8/17/2024 c1 CuriousAnon
Are any of the alternate timelines you mentioned actual fanfics? Or did youmake them up?
Are any of the alternate timelines you mentioned actual fanfics? Or did youmake them up?
7/11/2024 c7 Jareth Arian
Hope to see the Next Reaction Chapters Soon, this is getting Interesting to see how they'll react.
Hope to see the Next Reaction Chapters Soon, this is getting Interesting to see how they'll react.
7/11/2024 c6 Jareth Arian
I suggest making them watch some of SAO Fight Scenes as a form of Entertainment during their Breaks, but limit it to not revealing that they're in a Game, possibly do some that completely hides the fact that it is a Game but Game like.
I suggest making them watch some of SAO Fight Scenes as a form of Entertainment during their Breaks, but limit it to not revealing that they're in a Game, possibly do some that completely hides the fact that it is a Game but Game like.
4/11/2024 c5 Suzuya Akabane
For some reason, I imagine that Kirin's mother's appearance is the appearance of Raiden Mei from Honkai Impact 3rd, or Yatogami Tohka from Date A Live, who is already mature in that her appearance is estimated to be around 22 years old.
For some reason, I imagine that Kirin's mother's appearance is the appearance of Raiden Mei from Honkai Impact 3rd, or Yatogami Tohka from Date A Live, who is already mature in that her appearance is estimated to be around 22 years old.
3/22/2024 c7 Dark sky
I really enjoyed the fic and in waiting for the new chapter
Can ya give me an estimation when it will be updated
I really enjoyed the fic and in waiting for the new chapter
Can ya give me an estimation when it will be updated
3/5/2024 c1 Lycrow
I instantly knew if involved in dimension trouble, it's Zelretch fault, and I knew he was gonna say he's bored if the last 3 fics involving him I've read says anything
I instantly knew if involved in dimension trouble, it's Zelretch fault, and I knew he was gonna say he's bored if the last 3 fics involving him I've read says anything
3/3/2024 c7 4SkyChaser17
Oooooh goody the next chapter gonna be lit... For many reasons that one. I understand the stooges gotta be that stupid peanut gallery, but they should at least get some character growth for the next one, at least Ren to dismiss the concept it's a game world altogether cause that bust in chapter is not for the faint of heart.
It goes without saying that this chapter is good, sure, while too short as usual for me, it's amusing nonetheless. Can't wait for more of the blue rose hero though, irl is a pain but I'll wait. XP
On an unrelated note, perhaps that old vampire should show a clip or two regarding Yuuki's combat prowess in Alo? At least show why she's the Zekken, and Kirito just cutting magic... Or maybe that one scene with Fanatio? Just a small feat show so the heroes could have something to compare on why Eugeo and Kirin are using that transformation look. Simply a food for thought. I like typical react fic, but having them have growth while still in character is also gonna make this story much more meaningful for the four heroes to have something to properly look up or live up to?
Again, just a ramble. Loved your work, stay healthy and motivated man, I'll see you on the next one XD
Oooooh goody the next chapter gonna be lit... For many reasons that one. I understand the stooges gotta be that stupid peanut gallery, but they should at least get some character growth for the next one, at least Ren to dismiss the concept it's a game world altogether cause that bust in chapter is not for the faint of heart.
It goes without saying that this chapter is good, sure, while too short as usual for me, it's amusing nonetheless. Can't wait for more of the blue rose hero though, irl is a pain but I'll wait. XP
On an unrelated note, perhaps that old vampire should show a clip or two regarding Yuuki's combat prowess in Alo? At least show why she's the Zekken, and Kirito just cutting magic... Or maybe that one scene with Fanatio? Just a small feat show so the heroes could have something to compare on why Eugeo and Kirin are using that transformation look. Simply a food for thought. I like typical react fic, but having them have growth while still in character is also gonna make this story much more meaningful for the four heroes to have something to properly look up or live up to?
Again, just a ramble. Loved your work, stay healthy and motivated man, I'll see you on the next one XD
2/21/2024 c7 Pharamine
Yay you're back! Congratulations on getting a job, I know how hard it is, took me almost half a year to land where I am now.
And of course congratulations on getting a TVTropes page, that's an achievement I tell you. Leave a link to it in the next chapter you'll post (either here or in story proper) I know FFN doesn't like links but you can always change some symbols so it'll stop being a link, just don't forget to tell us what symbols to change back so we can get the link.
Plenty of funny moments before the big gut punch that is Rabier mission. Also I would love to see what shields Fumi has enough resonance with for advanced weapon control.
We'll be waiting for the next one, take care.
Yay you're back! Congratulations on getting a job, I know how hard it is, took me almost half a year to land where I am now.
