good work.
good work.
1/31/2022 c5 4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Whoowee! Insane chapter! And ooooh crud! Not only has Zabuza been powered up (likely Haku as well), but both Kisame AND Itachi are here as well! This can only end up going one way: utter chaos! I’m already getting excited at the possible prospects this could bring! I’m also really enjoying Sasuke’s and Kiba’s interactions along with the former beginning to lighten up! And oh~? Seems Kurenai might consider Kakashi as a (possibly) better BF than Asuma! Fascinating…
4Antex-The Legendary ZoroarkWhoowee! Insane chapter! And ooooh crud! Not only has Zabuza been powered up (likely Haku as well), but both Kisame AND Itachi are here as well! This can only end up going one way: utter chaos! I’m already getting excited at the possible prospects this could bring! I’m also really enjoying Sasuke’s and Kiba’s interactions along with the former beginning to lighten up! And oh~? Seems Kurenai might consider Kakashi as a (possibly) better BF than Asuma! Fascinating…