for Fairborn Adventures4/17/2023 c25 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Really like the Peverell Grimoire! Glad to see that Harry has someone to help him grow stronger. I do like how you've set all of that up and are giving a really good backstory to go along with it. Really appreciate all of the world building that you are doing. Enjoyed breakfast with the Potters. Looking forward to seeing what Harry is going to tell Marlene!
Excellent chapter! Really like the Peverell Grimoire! Glad to see that Harry has someone to help him grow stronger. I do like how you've set all of that up and are giving a really good backstory to go along with it. Really appreciate all of the world building that you are doing. Enjoyed breakfast with the Potters. Looking forward to seeing what Harry is going to tell Marlene!
4/17/2023 c24 Hank1967
Enjoyed the Harry/Marlene time! Also enjoyed the meeting between Harry and the Flamels. Your introduction of Aurelius' tome is fantastic! Love its backstory as well. Must read next chapter now!
Enjoyed the Harry/Marlene time! Also enjoyed the meeting between Harry and the Flamels. Your introduction of Aurelius' tome is fantastic! Love its backstory as well. Must read next chapter now!
4/17/2023 c23 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Harry being able to move forward with his plans to profit from the Basilisk. Looking forward to the inclusion of Flamel in the story. He should have some fun tales to tell Harry. Loved the Quidditch match! That was too cool that the Snitch was hiding in Marlene's hair! Now I'm wondering if someone tampered with it... Perhaps Sirius? That sounds like something straight up his alley.
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Harry being able to move forward with his plans to profit from the Basilisk. Looking forward to the inclusion of Flamel in the story. He should have some fun tales to tell Harry. Loved the Quidditch match! That was too cool that the Snitch was hiding in Marlene's hair! Now I'm wondering if someone tampered with it... Perhaps Sirius? That sounds like something straight up his alley.
4/17/2023 c22 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Hope Flamel will take the bait... Great job with the Levicorpus scene from canon. Rather a shame Snape is acting such a fool. Enjoyed seeing Harry put him in his place. Let's hope it takes!
Excellent chapter! Hope Flamel will take the bait... Great job with the Levicorpus scene from canon. Rather a shame Snape is acting such a fool. Enjoyed seeing Harry put him in his place. Let's hope it takes!
4/17/2023 c21 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Enjoyed all the Harry/Marlene time. Glad to see him trusting her with the secret of the Room of Requirement. Also enjoyed how he got one, or two, or three over on the Marauders.
Excellent chapter! Enjoyed all the Harry/Marlene time. Glad to see him trusting her with the secret of the Room of Requirement. Also enjoyed how he got one, or two, or three over on the Marauders.
4/17/2023 c20 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Loved the Quidditch game and all that led up to it! Smart move on Harry's part to start advertising the Nimbus. Perhaps this way he'll be able to pay a decent bride price for Marlene... Enjoying seeing the Marauders in action. Really love the dynamic that you've established between the main characters. It's really fun seeing life breathed into them!
Excellent chapter! Loved the Quidditch game and all that led up to it! Smart move on Harry's part to start advertising the Nimbus. Perhaps this way he'll be able to pay a decent bride price for Marlene... Enjoying seeing the Marauders in action. Really love the dynamic that you've established between the main characters. It's really fun seeing life breathed into them!
4/17/2023 c19 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Marlene finally shod of Lestrange. Boy just doesn't have any manners whatsoever... Also glad to see her end up with Harry. Enjoyed the contract negotiation there at the end. Too funny that Arcturus was giving Harry hell still for passing on Narcissa. Rather amazed that he even did this, but then again, now Harry owes him a favor as well. Shrewd. Can't wait to see what's next!
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Marlene finally shod of Lestrange. Boy just doesn't have any manners whatsoever... Also glad to see her end up with Harry. Enjoyed the contract negotiation there at the end. Too funny that Arcturus was giving Harry hell still for passing on Narcissa. Rather amazed that he even did this, but then again, now Harry owes him a favor as well. Shrewd. Can't wait to see what's next!
4/17/2023 c18 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Glad to see that Harry was able to put a good case to Lord McKinnon. Also glad to see him torment Voldemort quite thoroughly. These chapters are loads of fun to read!
Excellent chapter! Glad to see that Harry was able to put a good case to Lord McKinnon. Also glad to see him torment Voldemort quite thoroughly. These chapters are loads of fun to read!
4/17/2023 c16 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Lord McKinnon warming up to Harry. Thought it was rather nice of his to ask Harry to escort Marlene back to the castle. ;-) Enjoying the angst that Harry is bringing upon both Dumbledore and Voldemort. The boy does have a talent for upsetting applecarts, doesn't he?
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Lord McKinnon warming up to Harry. Thought it was rather nice of his to ask Harry to escort Marlene back to the castle. ;-) Enjoying the angst that Harry is bringing upon both Dumbledore and Voldemort. The boy does have a talent for upsetting applecarts, doesn't he?
4/17/2023 c15 Hank1967
That was wild! Great job with the duel! Rather liked the apparent touch of Peverell family magic there at the end. Nothing like a pair of scythes coming at you to remind you of the Grim Reaper.
That was wild! Great job with the duel! Rather liked the apparent touch of Peverell family magic there at the end. Nothing like a pair of scythes coming at you to remind you of the Grim Reaper.
4/16/2023 c13 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Enjoyed seeing Harry take down Dumbledore so easily. That was fun! Off to the next chapter!
Excellent chapter! Enjoyed seeing Harry take down Dumbledore so easily. That was fun! Off to the next chapter!
4/16/2023 c12 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Loved all the courtroom drama! Also pleased to see that Lucius took Harry's bait. Looking forward to the outcome of that duel!
Excellent chapter! Loved all the courtroom drama! Also pleased to see that Lucius took Harry's bait. Looking forward to the outcome of that duel!