for Fairborn Adventures4/17/2023 c34 Hank1967
Wow - that last bit was absolutely creepy! Well done! Glad to see that Marlene was able to get Dumbledore quickly. Enjoyed the battle of wits between her and the headmaster. Her and Harry just have so much that they need to keep under wraps... Crazy. Great job!
Wow - that last bit was absolutely creepy! Well done! Glad to see that Marlene was able to get Dumbledore quickly. Enjoyed the battle of wits between her and the headmaster. Her and Harry just have so much that they need to keep under wraps... Crazy. Great job!
4/17/2023 c33 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Harry escape Bletchley's wrath. And Harry's right, Bletchley's enforcement of the rules is a bit too selective for him to really have been part of the DMLE... I do hope Marlene is okay there at the end... Off to the next chapter!
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Harry escape Bletchley's wrath. And Harry's right, Bletchley's enforcement of the rules is a bit too selective for him to really have been part of the DMLE... I do hope Marlene is okay there at the end... Off to the next chapter!
4/17/2023 c32 Hank1967
Excellent! Glad to see Harry and Marlene escaping the Headmaster's scrutiny, even though he's just about sure they did it. Of course, he's got to figure out what they did first and this Dumbledore does not know about either the Room of Requirement or the entrance to the Chamber of Secrets. Well played! Harry's solution should give Voldemort conniptions, especially when he figures out his other Horcrux is gone... Glad to see that Harry got one over on Bletchley as well. Hopefully Dumbledore or McGonagall will back him up...
Excellent! Glad to see Harry and Marlene escaping the Headmaster's scrutiny, even though he's just about sure they did it. Of course, he's got to figure out what they did first and this Dumbledore does not know about either the Room of Requirement or the entrance to the Chamber of Secrets. Well played! Harry's solution should give Voldemort conniptions, especially when he figures out his other Horcrux is gone... Glad to see that Harry got one over on Bletchley as well. Hopefully Dumbledore or McGonagall will back him up...
4/17/2023 c31 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Harry using his noodle, although sometimes it seems as if he is too smart for his own good... Also enjoy seeing his and Marlene's fates becoming more and more entwined.
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Harry using his noodle, although sometimes it seems as if he is too smart for his own good... Also enjoy seeing his and Marlene's fates becoming more and more entwined.
4/17/2023 c30 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Enjoyed Harry teasing Professor McGongall. Beltchley is an interesting character. Not quite Umbridge, but not too far from it. And now Harry's got Voldemort's diary after him... Dangerous, but an unprecedented opportunity to destroy another Horcrux. Gonna make life interesting...
Excellent chapter! Enjoyed Harry teasing Professor McGongall. Beltchley is an interesting character. Not quite Umbridge, but not too far from it. And now Harry's got Voldemort's diary after him... Dangerous, but an unprecedented opportunity to destroy another Horcrux. Gonna make life interesting...
4/17/2023 c29 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! I do hope Marlene told Harry of Avery's threats... Be a shame if anything were to happen to her. Glad to see Aurelius and Harry bonding over rituals. Love all the world building and creativity going on in this story!
Excellent chapter! I do hope Marlene told Harry of Avery's threats... Be a shame if anything were to happen to her. Glad to see Aurelius and Harry bonding over rituals. Love all the world building and creativity going on in this story!
4/17/2023 c28 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Harry get one over on the Goblins. Gonna be interesting to see what he found... Also glad to see that Narcissa is going to be able to become a healer like she wished. Enjoyed Harry's time with his dad, helping him to write to Lily.
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Harry get one over on the Goblins. Gonna be interesting to see what he found... Also glad to see that Narcissa is going to be able to become a healer like she wished. Enjoyed Harry's time with his dad, helping him to write to Lily.
4/17/2023 c27 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Harry and Marlene escape from Diagon Alley. Also glad to see that Marlene isn't chickening out as Harry begins to tell her of his secrets. Enjoying seeing Voldemort squirm. Dude has way too high an opinion of himself. You know, if he could have just accepted mediocrity his life could have been so much better. At the very least, he would have ended up dying with a chopped up soul...
