
2/18/2024 c7 Lablord5
Another amazing chapter. You really do put a lot of effort into getting the personalities of the characters down. Whenever I try to write someone like Motoyasu or the Bitch Princess or Aultcray, I start cringing and just can’t bring myself to do it. Maybe I’m too nice a guy and am giving people too much credit, but I just feel like they’re too incompetent and comically evil to exist. Still, that’s neither here nor there. Great job with the reactions! Can’t wait to see how you get Ren to finally start taking his job as a hero seriously!
Another amazing chapter. You really do put a lot of effort into getting the personalities of the characters down. Whenever I try to write someone like Motoyasu or the Bitch Princess or Aultcray, I start cringing and just can’t bring myself to do it. Maybe I’m too nice a guy and am giving people too much credit, but I just feel like they’re too incompetent and comically evil to exist. Still, that’s neither here nor there. Great job with the reactions! Can’t wait to see how you get Ren to finally start taking his job as a hero seriously!
2/18/2024 c7 AnimeFan13579
Oh good updated again and this one covered the appearance of Arthur. It will be much more interesting seeing further involvement. Especially when note a difference in behavior and maturity. That could lead to Filo being disappointed in herself for not being able to do the same. Things will get a lot more active once it gets to when "Filo" comes in though seeing as how was given a "suitable" name instead. Of course it's funny seeing Zelretch still around and basically just waiting to be able to drop the bomb of "Arthur" actually having been a girl. On the first note it definitely would change perspective of the whole affair with Guinevere and Lancelot. For "Arthur" to have an heir would have needed Merlin's magic. Though can imagine Filo would probably be a bit confused about the other her having a different name. Granted that won't stop those like Melty and Mirelia from cheering on the two as a couple.
The next chapter will be very interesting based on what doing seeing as how it brings up Raphtalia's old friend and the act that occurs at the start. Then there's the appearance of the cursed series sword which would be a big red flag. Especially since Naofumi would be able to state his own experience with that same weapon series. It's one of the things that enabled him to triumph against certain encounters but the cost of using it can be questionable if it's worth the sacrifice.
The BIG red flag though would be the reveal of the Treasury Swords series completion reward. After all ANY gamer would be able to tell you what an alignment represents. That being it allows you to predict what actions appeal to the individual as well as what actions they are more likely to take. Naofumi would have immediately wished he had such an ability from the start as he could predict what it would show for Malty. Itsuki would likely HEAVILY be influenced on his decisions based on what that alignment states of the character. It would make it a bit harder for someone to deceive him if they didn't know he had that power. However it's not completely impossible they could in which case it would come down to what the alignment said of the other side of he immediately responded. After all the more "obvious" targets would be those labeled as Chaotic, Evil. Things like Lawful or Neutral Evil would be regarded with skepticism first. The Slave Trader is someone who could potentially be regarded at most as Lawful Evil. What he does could be considered wrong to them morally but he still follows the laws of the land. Overall anyone tagged with Evil would either be regarded with suspicion or a bit of hostility.
Ren wouldn't really make much use of it besides considering it's gamer implications on interactions. Someone of certain type of alignment giving out a quest that sounds like it deviates from their alignment. Well there were quests in some games where it was revealed that the quest giver lied. In some cases the deception was actually part of the main storyline. Considering he's going off his knowledge of the game he would expect those quests from the game to be given by people of a certain alignment types at the time. That could potentially have played out against the villagers who made a request about the dragon. After all if the dragon had been actively threatening the village there wouldn't need to be any alignment of the requester that could make them questionable. Like one that would cover a request made out of greed as they hope to plunder the dragons treasure.
Motoyasu would be the most questionable on it since I doubt he'd want to believe it's telling the truth about Malty. Mirelia would have basically seen how that unlock could have basically destroyed her first daughters and husbands plan from day one. Or at least within the first few days of being in the world. After all the other two heroes besides Motoyasu due to his blindness involving women would have been cautious of Malty for an alignment that is more common with antagonists.
Oh good updated again and this one covered the appearance of Arthur. It will be much more interesting seeing further involvement. Especially when note a difference in behavior and maturity. That could lead to Filo being disappointed in herself for not being able to do the same. Things will get a lot more active once it gets to when "Filo" comes in though seeing as how was given a "suitable" name instead. Of course it's funny seeing Zelretch still around and basically just waiting to be able to drop the bomb of "Arthur" actually having been a girl. On the first note it definitely would change perspective of the whole affair with Guinevere and Lancelot. For "Arthur" to have an heir would have needed Merlin's magic. Though can imagine Filo would probably be a bit confused about the other her having a different name. Granted that won't stop those like Melty and Mirelia from cheering on the two as a couple.
