for Through the Eyes of a Demon1/25/2023 c2 Kingred1994
Hello i hope you're doing well please keep writing is that what you like from a narusaku fan.
Hello i hope you're doing well please keep writing is that what you like from a narusaku fan.
8/22/2022 c2 
124Mrotrax
Just discovered this story and I must say; i think you’re doing a great job showing the brutality and trauma
While it may be slightly OOC, seeing Naruto destroy Gato is always cathartic and I love how the Rinnegan/Kurama seem to be corrupting/enabling him
I also think you’ve struck a nice balance for Sasuke’s thought process
Plus, NaruSaku was the very first ship I followed so that fills me with nostalgia.
Looking forward to more!
124MrotraxJust discovered this story and I must say; i think you’re doing a great job showing the brutality and trauma
While it may be slightly OOC, seeing Naruto destroy Gato is always cathartic and I love how the Rinnegan/Kurama seem to be corrupting/enabling him
I also think you’ve struck a nice balance for Sasuke’s thought process
Plus, NaruSaku was the very first ship I followed so that fills me with nostalgia.
Looking forward to more!
7/13/2022 c2 1Gogos14
Good to see that Sasuke didn't actually die! Some people might think it took away the gravity of his death, but i think it's worth saving such a big character. I think it could be interesting if Sasuke slowly falls to his jealousy when he sees the dead last of his class suddenly surpass with his doujutsu, something Sasuke takes pride in. It would be a good way to drive him to a role of an antagonist if needed, and i think at this point, only someone like Sasuke as a villain would manage to give Naruto a run for his money, as he is pretty OP now. I'm a bit perplexed as to the pacing of the story so far tho. It was a little weird to see Sakura's reaction to Naruto. I'm guessing Naruto has a different character when compared to the canon version, because he talks way too smoothly compared to how Naruto actually talks. Also, why is Sakura so shocked that he thinks she's beautiful and wonderful? Hasn't he been openly pursuing her for a long time? It looks like the past might be a little different too compared to canon, and maybe we can see flashbacks in future chapters to see those differences.
1Gogos14Good to see that Sasuke didn't actually die! Some people might think it took away the gravity of his death, but i think it's worth saving such a big character. I think it could be interesting if Sasuke slowly falls to his jealousy when he sees the dead last of his class suddenly surpass with his doujutsu, something Sasuke takes pride in. It would be a good way to drive him to a role of an antagonist if needed, and i think at this point, only someone like Sasuke as a villain would manage to give Naruto a run for his money, as he is pretty OP now. I'm a bit perplexed as to the pacing of the story so far tho. It was a little weird to see Sakura's reaction to Naruto. I'm guessing Naruto has a different character when compared to the canon version, because he talks way too smoothly compared to how Naruto actually talks. Also, why is Sakura so shocked that he thinks she's beautiful and wonderful? Hasn't he been openly pursuing her for a long time? It looks like the past might be a little different too compared to canon, and maybe we can see flashbacks in future chapters to see those differences.
7/13/2022 c1 Gogos14
Woww definitely an interesting start to the story. The way he gets his rinnegan is unique, and i'm curious to see the implications these differences will have in the overall story. Great fighting scenes, and good to see their emotions explored in conjunction with the plot. Naruto seems really dark and a little cruel? heartless? compared to canon, so I'm also interested in seeing how he'll be in this story
Woww definitely an interesting start to the story. The way he gets his rinnegan is unique, and i'm curious to see the implications these differences will have in the overall story. Great fighting scenes, and good to see their emotions explored in conjunction with the plot. Naruto seems really dark and a little cruel? heartless? compared to canon, so I'm also interested in seeing how he'll be in this story
7/6/2022 c2 Mahammodz
Dear author, i love the way you write you are able to set the mood well, also are amazing at writing fighting scenes in chapter 1 so please continue with your amazing work
Dear author, i love the way you write you are able to set the mood well, also are amazing at writing fighting scenes in chapter 1 so please continue with your amazing work
6/5/2022 c2 Guest
Outstanding story I look forward to seeing how you decide to develop it more as well as the relationship between characters.
Outstanding story I look forward to seeing how you decide to develop it more as well as the relationship between characters.
5/2/2022 c2 Guest
Sakura should definitely keep the promise she made to Naruto and not break it also spend way more time with him then she usually does and actually try to really get to know him better and actually lose that fan girl crush she had on sauske and actually start training so she can grow stronger and be a better ninja she definitely has alot of potential to be a powerful ninja if she wasn't always fan Girling sauske 24/7 I just want these two to actually be happy together as a couple and as for sauske have him actually stay loyal to Naruto kakashi Sakura and the leaf village instead of batrying the leaf like in the anime or seen in so many stories I Read I like to see him actually be little nicer and actually be little more open and honest as well not go to orchimaru this time around it be great seeing team 7 grow stronger together as a team and let there bond and friendship grow stronger and not actually break up this time around for a possible paring for sauske have it be kairen(the girl who's related to narutos family and actually has a real crush on sauske)
Sakura should definitely keep the promise she made to Naruto and not break it also spend way more time with him then she usually does and actually try to really get to know him better and actually lose that fan girl crush she had on sauske and actually start training so she can grow stronger and be a better ninja she definitely has alot of potential to be a powerful ninja if she wasn't always fan Girling sauske 24/7 I just want these two to actually be happy together as a couple and as for sauske have him actually stay loyal to Naruto kakashi Sakura and the leaf village instead of batrying the leaf like in the anime or seen in so many stories I Read I like to see him actually be little nicer and actually be little more open and honest as well not go to orchimaru this time around it be great seeing team 7 grow stronger together as a team and let there bond and friendship grow stronger and not actually break up this time around for a possible paring for sauske have it be kairen(the girl who's related to narutos family and actually has a real crush on sauske)
5/2/2022 c2 Guest
Nature bring Assume back, was totally awesome. I cant wait until the next chapter comes out.
Nature bring Assume back, was totally awesome. I cant wait until the next chapter comes out.
5/1/2022 c2 Beastyd22
Awesome chapter man keep it up and update again soon as you possibly can thanks.
Awesome chapter man keep it up and update again soon as you possibly can thanks.
5/1/2022 c1 Eminated
I’m pretty sure kakashi should have no idea what the rinnegan is. I imagine the sannin and most likely the sandaime are the only people who have any idea. Let alone the rinne sharingan
I’m pretty sure kakashi should have no idea what the rinnegan is. I imagine the sannin and most likely the sandaime are the only people who have any idea. Let alone the rinne sharingan
5/1/2022 c2 taiwoeretan1
Ok this chapter answered my last question but isn't Naruto knowing how to use Rinne rebirth this soon kinda weird cause, i could be wrong, didn't Nagato even after having the Rinnegan for so long did not know how to?
Ok this chapter answered my last question but isn't Naruto knowing how to use Rinne rebirth this soon kinda weird cause, i could be wrong, didn't Nagato even after having the Rinnegan for so long did not know how to?