for Fairborn Adventures1/1/2023 c34 Guest
Why would Harry assume Voldemort would not return to the Chamber? Harry knew very well that Voldemort could do so, yet he made the same mistake as V. who assumed also. Why keep priceless treasures in the stronghold of your enemy? Harry, Harry, Harry. Shakes head. Thanks for an entertaining and outstanding story.
Why would Harry assume Voldemort would not return to the Chamber? Harry knew very well that Voldemort could do so, yet he made the same mistake as V. who assumed also. Why keep priceless treasures in the stronghold of your enemy? Harry, Harry, Harry. Shakes head. Thanks for an entertaining and outstanding story.
112/31/2022 c43 nagiten
hmm interesting
didnt the lord black tell the other not to harm harry? cant harry tell lord black the lestranges and bellatrix were among the death eaters wouldnt that do something to help limit tom numbers?
hmm interesting
didnt the lord black tell the other not to harm harry? cant harry tell lord black the lestranges and bellatrix were among the death eaters wouldnt that do something to help limit tom numbers?
12/31/2022 c38 nagiten
marlene took the rose out of the vase how could lilly of seen it if it was in marlenes pocket also how can marlene snuggle against his side if she siting opposite him?
marlene took the rose out of the vase how could lilly of seen it if it was in marlenes pocket also how can marlene snuggle against his side if she siting opposite him?
12/31/2022 c35 nagiten
nice chapter
and it not demonstrates greater power and it not demonstrates greater power
nice chapter
and it not demonstrates greater power and it not demonstrates greater power
12/30/2022 c32 nagiten
you got the date mixed up again september 15th 17th 1996 it should be 76
also it seventh floor/level not second for the room and you misspelled snapes mocking name the marauders use for him.
hope u are well
you got the date mixed up again september 15th 17th 1996 it should be 76
also it seventh floor/level not second for the room and you misspelled snapes mocking name the marauders use for him.
hope u are well
12/30/2022 c22 nagiten
why are we back to march again? the start of last chapter was april the end of the chapter before was the qudditch match and near the end of march? shouldnt it be 20 something of april, also didnt harry give marlene the snitch from the slytherin game?
why are we back to march again? the start of last chapter was april the end of the chapter before was the qudditch match and near the end of march? shouldnt it be 20 something of april, also didnt harry give marlene the snitch from the slytherin game?
12/30/2022 c21 nagiten
why does it say march 10th in this chapter?during the make out scene it reads march 10th 1976
why does it say march 10th in this chapter?during the make out scene it reads march 10th 1976
12/29/2022 c19 nagiten
hmm interesting
didnt marlenes father say march 10th so why is the date march 12th?
hmm interesting
didnt marlenes father say march 10th so why is the date march 12th?
12/29/2022 c13 nagiten
hi great story nice chapter
i think the start of this chapter is incorrect you list it still as the 13th yet say it the day after the trial so it should be the 14th also if it was 4 days ago[since the trial] in marlene pov it would be the 18 not still the 14th.
hope you are well
hi great story nice chapter
i think the start of this chapter is incorrect you list it still as the 13th yet say it the day after the trial so it should be the 14th also if it was 4 days ago[since the trial] in marlene pov it would be the 18 not still the 14th.
hope you are well
12/27/2022 c3 Ltbutterfly287
Ya no this story isn’t any good because your going to route of Harry religiously hiding the fact that he’s from the future. He could have easily passed himself off as a potter if you had him tell them the truth.
Ya no this story isn’t any good because your going to route of Harry religiously hiding the fact that he’s from the future. He could have easily passed himself off as a potter if you had him tell them the truth.
12/27/2022 c2 Ltbutterfly287
This is stupid. Time travel plots in fanfiction don’t work well like this. Harry doesn’t need to hide anything really. People are aware of time travel and there are measures in place to help Harry return to his time. Not to mention it isn’t so unbelievable that no one would think he’s lying. Besides you’ve given Harry zero room to ingratiate himself into the marauders by immediately putting up that wall against the potters.
This is stupid. Time travel plots in fanfiction don’t work well like this. Harry doesn’t need to hide anything really. People are aware of time travel and there are measures in place to help Harry return to his time. Not to mention it isn’t so unbelievable that no one would think he’s lying. Besides you’ve given Harry zero room to ingratiate himself into the marauders by immediately putting up that wall against the potters.
12/27/2022 c1 Ltbutterfly287
The idea that a community as small of the magical worlds would have universities is stupid. There aren’t schools for higher learning. After you graduate it’s pure self study and traveling to find knowledge or apprentice under someone.
The idea that a community as small of the magical worlds would have universities is stupid. There aren’t schools for higher learning. After you graduate it’s pure self study and traveling to find knowledge or apprentice under someone.