The next chapter will be very interesting based on what doing seeing as how it brings up Raphtalia's old friend and the act that occurs at the start. Then there's the appearance of the cursed series sword which would be a big red flag. Especially since Naofumi would be able to state his own experience with that same weapon series. It's one of the things that enabled him to triumph against certain encounters but the cost of using it can be questionable if it's worth the sacrifice.
The BIG red flag though would be the reveal of the Treasury Swords series completion reward. After all ANY gamer would be able to tell you what an alignment represents. That being it allows you to predict what actions appeal to the individual as well as what actions they are more likely to take. Naofumi would have immediately wished he had such an ability from the start as he could predict what it would show for Malty. Itsuki would likely HEAVILY be influenced on his decisions based on what that alignment states of the character. It would make it a bit harder for someone to deceive him if they didn't know he had that power. However it's not completely impossible they could in which case it would come down to what the alignment said of the other side of he immediately responded. After all the more "obvious" targets would be those labeled as Chaotic, Evil. Things like Lawful or Neutral Evil would be regarded with skepticism first. The Slave Trader is someone who could potentially be regarded at most as Lawful Evil. What he does could be considered wrong to them morally but he still follows the laws of the land. Overall anyone tagged with Evil would either be regarded with suspicion or a bit of hostility.
Ren wouldn't really make much use of it besides considering it's gamer implications on interactions. Someone of certain type of alignment giving out a quest that sounds like it deviates from their alignment. Well there were quests in some games where it was revealed that the quest giver lied. In some cases the deception was actually part of the main storyline. Considering he's going off his knowledge of the game he would expect those quests from the game to be given by people of a certain alignment types at the time. That could potentially have played out against the villagers who made a request about the dragon. After all if the dragon had been actively threatening the village there wouldn't need to be any alignment of the requester that could make them questionable. Like one that would cover a request made out of greed as they hope to plunder the dragons treasure.
Motoyasu would be the most questionable on it since I doubt he'd want to believe it's telling the truth about Malty. Mirelia would have basically seen how that unlock could have basically destroyed her first daughters and husbands plan from day one. Or at least within the first few days of being in the world. After all the other two heroes besides Motoyasu due to his blindness involving women would have been cautious of Malty for an alignment that is more common with antagonists.
2/18/2024 c7 TheRealD3lph0xL0v3r
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!
I'm Honestly Surprised that Filo didn't start Drooling or Licking her Lips or have her Tummy Start Rumbling when she saw Arthur as a hatchling; or during that Growing-up Montage
CONSIDERING Filo is CANONICALLY A Cannibal who sees Other Filolials as Food. . . so Why would Watcher! Filo not see THIS Filolial as Food to fill her belly with instead of Eye Candy[NGL, I Kinda find THIS Reaction to Him from Filo a LITTLE BIT OOC(Out-Of-Character); Due to her Canon Cannibalistic Cravings towards other Filolials as Food]
and Looks Like The Spear Simp is JEALOUS of Arthur; for stealing away HIS Loli from him; moreso once he saw Arthur in a humanoid Form like that of Filo. . .
And I was NOT Disappointed with Kirito's Reaction to Eugeo's Homage to him; albeit as a Hakuko(a Tiger Demi-human)
P.S. I'm Sorry If this review Creeps you out(and Don't get me wrong; I'd actually Understand Why it would be creepy to some people). . . But The ONLY Reason I'm saying these kinds of things; is EXPLICITLY Just Because I REALLY find it EXTREMELY odd that Filo; who in canon has actually seen other Filolials as Food(Unless they're named Fitoria; Who is 65 Feet/20 Meters Tall), sees Arthur as a love Interest just like Ginnie does in the actual story
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!
I'm Honestly Surprised that Filo didn't start Drooling or Licking her Lips or have her Tummy Start Rumbling when she saw Arthur as a hatchling; or during that Growing-up Montage
CONSIDERING Filo is CANONICALLY A Cannibal who sees Other Filolials as Food. . . so Why would Watcher! Filo not see THIS Filolial as Food to fill her belly with instead of Eye Candy[NGL, I Kinda find THIS Reaction to Him from Filo a LITTLE BIT OOC(Out-Of-Character); Due to her Canon Cannibalistic Cravings towards other Filolials as Food]
and Looks Like The Spear Simp is JEALOUS of Arthur; for stealing away HIS Loli from him; moreso once he saw Arthur in a humanoid Form like that of Filo. . .