And of course congratulations on getting a TVTropes page, that's an achievement I tell you. Leave a link to it in the next chapter you'll post (either here or in story proper) I know FFN doesn't like links but you can always change some symbols so it'll stop being a link, just don't forget to tell us what symbols to change back so we can get the link.
Plenty of funny moments before the big gut punch that is Rabier mission. Also I would love to see what shields Fumi has enough resonance with for advanced weapon control.
We'll be waiting for the next one, take care.
2/20/2024 c7 djinn
great new chapter, looking forward to the next chapter.
great new chapter, looking forward to the next chapter.
2/19/2024 c7 T.V. 2000
Before talking about the chapter I would like to say a few things. First, congratulations on turning 4 years with your story and the BRSH is included in TV Tropes.
As for the delay of the next chapter, it is understood that you have responsibilities in real life, that should never be criticized, but if you are open to advice, it would be a good idea that starting from this chapter, you can focus your attention on the following chapters of the main story to be able to conclude the arc of the northern territory. But I will respect your decision.
In addition, it is likely that the option of dividing the chapter into parts will win.
As for what you said about Ren, well I can't deny it. He is the least problematic hero but that doesn't take away from the fact that he has defects that stop him from being a Good Hero. When the chapter where Gaelion and Wyndia debut comes to be adapted, It is quite likely that Ren will begin to deny responsibility for his actions, he would even go so far as to claim that the Gaelion he killed was an "evil dragon" and did not have a "Daughter", Ren would simply do that because he cannot bear the guilt of having destroyed one. innocent family
He did that same action when the Party died during the Spirit Tortoise arc. So much so that he believed Malty's lies just because he couldn't bear that guilt.
Leaving that aside I will talk about chapter 7.
First, the cast's reaction to Beloukas is understandable, but if you compare him with other characters from Rising of Shield Hero, Beloukas is at least honest with his actions and doesn't act as if he didn't do anything wrong, unlike several Shield Hero characters like Malty or Balmus,
Regarding the Map series, I must make a mistake, one of the maps that Eugeo absorbed was from Q'ten Lo, it makes no sense for Beloukas to have a map of that place, if the country is an isolationist country located in the East, The only way to get there is by sea on a Boat in Siltvelt. The one exception to Q'ten Lo's isolationism is Siltvelt, as they rely on the flow of supplies from the demi-human nation for their daily necessities. Even then Siltvelt needs a specialized magic lantern just to allow their merchant vessel to enter and exit the nation.
As for the reaction of the 3 heroes to the ability: Map Projection , they have no reason to complain considering that they belittled Eugeo for absorbing an object that they considered "useless".
As for Arthur's debut, everyone reacted as they would have thought they would, particularly the reactions of the Queen, Melty and Motoyasu. I look forward to the moment when the episode where Motoyasu is beaten by Arthur is adapted, many of the cast will laugh at that and that It is known that Arthur and Guinevere are beginning to feel romantic feelings for each other.
I can't wait for everyone's reaction when Zelterch reveals that the Camelot King of his world is a woman, everyone would be shocked by this revelation.
As for the Ren and Kirito comparison that Asuna had noticed, it is above all accurate, because in the end both people are different people even if they have similarities. I hope Asuna or Kirito deduce that the 3 Stooge heroes only listen to what they want to hear, that is that they only listen to what is convenient for them.
As for what will happen in the next chapter, I feel that it should only be told from Eugeo's perspective, so omitting Anna's point of view is obligatory, because it is quite obvious that no one in the cast will want to see what those nobles They are doing to Anna and the other Demi-Humans.
but a reaction that I hope would be when they see the Sword of Rage, I can theorize that Kirito considered that sword as the Incarnation of Eugeo's anger or that the sword's powers would be the evil equivalent of Weapon perfect control, I understand if I am wrong on the latter. .although it is quite certain that the 3 puppets would claim that Eugeo has a cheat weapon like Naofumi. As I understand in the Light Novel, Naofumi told those 3 fools about Curse Series and even explained to them the consequences of using them, but even that, they They still believed that Naofumi was lying just because according to them, the Curse series did not exist in their games. I can't wait for the time when the SAO characters are going to silence those 3 for their erroneous arguments, obviously it won't be physically, worse verbally.
As for the last step of the chapter, it is clear that after the next chapter, there will be an interlude. The truth is I would have thought that the interlude would be after chapter 10 of BRSH, but I won't complain about that.
Anyway, as I said before in other reviews, take all the time you need to write the chapters. I may comment on something in the main story at any time, whether ideas or opinions.
Before talking about the chapter I would like to say a few things. First, congratulations on turning 4 years with your story and the BRSH is included in TV Tropes.
