
8/7/2023 c6 Miguel Angel Lopez Hernandez
gracias por el capitulo y una pregunta has pensado que lleguen a reaccionar a swort art online abriget o despues hacer un reaccionando a su parodia. posdta te entiendo la vida de adulto aveces es cansada
gracias por el capitulo y una pregunta has pensado que lleguen a reaccionar a swort art online abriget o despues hacer un reaccionando a su parodia. posdta te entiendo la vida de adulto aveces es cansada
8/7/2023 c6
1Nexus240
Great update!
Can't wait to see Kirito and Asuna's reaction to Eugeo and Kirin's disguises!
As well as Kirito's reaction to his student inheriting his Harem King abilities!
:D

Great update!
Can't wait to see Kirito and Asuna's reaction to Eugeo and Kirin's disguises!
As well as Kirito's reaction to his student inheriting his Harem King abilities!
:D
4/19/2023 c5 Shadow55
When you about to update new chapter please please please
When you about to update new chapter please please please
3/15/2023 c5
4SkyChaser17
I can Tell, Poor bastard gonna know how much Eugeo take after him XD
Nice to have you back, and I understand how annoying irl be when you just want to write your hearts out.
As usual, good grammar and exposition, so I have nothing to say since it's retelling of your story with react peanut gallery. Still, that sin series definitely a foreshadowing if I ever see one. Quick question tho,
would there be more added to the cast? such as a certain sniper or anyone from Sao world to add to the group? since I think it's also still too early to add cast from Tate verse outside the stooges and Nao team. Kinda want to see the rest of the stooges party to also see the alternative timeline, but that would be unfair and taxing to ya, so probably no. Though my question remain if there's gonna be more to add.
Still... wonder Kirito would crow in happiness Eugeo take his teaching to reach what he is now, or weeping like someone remembering their cringe back in middle school at some parts of the story later.
I mean, Phantom Swordsman XD he didn't have flashback as black swordsman and actually shiver in dread from another title is way too good to pass up bruh XD
that said, I'll be patiently waiting as usual man.

I can Tell, Poor bastard gonna know how much Eugeo take after him XD
Nice to have you back, and I understand how annoying irl be when you just want to write your hearts out.
As usual, good grammar and exposition, so I have nothing to say since it's retelling of your story with react peanut gallery. Still, that sin series definitely a foreshadowing if I ever see one. Quick question tho,
would there be more added to the cast? such as a certain sniper or anyone from Sao world to add to the group? since I think it's also still too early to add cast from Tate verse outside the stooges and Nao team. Kinda want to see the rest of the stooges party to also see the alternative timeline, but that would be unfair and taxing to ya, so probably no. Though my question remain if there's gonna be more to add.
Still... wonder Kirito would crow in happiness Eugeo take his teaching to reach what he is now, or weeping like someone remembering their cringe back in middle school at some parts of the story later.
I mean, Phantom Swordsman XD he didn't have flashback as black swordsman and actually shiver in dread from another title is way too good to pass up bruh XD
that said, I'll be patiently waiting as usual man.
2/27/2023 c5
3Raidentensho
very nice. though i do wonder if the audience will have the food from the restaurant and other oc meals in future chapters. plus i would love to see the reactions of all 4 of them seeing the Map version of their weapons. also wonder if Zelretch would swap Alice's clothes with the different forms the Spirit Alice has in stock. it would fit with his character. looking forward to more. until then, later!

