4/18/2022 c3 5fangs of death
Really good story so far! Asuna, I think she is gonna be happy and sad at the same time. Take your time.

4/18/2022 c3 E.T. 2000
I'm sorry you're in this kind of situation with your family. I apologize if at some point I made you feel pressured, you really are a great author, because you give dedication to the story. What I like about your story, the prominence that Eugeo is given deserves, since a character he received a great development as a person.

Anyway, this chapter, the highlight was the reactions of the characters, Yui's arguments and the behavior of some SAO and ROSH characters.

being honest the only one of 3 stooges with the ability to change would be Ren, since at least he is taking note of Eugeo's swords skills. I don't see Motoyasu and Itsuki changing, especially Itsuki, who is actually an arrogant brat that he is too proud to admit he's wrong.

It is to be expected that Sao's characters have a bad opinion about the trash king, that same opinion will get worse in the next chapter when he sees how stupid and spiteful he really is with the demihumans and also Sao's characters will get upset when they see the twisted racist religion by Merlomark

I also want to mention how funny when they compare Erhard with Agil, it would be funny if Kirito mentioned that Erhard is an old Agil and less stingy. Speaking of comparisons, I realize that Anna is like older Lisbeth but much more perverted and wyndia is like Silica

post data:please don't let Ren learn the Mother's Rosario and and please don't add the horrible scene from chapter 7, you know what I mean

4/18/2022 c3 3coronadomontes
good

4/18/2022 c3 1Jpx0999
i know there are some sexs scenes in future chapters
youre gonna skip thoses? specially since yui and filo are watching as well

4/18/2022 c3 13Have a Little Feith
I'll be honest, I'm eagerly awaiting the reveal of Mash/Mashu as the Shield Spirit. I wonder if any of the others will recognize her, or the mentions of the Emiya family. I'd certainly be laughing if at least one of them was familiar. Motoyaso seems like a likely candidate. He'd certainly be into a Waifu/Husbando Collection Simulator like FGO. His salt would be legendary to see.

4/18/2022 c3 8Quathis
Glad to see them taking notes for the future. Best not to forget the knowledge gained here. And I did enjoy the humor of the two weaponshop owners having the same VA being teased here. And the real identity of Kirin. Until next time.

4/14/2022 c2 Stardust
the 3 stooges are much worse in the light novel, they don't just think they're in a game and see the people of that world as NPCs. in the first council of the 4 heroes of the novel they say that they will not die but will simply wake up in a hospital and go back to work. In other words, they stupidly believe that they are immortal. the reason why they were willing to kill Naofumi was because he has the wrong idea that only a hero can kill another hero, Motoyasu believed that if he killed Naofumi, he would simply return to his home world if he killed him, which is completely illogical.

Worse still, they think that the reason for their defeat in the third wave was because they believe that it was the typical game event where the protagonists cannot win. Hearing such nonsense, Naofumi believes that it is a complete miracle that those idiots are still alive. They also believe that Naofumi is strong because he received the help of a god, which Naofumi tells him that no such thing happened

4/9/2022 c2 Guest
please have Alice Knight beat up Motoyasu both physically and verbally, when she learns of Motoyasu's actions.