And I was NOT Disappointed with Kirito's Reaction to Eugeo's Homage to him; albeit as a Hakuko(a Tiger Demi-human)
P.S. I'm Sorry If this review Creeps you out(and Don't get me wrong; I'd actually Understand Why it would be creepy to some people). . . But The ONLY Reason I'm saying these kinds of things; is EXPLICITLY Just Because I REALLY find it EXTREMELY odd that Filo; who in canon has actually seen other Filolials as Food(Unless they're named Fitoria; Who is 65 Feet/20 Meters Tall), sees Arthur as a love Interest just like Ginnie does in the actual story
2/18/2024 c7
13Have a Little Feith
This has me wanting to see how Naofumi's journey changes after this viewing is done. Thanks for the chapter! Filo is always a cute, if a bit awkward to read at times, mostly because of her simplistic mindset.

This has me wanting to see how Naofumi's journey changes after this viewing is done. Thanks for the chapter! Filo is always a cute, if a bit awkward to read at times, mostly because of her simplistic mindset.
2/18/2024 c1
4CodeTalker69
I couldn't take all the credit. You can also credit VictorioMWolff-Haddock on Tvtropes for introducing it on the "Let's Watch Our Show" Plot page.

I couldn't take all the credit. You can also credit VictorioMWolff-Haddock on Tvtropes for introducing it on the "Let's Watch Our Show" Plot page.
2/13/2024 c6 Twilight
Kirito would be surprised when he saw that there is a girl who looks exactly like Suguha and she loves Eugeo. In the main story it was mentioned that Rifana looks like Suguha, Kirito would find this funny and jokingly say that Rifana is much more feminine than Suguha would ever be
Kirito would be surprised when he saw that there is a girl who looks exactly like Suguha and she loves Eugeo. In the main story it was mentioned that Rifana looks like Suguha, Kirito would find this funny and jokingly say that Rifana is much more feminine than Suguha would ever be
1/3/2024 c6
14joyboy825
Great chapter I just hope you update the story soon. It's so interesting and entertaining

Great chapter I just hope you update the story soon. It's so interesting and entertaining
12/14/2023 c3 Kiyan Tribe
Well we all know Ren is a badly done cheap copy of Kirito. Man even calling him copy to Kirito is insulting to the Black Swordsman.
Well we all know Ren is a badly done cheap copy of Kirito. Man even calling him copy to Kirito is insulting to the Black Swordsman.
10/24/2023 c6 AnimeFan13579
Hoping to see this updated more as their will be some amusement that Filo will be teased since Eugeo will have a Fillolial King instead. Can basically guess the queen and princess will immediately come to the idea of pairing them together. It will also be amusing when get to "Filo's" appearance since she would have a different name.
As for stuff closer to the current progress of the story there's some amusement on how someone like Asuna would take Kirin's/Yuki's relationship with Eugeo. There's also the embarrassment for Alice of her other self and the girls deciding to share Eugeo.
Of course I'm also rather looking forward to the reactions involving Gaelion. Considering the reaction it would have for Ren due to him killing him. Would probably involve some regret as well as complaint at the missed opportunities because of his previous attitude. And be even more of a hassle when get to Itsuki seeing the consequences of his actions.
Hoping to see this updated more as their will be some amusement that Filo will be teased since Eugeo will have a Fillolial King instead. Can basically guess the queen and princess will immediately come to the idea of pairing them together. It will also be amusing when get to "Filo's" appearance since she would have a different name.
As for stuff closer to the current progress of the story there's some amusement on how someone like Asuna would take Kirin's/Yuki's relationship with Eugeo. There's also the embarrassment for Alice of her other self and the girls deciding to share Eugeo.
Of course I'm also rather looking forward to the reactions involving Gaelion. Considering the reaction it would have for Ren due to him killing him. Would probably involve some regret as well as complaint at the missed opportunities because of his previous attitude. And be even more of a hassle when get to Itsuki seeing the consequences of his actions.
9/24/2023 c6 Zideny
I'm just realizing that Eugeo and Fujimaru Ritsuka (F/GO) share the same Japanese Voice Actor (Shimazaki Nobunaga).
I'm just realizing that Eugeo and Fujimaru Ritsuka (F/GO) share the same Japanese Voice Actor (Shimazaki Nobunaga).
9/13/2023 c6 djinn
great new chapter, look forward to the reactions of the characters with the Filoliol King.
great new chapter, look forward to the reactions of the characters with the Filoliol King.
9/11/2023 c3
1TheGrimDragon
I like how you made a reference that Kirito and Ren along with Agil and Erhard have the same Japanese voice actors.

I like how you made a reference that Kirito and Ren along with Agil and Erhard have the same Japanese voice actors.