very nice. though i do wonder if the audience will have the food from the restaurant and other oc meals in future chapters. plus i would love to see the reactions of all 4 of them seeing the Map version of their weapons. also wonder if Zelretch would swap Alice's clothes with the different forms the Spirit Alice has in stock. it would fit with his character. looking forward to more. until then, later!
2/25/2023 c5 T.V. 2000
I understand that it takes more time to publish chapter 31 for personal reasons, in the end you and Arementi Revnant have their obligations in the IRL. Leaving this, I will talk about chapter 5.
First of all, it's obvious that none of the SAO characters are happy about the unfair trial and the ignorance of the 3 stooges, so much so that Asuna asked if they are fools, simply naive or just plain out stupid. I would have liked Kirito to mention all of them. The gaps in Malty's accusations, of course I understand that it would be unnecessary, for Kirito and the others it was obvious that Malty was lying.
As for the interesting fact that Kirito mentioned about Eugeo learning to be Tricky. Aside from Eugeo's past experiences, which taught him to be cautious, Eugeo knew that it would be useless for him to openly try to defend Naofumi, because he knew the King, the nobles Corrupts and the Church will mark him as their enemy for not having the same twisted mentality they have towards Naofumi. Also, it was likely that Malty would lie when he said that Eugeo was Naofumi's accomplice and that he intended to do the same to her.
Regarding the hypothesis that Kirito thought of, I have a clear idea of what it could be. But I prefer not to mention it, because it could ruin the excitement of several readers. It is likely that Kirito will tell Mirellia and his hypothesis in the first interlude. Naofumi in secret, Kirito would ask him to please not say anything to the 3 Stooges about the hypothesis until it is concluded that the hypothesis is true and that the reaction that the 3 Stooges would have could be unpredictable, so much so that it is necessary to think about what it will be the best time to tell them.
Speaking of the 3 Stooges Heroes, without a doubt their personalities were perfectly written, so much so that I found them unbearable, I'm not saying it as an insult, but rather that their bad traits were brought out. Also, if they had the ability of Alice to know people's intentions for their weapons, most likely they would have done something reckless that would have killed them.
It would also have been completely useless if they were given exotic materials for their legendary weapons or high level gear early, because none of them would know how to use them efficiently to begin with and wouldn't even bother to use them strategically.
I can imagine that everyone will be envious of Eugeo for different reasons, Itsuki would envy him because Eugeo is more popular and do much more heroics, Motoyasu would envy him because of the success he has with women, Ren would envy Eugeo for his strength
In short, I hope that one of the characters from Sao ends up destroying Itsuki's empty pride, by saying that just having a powerful weapon does not make him someone powerful, because it will always depend on how the user uses the weapon. In addition, characters like Kirito and Asuna shouldn't hold back when they criticize the 3 stooges for their very bad leadership, especially Motoyasu, who is literally the hero who has the worst and weakest group, both in morality and fighting skills.
That's all I wanted to talk about. I understand that it took a while for chapter 31 to arrive.
I understand that it takes more time to publish chapter 31 for personal reasons, in the end you and Arementi Revnant have their obligations in the IRL. Leaving this, I will talk about chapter 5.
First of all, it's obvious that none of the SAO characters are happy about the unfair trial and the ignorance of the 3 stooges, so much so that Asuna asked if they are fools, simply naive or just plain out stupid. I would have liked Kirito to mention all of them. The gaps in Malty's accusations, of course I understand that it would be unnecessary, for Kirito and the others it was obvious that Malty was lying.
As for the interesting fact that Kirito mentioned about Eugeo learning to be Tricky. Aside from Eugeo's past experiences, which taught him to be cautious, Eugeo knew that it would be useless for him to openly try to defend Naofumi, because he knew the King, the nobles Corrupts and the Church will mark him as their enemy for not having the same twisted mentality they have towards Naofumi. Also, it was likely that Malty would lie when he said that Eugeo was Naofumi's accomplice and that he intended to do the same to her.
Regarding the hypothesis that Kirito thought of, I have a clear idea of what it could be. But I prefer not to mention it, because it could ruin the excitement of several readers. It is likely that Kirito will tell Mirellia and his hypothesis in the first interlude. Naofumi in secret, Kirito would ask him to please not say anything to the 3 Stooges about the hypothesis until it is concluded that the hypothesis is true and that the reaction that the 3 Stooges would have could be unpredictable, so much so that it is necessary to think about what it will be the best time to tell them.
Speaking of the 3 Stooges Heroes, without a doubt their personalities were perfectly written, so much so that I found them unbearable, I'm not saying it as an insult, but rather that their bad traits were brought out. Also, if they had the ability of Alice to know people's intentions for their weapons, most likely they would have done something reckless that would have killed them.
It would also have been completely useless if they were given exotic materials for their legendary weapons or high level gear early, because none of them would know how to use them efficiently to begin with and wouldn't even bother to use them strategically.
I can imagine that everyone will be envious of Eugeo for different reasons, Itsuki would envy him because Eugeo is more popular and do much more heroics, Motoyasu would envy him because of the success he has with women, Ren would envy Eugeo for his strength
In short, I hope that one of the characters from Sao ends up destroying Itsuki's empty pride, by saying that just having a powerful weapon does not make him someone powerful, because it will always depend on how the user uses the weapon. In addition, characters like Kirito and Asuna shouldn't hold back when they criticize the 3 stooges for their very bad leadership, especially Motoyasu, who is literally the hero who has the worst and weakest group, both in morality and fighting skills.
That's all I wanted to talk about. I understand that it took a while for chapter 31 to arrive.
2/21/2023 c3
4hnh058513
Well with the knowledge of Spirits being able to dwell within the Cardinal Weapons does this mean that this Naofumi will realise Ost is still with him after he uses the Spirit Tortoise Heart Shield to finish the Spirit Tortoise?

