for Fairborn Adventures2/9/2022 c1 
1Wynn Silver
In reference to growth, it's "stunted" and not "stunned".
On another note, good start. Looking forward to more.
1Wynn SilverIn reference to growth, it's "stunted" and not "stunned".
On another note, good start. Looking forward to more.
2/9/2022 c5 1Fallenrouz
Please save regulus black. Sirius and Regulus both alive would be perfect for house of Black, they balance each other. I imagine if sirius becomes lord then all book stuff regardless grey or dark will be out. And i as a Ravenclaw wouldn't survive that.
1FallenrouzPlease save regulus black. Sirius and Regulus both alive would be perfect for house of Black, they balance each other. I imagine if sirius becomes lord then all book stuff regardless grey or dark will be out. And i as a Ravenclaw wouldn't survive that.
2/8/2022 c5 Guest
peverell should be something like Grey Lord or leading neutral faction with help of potters and blacks to balance Light lord and Dark lord
peverell should be something like Grey Lord or leading neutral faction with help of potters and blacks to balance Light lord and Dark lord
2/8/2022 c5 Guest
Why saving just order family? Why not try to save Blacks as well? I mean it’s too late for bellatrix now but Narcissa and Regulus can be saved, right? Severus can also be saved. He took Peverell name shouldn’t that give him political clout and power to start something apart from being choice from Marlene. He already have Charlus with him, he can convince Arctus. Two can back him if Harry agrees to stay away from alby’s crook nose.
Why saving just order family? Why not try to save Blacks as well? I mean it’s too late for bellatrix now but Narcissa and Regulus can be saved, right? Severus can also be saved. He took Peverell name shouldn’t that give him political clout and power to start something apart from being choice from Marlene. He already have Charlus with him, he can convince Arctus. Two can back him if Harry agrees to stay away from alby’s crook nose.
2/8/2022 c5 Guest
I love your idea of the story and I’m enjoying how it setting up but this is usually when stories like yours really change for the worst . I love your previous story so I’m hoping that you will not fall into that trope as other authors have. Please use silence when dealing with Dumbledore. I’ve always hated how characters basically spilled their being stumbled door or give him enough rope so they can hang them with it. He’s not obligated to tell anyone any of his past or his secrets please don’t make him feel like he’s obligated to do so. Also hopefully this won’t be a redemption story for fucking death eaters.
I love your idea of the story and I’m enjoying how it setting up but this is usually when stories like yours really change for the worst . I love your previous story so I’m hoping that you will not fall into that trope as other authors have. Please use silence when dealing with Dumbledore. I’ve always hated how characters basically spilled their being stumbled door or give him enough rope so they can hang them with it. He’s not obligated to tell anyone any of his past or his secrets please don’t make him feel like he’s obligated to do so. Also hopefully this won’t be a redemption story for fucking death eaters.
2/9/2022 c5 4OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla
Harry Peverell has certainly left a wonderful first impression.
Had it not been for his desire to be close to The Marauders and Lily Evans, Harry Peverell would have likely been sorted in either Ravenclaw or Slytherin, preferably Ravenclaw so it would give him an opportunity to interact with Marlene McKinnon.
Not that he can't interact with her anyways anytime he likes. It's a mutual attraction between Harry and Marlene after all. Can he save her from her pre-destined fate?
Rabastan Lestrange intends to put the new student in his place, but Thomas Avery, familiar with the Peverell name, warns his fellow Slytherin Housemate not to act recklessly.
We all know Harry Peverell will put them in their places like The Boss he is.
4OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzillaHarry Peverell has certainly left a wonderful first impression.
Had it not been for his desire to be close to The Marauders and Lily Evans, Harry Peverell would have likely been sorted in either Ravenclaw or Slytherin, preferably Ravenclaw so it would give him an opportunity to interact with Marlene McKinnon.
Not that he can't interact with her anyways anytime he likes. It's a mutual attraction between Harry and Marlene after all. Can he save her from her pre-destined fate?
Rabastan Lestrange intends to put the new student in his place, but Thomas Avery, familiar with the Peverell name, warns his fellow Slytherin Housemate not to act recklessly.
We all know Harry Peverell will put them in their places like The Boss he is.
2/9/2022 c4 OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla
I hope you don't intend to torment Marlene McKinnon for too long with her courtship to Rabastan Lestrange, especially now that she has found her perfect match with Harry Peverell.
By the way, it's supposed to be Elder Wand, not Elderwand.
I wonder, if Harry has no issues with The Marauders, then how will he treat Severus Snape, especially since he knows Severus was once Lily Evans' best friend once upon a time?