As for the delay of the next chapter, it is understood that you have responsibilities in real life, that should never be criticized, but if you are open to advice, it would be a good idea that starting from this chapter, you can focus your attention on the following chapters of the main story to be able to conclude the arc of the northern territory. But I will respect your decision.
In addition, it is likely that the option of dividing the chapter into parts will win.
As for what you said about Ren, well I can't deny it. He is the least problematic hero but that doesn't take away from the fact that he has defects that stop him from being a Good Hero. When the chapter where Gaelion and Wyndia debut comes to be adapted, It is quite likely that Ren will begin to deny responsibility for his actions, he would even go so far as to claim that the Gaelion he killed was an "evil dragon" and did not have a "Daughter", Ren would simply do that because he cannot bear the guilt of having destroyed one. innocent family
He did that same action when the Party died during the Spirit Tortoise arc. So much so that he believed Malty's lies just because he couldn't bear that guilt.
Leaving that aside I will talk about chapter 7.
First, the cast's reaction to Beloukas is understandable, but if you compare him with other characters from Rising of Shield Hero, Beloukas is at least honest with his actions and doesn't act as if he didn't do anything wrong, unlike several Shield Hero characters like Malty or Balmus,
Regarding the Map series, I must make a mistake, one of the maps that Eugeo absorbed was from Q'ten Lo, it makes no sense for Beloukas to have a map of that place, if the country is an isolationist country located in the East, The only way to get there is by sea on a Boat in Siltvelt. The one exception to Q'ten Lo's isolationism is Siltvelt, as they rely on the flow of supplies from the demi-human nation for their daily necessities. Even then Siltvelt needs a specialized magic lantern just to allow their merchant vessel to enter and exit the nation.
As for the reaction of the 3 heroes to the ability: Map Projection , they have no reason to complain considering that they belittled Eugeo for absorbing an object that they considered "useless".
As for Arthur's debut, everyone reacted as they would have thought they would, particularly the reactions of the Queen, Melty and Motoyasu. I look forward to the moment when the episode where Motoyasu is beaten by Arthur is adapted, many of the cast will laugh at that and that It is known that Arthur and Guinevere are beginning to feel romantic feelings for each other.
I can't wait for everyone's reaction when Zelterch reveals that the Camelot King of his world is a woman, everyone would be shocked by this revelation.
As for the Ren and Kirito comparison that Asuna had noticed, it is above all accurate, because in the end both people are different people even if they have similarities. I hope Asuna or Kirito deduce that the 3 Stooge heroes only listen to what they want to hear, that is that they only listen to what is convenient for them.
As for what will happen in the next chapter, I feel that it should only be told from Eugeo's perspective, so omitting Anna's point of view is obligatory, because it is quite obvious that no one in the cast will want to see what those nobles They are doing to Anna and the other Demi-Humans.
but a reaction that I hope would be when they see the Sword of Rage, I can theorize that Kirito considered that sword as the Incarnation of Eugeo's anger or that the sword's powers would be the evil equivalent of Weapon perfect control, I understand if I am wrong on the latter. .although it is quite certain that the 3 puppets would claim that Eugeo has a cheat weapon like Naofumi. As I understand in the Light Novel, Naofumi told those 3 fools about Curse Series and even explained to them the consequences of using them, but even that, they They still believed that Naofumi was lying just because according to them, the Curse series did not exist in their games. I can't wait for the time when the SAO characters are going to silence those 3 for their erroneous arguments, obviously it won't be physically, worse verbally.
As for the last step of the chapter, it is clear that after the next chapter, there will be an interlude. The truth is I would have thought that the interlude would be after chapter 10 of BRSH, but I won't complain about that.
Anyway, as I said before in other reviews, take all the time you need to write the chapters. I may comment on something in the main story at any time, whether ideas or opinions.
2/19/2024 c1 Guest
...dafuq is this cringe? *smh*
...dafuq is this cringe? *smh*
2/18/2024 c7 Lablord5
Another amazing chapter. You really do put a lot of effort into getting the personalities of the characters down. Whenever I try to write someone like Motoyasu or the Bitch Princess or Aultcray, I start cringing and just can’t bring myself to do it. Maybe I’m too nice a guy and am giving people too much credit, but I just feel like they’re too incompetent and comically evil to exist. Still, that’s neither here nor there. Great job with the reactions! Can’t wait to see how you get Ren to finally start taking his job as a hero seriously!
Another amazing chapter. You really do put a lot of effort into getting the personalities of the characters down. Whenever I try to write someone like Motoyasu or the Bitch Princess or Aultcray, I start cringing and just can’t bring myself to do it. Maybe I’m too nice a guy and am giving people too much credit, but I just feel like they’re too incompetent and comically evil to exist. Still, that’s neither here nor there. Great job with the reactions! Can’t wait to see how you get Ren to finally start taking his job as a hero seriously!