for Fairborn Adventures2/3/2023 c99 b.angaragerdene
Just finished this story. Bloody well done, one of the greatest fics out there.
Just finished this story. Bloody well done, one of the greatest fics out there.
2/1/2023 c16 SURAJ
what if i were to put james with narcissa she was as bigotted and maybe she didnt like lucisus malfoy after marrieage and she has no ill feallings against harry peverell remember lucisu did thuse the kiling curse so yes here and ajmes one girl one boy one gryffinfodr one slytherin but i would beeleive that the product or the gryffindor and slytherin should eb hufflepuff and ravencalw grey neutral neither light or darlk neither black or white neither anti muggle born nor pro muggleborn and tehy wont be targetted bmuch lilly potter with severus snape heres why lilly went ot james which mafde severus joint he death eaters right so yes lets sya severus aasks forgivenes from lilly treats her well and belaltrix with remus she would realized her mistake hadn her and luoin can be a thing or her and sirus black remus lu/in and amelia brones powerful kind loving
what if i were to put james with narcissa she was as bigotted and maybe she didnt like lucisus malfoy after marrieage and she has no ill feallings against harry peverell remember lucisu did thuse the kiling curse so yes here and ajmes one girl one boy one gryffinfodr one slytherin but i would beeleive that the product or the gryffindor and slytherin should eb hufflepuff and ravencalw grey neutral neither light or darlk neither black or white neither anti muggle born nor pro muggleborn and tehy wont be targetted bmuch lilly potter with severus snape heres why lilly went ot james which mafde severus joint he death eaters right so yes lets sya severus aasks forgivenes from lilly treats her well and belaltrix with remus she would realized her mistake hadn her and luoin can be a thing or her and sirus black remus lu/in and amelia brones powerful kind loving
2/1/2023 c42 Big.Daddy.Dudders
Tbh this has a lot of grammar errors. It’s like you’re using talk to text with a lisp. Other than that it’s a pretty good read.
Tbh this has a lot of grammar errors. It’s like you’re using talk to text with a lisp. Other than that it’s a pretty good read.
61/31/2023 c20 Big.Daddy.Dudders
So whenever you are saying positions on a team they should absolutely not be italicized. That’s to bring more attention to it. An EMPHASIS. Just make it capital.
So whenever you are saying positions on a team they should absolutely not be italicized. That’s to bring more attention to it. An EMPHASIS. Just make it capital.
1/22/2023 c76 suziq968
If you ever do an edit on this wonderful story, please remove most of the golden braid tossing. It's to the point now that it throws me out of the story wondering how many times she's tossed her perfect hair!
If you ever do an edit on this wonderful story, please remove most of the golden braid tossing. It's to the point now that it throws me out of the story wondering how many times she's tossed her perfect hair!
1/15/2023 c70 god eater
i expected him to open his mouth and throw it back lmfao
i expected him to open his mouth and throw it back lmfao
1/15/2023 c65 god eater
well at least mckinnon worked for the truth in comparison to other fics where he just blurts it out
well at least mckinnon worked for the truth in comparison to other fics where he just blurts it out
1/15/2023 c56 god eater
i know that they love each other, but their personalities really are them being together and that's it. no offence though, because harry i get it, but marlene i think is just as attracted to power as it is in his body and his chivalry thing. but nothing else, her only friend here is flo and acquaintances in the quidditich team but nothing else. but at least she has something to fight for! that's a plus i think and the grief gave a little bit more personality than just harry is my boyfriend
i know that they love each other, but their personalities really are them being together and that's it. no offence though, because harry i get it, but marlene i think is just as attracted to power as it is in his body and his chivalry thing. but nothing else, her only friend here is flo and acquaintances in the quidditich team but nothing else. but at least she has something to fight for! that's a plus i think and the grief gave a little bit more personality than just harry is my boyfriend
1/15/2023 c55 god eater
your characterization of dumbledore is getting one dimensional here and he's not getting any more productive i think it would have been great if they just come clean but if only dumbledore shows an ounce of trust to harry it's so tiring after a while for a manipulative dumbledore to accomplish absolutely nothing
your characterization of dumbledore is getting one dimensional here and he's not getting any more productive i think it would have been great if they just come clean but if only dumbledore shows an ounce of trust to harry it's so tiring after a while for a manipulative dumbledore to accomplish absolutely nothing
1/13/2023 c43 god eater
i think the reason why the romance i s unbearable for ME is that it was too fast like, i didnt expect a pure romance fic where she was hard to get but she just a crush so fast that harry needed to get to her and his saving people thing would not have allowed her to be abused by lestrange ergo they are overcompensating for their lost time in the romance. theyre so dependent on each other that it's unhealthy, but maybe it's intended because harry was so deprived of personal love in his old life i guess we can count that but it still remains that the romance is insufferable for me personally, no offence author.
i think the reason why the romance i s unbearable for ME is that it was too fast like, i didnt expect a pure romance fic where she was hard to get but she just a crush so fast that harry needed to get to her and his saving people thing would not have allowed her to be abused by lestrange ergo they are overcompensating for their lost time in the romance. theyre so dependent on each other that it's unhealthy, but maybe it's intended because harry was so deprived of personal love in his old life i guess we can count that but it still remains that the romance is insufferable for me personally, no offence author.