for My Youth As A Sorcerer Sucks, As I Expected5/8 c44 Hachiman fan
Thanks for the chapter buddy. There's a mistake in the earlier part, you keep using he and his when the focus was on yumiko, a girl, she and her. Looking forward to the next chapter buddy. Until next time, stay healthy and stay safe.
Thanks for the chapter buddy. There's a mistake in the earlier part, you keep using he and his when the focus was on yumiko, a girl, she and her. Looking forward to the next chapter buddy. Until next time, stay healthy and stay safe.
5/4 c44 Naruto Uzumaki Jackson
Dude this is one of my favorite stories! Love the addition of Miura and can't to see what happens.
Dude this is one of my favorite stories! Love the addition of Miura and can't to see what happens.
4/19 c7 Haurliel
Although it does feel that you put effort into making the dialogue unique to each character and/or have them say someone else's name to differentiate them, which is good
Although it does feel that you put effort into making the dialogue unique to each character and/or have them say someone else's name to differentiate them, which is good
4/19 c6 Haurliel
I also realize the way you write dialogue is a little bit confusing as to who's who. Maybe try something likeName) chimed in withdialogue). ordialogueName) said.
I also realize the way you write dialogue is a little bit confusing as to who's who. Maybe try something likeName) chimed in withdialogue). ordialogueName) said.
4/19 c6 Haurliel
Reading the honorific with italics feels weird as you mostly see that on emphasized words. Case in point, the cooking scene's atmosphere felt tense cause it feels like Yukinoshita put special emphasis on thesan' everytime she calls their name cause Miura forgot her bame or something, which I wouldn't put it past her tbh. Nothing wrong with the story, just feels weird here lol.
Reading the honorific with italics feels weird as you mostly see that on emphasized words. Case in point, the cooking scene's atmosphere felt tense cause it feels like Yukinoshita put special emphasis on thesan' everytime she calls their name cause Miura forgot her bame or something, which I wouldn't put it past her tbh. Nothing wrong with the story, just feels weird here lol.
3/20 c43 Hachiman fan
No hachiman and haruno in this chapter, bruh. Until next time, stay healthy and stay safe.
No hachiman and haruno in this chapter, bruh. Until next time, stay healthy and stay safe.
3/16 c43 
2saka157
i guess we all know who woukd be the victim of kenjaku next. I dont like him very much but i feel sorry for him.
2saka157i guess we all know who woukd be the victim of kenjaku next. I dont like him very much but i feel sorry for him.
2/21 c42 Hachiman fan
Thanks for the chapter buddy. Interesting chapter, talking about character progression. Until next time, stay healthy and stay safe.
Thanks for the chapter buddy. Interesting chapter, talking about character progression. Until next time, stay healthy and stay safe.
2/16 c41 issei
yeah i know hololive because my favorite is kobo and suisei oppai :p
yeah i know hololive because my favorite is kobo and suisei oppai :p
2/8 c41 Airhead
When will you update the next chapter?
When will you update the next chapter?
12/19/2024 c2 Chomusuke
The dialog is a bit robotic or in-human, just a heads up, if your going to write dialog please say it out loud first and have a thought if what you just said sounds like something they would say. Such as "It is" you keep using that word but people hardly use it and simply use the shortened "its" it sounds awkward to use "it is" that just sounds like something a British or England English guy would say.
The dialog is a bit robotic or in-human, just a heads up, if your going to write dialog please say it out loud first and have a thought if what you just said sounds like something they would say. Such as "It is" you keep using that word but people hardly use it and simply use the shortened "its" it sounds awkward to use "it is" that just sounds like something a British or England English guy would say.
12/14/2024 c41 Hachiman fan
Thanks for the chapter buddy. Satoru dream remind me to one of justice league unlimited ep, superman birthday, dreaming about life on krypton, with wife and son. Until next time, stay healthy and stay safe.
Thanks for the chapter buddy. Satoru dream remind me to one of justice league unlimited ep, superman birthday, dreaming about life on krypton, with wife and son. Until next time, stay healthy and stay safe.