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Harry and Marlene escape from Diagon Alley. Also glad to see that Marlene isn't chickening out as Harry begins to tell her of his secrets. Enjoying seeing Voldemort squirm. Dude has way too high an opinion of himself. You know, if he could have just accepted mediocrity his life could have been so much better. At the very least, he would have ended up dying with a chopped up soul...
4/17/2023 c26 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Would have liked a bit more detail on Marlene's reaction to Harry being a Peverell and that he actually had the cloak of death. Enjoyed the Harry/Marlene time. Also enjoyed the discussion on Dementors that Harry had with Aurelius. And now Harry's got another Horcrux! Off to the next chapter!
Excellent chapter! Would have liked a bit more detail on Marlene's reaction to Harry being a Peverell and that he actually had the cloak of death. Enjoyed the Harry/Marlene time. Also enjoyed the discussion on Dementors that Harry had with Aurelius. And now Harry's got another Horcrux! Off to the next chapter!
4/17/2023 c25 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Really like the Peverell Grimoire! Glad to see that Harry has someone to help him grow stronger. I do like how you've set all of that up and are giving a really good backstory to go along with it. Really appreciate all of the world building that you are doing. Enjoyed breakfast with the Potters. Looking forward to seeing what Harry is going to tell Marlene!
Excellent chapter! Really like the Peverell Grimoire! Glad to see that Harry has someone to help him grow stronger. I do like how you've set all of that up and are giving a really good backstory to go along with it. Really appreciate all of the world building that you are doing. Enjoyed breakfast with the Potters. Looking forward to seeing what Harry is going to tell Marlene!
4/17/2023 c24 Hank1967
Enjoyed the Harry/Marlene time! Also enjoyed the meeting between Harry and the Flamels. Your introduction of Aurelius' tome is fantastic! Love its backstory as well. Must read next chapter now!
Enjoyed the Harry/Marlene time! Also enjoyed the meeting between Harry and the Flamels. Your introduction of Aurelius' tome is fantastic! Love its backstory as well. Must read next chapter now!
4/17/2023 c23 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Harry being able to move forward with his plans to profit from the Basilisk. Looking forward to the inclusion of Flamel in the story. He should have some fun tales to tell Harry. Loved the Quidditch match! That was too cool that the Snitch was hiding in Marlene's hair! Now I'm wondering if someone tampered with it... Perhaps Sirius? That sounds like something straight up his alley.
Excellent chapter! Glad to see Harry being able to move forward with his plans to profit from the Basilisk. Looking forward to the inclusion of Flamel in the story. He should have some fun tales to tell Harry. Loved the Quidditch match! That was too cool that the Snitch was hiding in Marlene's hair! Now I'm wondering if someone tampered with it... Perhaps Sirius? That sounds like something straight up his alley.
4/17/2023 c22 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Hope Flamel will take the bait... Great job with the Levicorpus scene from canon. Rather a shame Snape is acting such a fool. Enjoyed seeing Harry put him in his place. Let's hope it takes!
Excellent chapter! Hope Flamel will take the bait... Great job with the Levicorpus scene from canon. Rather a shame Snape is acting such a fool. Enjoyed seeing Harry put him in his place. Let's hope it takes!
4/17/2023 c21 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Enjoyed all the Harry/Marlene time. Glad to see him trusting her with the secret of the Room of Requirement. Also enjoyed how he got one, or two, or three over on the Marauders.
Excellent chapter! Enjoyed all the Harry/Marlene time. Glad to see him trusting her with the secret of the Room of Requirement. Also enjoyed how he got one, or two, or three over on the Marauders.
4/17/2023 c20 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Loved the Quidditch game and all that led up to it! Smart move on Harry's part to start advertising the Nimbus. Perhaps this way he'll be able to pay a decent bride price for Marlene... Enjoying seeing the Marauders in action. Really love the dynamic that you've established between the main characters. It's really fun seeing life breathed into them!
Excellent chapter! Loved the Quidditch game and all that led up to it! Smart move on Harry's part to start advertising the Nimbus. Perhaps this way he'll be able to pay a decent bride price for Marlene... Enjoying seeing the Marauders in action. Really love the dynamic that you've established between the main characters. It's really fun seeing life breathed into them!