Don't blame Harry for his perspective on Remus Lupin and Peter Pettigrew. For now, it's wait and see approach.
I hope you don't intend to torment Marlene McKinnon for too long with her courtship to Rabastan Lestrange, especially now that she has found her perfect match with Harry Peverell.
By the way, it's supposed to be Elder Wand, not Elderwand.
I wonder, if Harry has no issues with The Marauders, then how will he treat Severus Snape, especially since he knows Severus was once Lily Evans' best friend once upon a time?
Don't blame Harry for his perspective on Remus Lupin and Peter Pettigrew. For now, it's wait and see approach.
2/9/2022 c3 OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla
Oh dear! Dorea actually thought Charlus would cheat on her with another woman? HA!
I can't blame her, considering Harry resembles James with the exception of their eyes, but it also helps that Harry is a bit more bulky and taller as well than James, so you can tell them apart pretty well.
Harry's investment opportunity with Jon Nimbus will pay off tremendously in time. The Peverell coffers will be filled to the brim with Galleos, Sickles and Knuts respectively, hehehehehe!
How much of the political landscape of Magic Britain and the rest of the Magical world will change, with the Most Ancient and Noble House of Peverell back in the public eye?
Albus Dumbledore is intrigued, while Fawkes is happy.
Oh dear! Dorea actually thought Charlus would cheat on her with another woman? HA!
I can't blame her, considering Harry resembles James with the exception of their eyes, but it also helps that Harry is a bit more bulky and taller as well than James, so you can tell them apart pretty well.
Harry's investment opportunity with Jon Nimbus will pay off tremendously in time. The Peverell coffers will be filled to the brim with Galleos, Sickles and Knuts respectively, hehehehehe!
How much of the political landscape of Magic Britain and the rest of the Magical world will change, with the Most Ancient and Noble House of Peverell back in the public eye?
Albus Dumbledore is intrigued, while Fawkes is happy.
2/8/2022 c2 OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla
Hehehe! Harry Peverell is a cheeky bloke.
Exposing Augustus Rookwood's allegiance to Lord Voldemort for the Ministry will put a massive snag in Voldemort's plans.
Future knowledge for the win.
The Peverell vault is still active, though not surprising it has little Galleons prior to most of their riches transferred to the Potters after the Peverell family's supposed extinction.
Charlus Potter is caught off guard by the name Peverell, a name unheard of in many centuries. That makes Harry a distant relative to the Potters in this timeline.
Hehehe! Harry Peverell is a cheeky bloke.
Exposing Augustus Rookwood's allegiance to Lord Voldemort for the Ministry will put a massive snag in Voldemort's plans.
Future knowledge for the win.
The Peverell vault is still active, though not surprising it has little Galleons prior to most of their riches transferred to the Potters after the Peverell family's supposed extinction.
Charlus Potter is caught off guard by the name Peverell, a name unheard of in many centuries. That makes Harry a distant relative to the Potters in this timeline.
2/8/2022 c1 OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla
So Harry Potter changed for the better Post-Deathly Hallows, and he kept the Deathly Hallows as well, opting not to destroy the Elderwand, which is a miracle worker when used for good.
In some parts, when you meant to say "scar has faded", you said "fainted".
Another part is supposed to say "stunted growth", not "stunned".
Outside of spelling errors, this is a solid chapter. I look forward to what changes in the time stream Harry will create with his presence in late 1975 onwards, some years before the First Wizarding War caused by the Dark Lord Voldemort aka Thomas Marvolo Riddle Junior.
So Harry Potter changed for the better Post-Deathly Hallows, and he kept the Deathly Hallows as well, opting not to destroy the Elderwand, which is a miracle worker when used for good.
In some parts, when you meant to say "scar has faded", you said "fainted".
Another part is supposed to say "stunted growth", not "stunned".
Outside of spelling errors, this is a solid chapter. I look forward to what changes in the time stream Harry will create with his presence in late 1975 onwards, some years before the First Wizarding War caused by the Dark Lord Voldemort aka Thomas Marvolo Riddle Junior.
2/8/2022 c4 2maximusrexmundi
I hope Lestrange challenges him to a duel, always good to have justification when pruning your enemies
2maximusrexmundiI hope Lestrange challenges him to a duel, always good to have justification when pruning your enemies
2/8/2022 c5 HughJasz
Brilliant start mate. Really looking forward to see how this develops moving forward. I've never seen a Marlene fic before so this should be very interesting. Thanks for the chapter!
Brilliant start mate. Really looking forward to see how this develops moving forward. I've never seen a Marlene fic before so this should be very interesting. Thanks for the chapter!