Well with the knowledge of Spirits being able to dwell within the Cardinal Weapons does this mean that this Naofumi will realise Ost is still with him after he uses the Spirit Tortoise Heart Shield to finish the Spirit Tortoise?
2/21/2023 c5 TheRealD3lph0xL0v3r
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!
I Can't wait to see How Watcher! Kirito's Reaction to Eugeo's Chosen Alter-ego with the Mirage Belt. . .
and Glad that Watcher! Mirellia Points out how UNLIKE their own world this AU is. . .
I'm Also Eagerly awaiting seeing Filo's Reaction to Ginny(Her Counterpart); and her Reaction to Arthur. . .
Honestly. . . I'd Find it Interesting if a Sword hero were to try & learn the Discipline & Skills of Raphtalia's world's Masters of Stealth; It'd certainly Throw a Wrench into the Plans of Both Balmus & Even The Army Of The Waves!
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!
I Can't wait to see How Watcher! Kirito's Reaction to Eugeo's Chosen Alter-ego with the Mirage Belt. . .
and Glad that Watcher! Mirellia Points out how UNLIKE their own world this AU is. . .
I'm Also Eagerly awaiting seeing Filo's Reaction to Ginny(Her Counterpart); and her Reaction to Arthur. . .
Honestly. . . I'd Find it Interesting if a Sword hero were to try & learn the Discipline & Skills of Raphtalia's world's Masters of Stealth; It'd certainly Throw a Wrench into the Plans of Both Balmus & Even The Army Of The Waves!
2/21/2023 c5 djinn
great new chapter.
great new chapter.
2/20/2023 c5
7SwordOfTheGods
There's just something satisfying about seeing others react to a good story. It's just a shame that Motoyasu is such a nasty boi, though. If only the others could beat some sense into him. That being said, it's probably his reactions that I enjoy the most since he has to face all the wrongdoings he's down and watch as someone he considers weaker get so much more powerful without being able to call hax or cheating. Keep up the great work!

There's just something satisfying about seeing others react to a good story. It's just a shame that Motoyasu is such a nasty boi, though. If only the others could beat some sense into him. That being said, it's probably his reactions that I enjoy the most since he has to face all the wrongdoings he's down and watch as someone he considers weaker get so much more powerful without being able to call hax or cheating. Keep up the great work!
2/20/2023 c5 Master0z
Oh Kirito..., whenever the girls said it's true, they were always right! Keep it Up Gadget and Arementi Revnant! and also take your time between the making of chapter 31 and your work IRL. We'll be waiting patiently!
Oh Kirito..., whenever the girls said it's true, they were always right! Keep it Up Gadget and Arementi Revnant! and also take your time between the making of chapter 31 and your work IRL. We'll be waiting patiently!