for Fairborn Adventures5/3 c100 Shaker18
This was definitely one of the better works I've read on this website.
Well done and thank you very much for creating this story, I really enjoyed it!
This was definitely one of the better works I've read on this website.
Well done and thank you very much for creating this story, I really enjoyed it!
3/25 c6 Guest
Must “slimy” be used as an insult to Slytherins? It sounds very childish and inaccurate, as snakes themselves have smooth dry scales. Unless you’re trying to use that to portray immaturity…
Must “slimy” be used as an insult to Slytherins? It sounds very childish and inaccurate, as snakes themselves have smooth dry scales. Unless you’re trying to use that to portray immaturity…
3/25 c3 Guest
Ah. There. I was wondering what would happen to the other Deathly Hallows. Love this fic.
Ah. There. I was wondering what would happen to the other Deathly Hallows. Love this fic.
3/17 c10 steve
love is a emotion not magic.
love is a emotion not magic.
3/17 c15 Mikeblade
question the use of a unforgivable is a one way ticket to soul sucker island no matter what.
meaning there illegal everywhere in the magical world meaning there not legal to use in honor duels meaning malfoy jr's ass should be heading to soul sucker island right after the duel.
question the use of a unforgivable is a one way ticket to soul sucker island no matter what.
meaning there illegal everywhere in the magical world meaning there not legal to use in honor duels meaning malfoy jr's ass should be heading to soul sucker island right after the duel.
3/13 c99 mcwjimbo
and done with my reread. I love it just as much as I did the first time. Truly one of my fave stories
and done with my reread. I love it just as much as I did the first time. Truly one of my fave stories
3/10 c3 mcwjimbo
returned for a re-read after some time...and "Not physicaly, no..." vis a vis abuse is only true for the movies. In the books there is physical abuse. Vernon did abuse Harry & even abuses dudley once by choking his own son, Dudley and friends "harry hunt" and beat on Harry constantly, Marge sicks her dog ripper on Harry to bite his legs, and Patunia swings a hot iron pan at Harry's head.
returned for a re-read after some time...and "Not physicaly, no..." vis a vis abuse is only true for the movies. In the books there is physical abuse. Vernon did abuse Harry & even abuses dudley once by choking his own son, Dudley and friends "harry hunt" and beat on Harry constantly, Marge sicks her dog ripper on Harry to bite his legs, and Patunia swings a hot iron pan at Harry's head.
2/25 c2 LuminouShadowAlt
ugh why does majority of hp ff author's have fetish to make their adult character a child, go to school again and all that jazz. Why cant they try writing their adult character as adults...
ugh why does majority of hp ff author's have fetish to make their adult character a child, go to school again and all that jazz. Why cant they try writing their adult character as adults...
2/21 c99 
1Finnspa23
It's certainly not a happy ending... it still feels wrong somehow, but I'll take it. PFaFF is without a doubt one of my favorite fics of all time. FBA was difficult seeing the path they went down. Regardless, thanks for sharing! You have a real talent for writing.
1Finnspa23It's certainly not a happy ending... it still feels wrong somehow, but I'll take it. PFaFF is without a doubt one of my favorite fics of all time. FBA was difficult seeing the path they went down. Regardless, thanks for sharing! You have a real talent for writing.
2/21 c95 Finnspa23
I think you lost me this chapter :/ it already feels like a Cadmean victory. It's not so much a problem of who died, but what was done with the death.
I think you lost me this chapter :/ it already feels like a Cadmean victory. It's not so much a problem of who died, but what was done with the death.
2/20 c85 Finnspa23
Just a general comment on a word I've noticed that I think is being misused quite a bit in this story. You use the word "stiffened" a lot and I think you mean to use "stifled" instead. Stifle as in repress, suppress, smother, hold back, etc
Just a general comment on a word I've noticed that I think is being misused quite a bit in this story. You use the word "stiffened" a lot and I think you mean to use "stifled" instead. Stifle as in repress, suppress, smother, hold back, etc