for Fairborn Adventures4/16/2023 c4 DylanHh
Kind of wish I lied and said he was a pure blood he would get more political power that way over moldyshorts, him being a half blood immediately puts him in a trash bin he had the boy who lived excuse before
Kind of wish I lied and said he was a pure blood he would get more political power that way over moldyshorts, him being a half blood immediately puts him in a trash bin he had the boy who lived excuse before
4/10/2023 c39 Guest
Harrys hostility makes literally no sense. None. I get a competent harry and dumbledore against voldemort would be a lot more boring, but a reason for the hostility at least wouldve been nice.
The story is still enjoyable,but its a glaring hole
Harrys hostility makes literally no sense. None. I get a competent harry and dumbledore against voldemort would be a lot more boring, but a reason for the hostility at least wouldve been nice.
The story is still enjoyable,but its a glaring hole
4/9/2023 c3 alsdjhfgljkwebgh
This is awful, lmfao
Harry is an Unspeakable, trying to act like a Peverell.. yet he goes around acting like a child, and making sure everyone high and low knows he's a half-blood. Good premise, terrible execution.
This is awful, lmfao
Harry is an Unspeakable, trying to act like a Peverell.. yet he goes around acting like a child, and making sure everyone high and low knows he's a half-blood. Good premise, terrible execution.
4/9/2023 c2 alsdjhfgljkwebgh
Harry has traveled back in time, and taken the name Peverell, and with no one to deny him, he still says he's a half-blood? What brain dead nonsense.
Harry has traveled back in time, and taken the name Peverell, and with no one to deny him, he still says he's a half-blood? What brain dead nonsense.
4/9/2023 c16 The Slacker9
I think Dumbledore is reading between the lines too much he is practically on a wild goose chase like he is trying to find something about a family which is very ancient and powerful and are hiding in Liechtenstein and are keeping their heads down like he is looking too much into it I’d understand if he would try to get Harry’s characteristics and all to see if he is evil or not but right now he is searching for problems about a child from a prestigious family being able to perform magic better than Dumbledore and Voldemort when he was a kid
I think Dumbledore is reading between the lines too much he is practically on a wild goose chase like he is trying to find something about a family which is very ancient and powerful and are hiding in Liechtenstein and are keeping their heads down like he is looking too much into it I’d understand if he would try to get Harry’s characteristics and all to see if he is evil or not but right now he is searching for problems about a child from a prestigious family being able to perform magic better than Dumbledore and Voldemort when he was a kid
4/4/2023 c99 kingzero753
So overall I enjoyed the story very much. Though there are a few things I didn’t like. Harry’s dislike/mistrust of Dumbledore as well a the way DD behaved at the end. Also that Harry resorted to using Horcruxes himself.
So overall I enjoyed the story very much. Though there are a few things I didn’t like. Harry’s dislike/mistrust of Dumbledore as well a the way DD behaved at the end. Also that Harry resorted to using Horcruxes himself.
3/25/2023 c26 kyoshi
Great story and doesn't seem to be slowing down.
Great story and doesn't seem to be slowing down.
3/22/2023 c100 Lord Peverell-Eveningshade
Good. The story is good. Harry saves Marlene, the potters etc. all was good. But, at the end, Harry makes Horcrux to save himself for a promise. A true Peverell will never make a Horcrux! I know it's a fan fiction, still you should just rewrote that.
Good. The story is good. Harry saves Marlene, the potters etc. all was good. But, at the end, Harry makes Horcrux to save himself for a promise. A true Peverell will never make a Horcrux! I know it's a fan fiction, still you should just rewrote that.