for Fairborn Adventures9/8/2023 c99 wewe1212
Harry basically turnes darker and darker, and ends up evil.
If I was dumbledore I also would try to kill him. He truly did not deserve to live after all the things that he did.
Really I love how this author writes, as seen in POWER FREEDOME FRENCH FLOWER, but this story and its morals are truly messed up.
Harry basically turnes darker and darker, and ends up evil.
If I was dumbledore I also would try to kill him. He truly did not deserve to live after all the things that he did.
Really I love how this author writes, as seen in POWER FREEDOME FRENCH FLOWER, but this story and its morals are truly messed up.
9/6/2023 c79 santos.luis.contato
all this shit about Voldermort wanting Harry to become strong... Is bulshit... Voldermort would never do that... Why make some stronger that could kill him? Even more so because there is someone out there hunting his Horcrux... And author making Harry losing all his friends and family, will only make this great story, a shit story, in my opnion... Why bring hin back, if all he did till now is let his family and friend die?
all this shit about Voldermort wanting Harry to become strong... Is bulshit... Voldermort would never do that... Why make some stronger that could kill him? Even more so because there is someone out there hunting his Horcrux... And author making Harry losing all his friends and family, will only make this great story, a shit story, in my opnion... Why bring hin back, if all he did till now is let his family and friend die?
9/6/2023 c79 santos.luis.contato
dude... I getting nervous with this author... Harry is shit... He cant save even the same people he claimed to save! What good he did until now? he didnt save even 1 person until now...
dude... I getting nervous with this author... Harry is shit... He cant save even the same people he claimed to save! What good he did until now? he didnt save even 1 person until now...
9/4/2023 c50 santos.luis.contato
what I am feeling from Marlene is that she is manipulating Harry somehow... Dont know if its true or not...
what I am feeling from Marlene is that she is manipulating Harry somehow... Dont know if its true or not...
9/4/2023 c42 santos.luis.contato
dude... I was expecting a lot more from Harry... After all 42 chapters until now, of him being a lot more powerful than in Canon, and still, this is all he is capable of? Voldermort could just kill him right there, and he still think he is his equal? If not for MacKinnon sacrifice, his grampa wiould have being killed... I was expecting a lot more... Its a disappointment that author didnt make Harry a lot more powerful to battle Voldermort in equal stand...
dude... I was expecting a lot more from Harry... After all 42 chapters until now, of him being a lot more powerful than in Canon, and still, this is all he is capable of? Voldermort could just kill him right there, and he still think he is his equal? If not for MacKinnon sacrifice, his grampa wiould have being killed... I was expecting a lot more... Its a disappointment that author didnt make Harry a lot more powerful to battle Voldermort in equal stand...
9/3/2023 c31 santos.luis.contato
I told you so... it was a bad idea of putting the books there... what a moron...
I told you so... it was a bad idea of putting the books there... what a moron...
9/3/2023 c29 santos.luis.contato
With the dairy in Hogwarts now, everything he put in the Chamber, will be spot by the horcrux...
With the dairy in Hogwarts now, everything he put in the Chamber, will be spot by the horcrux...
9/2/2023 c18 santos.luis.contato
Dude... This just complicated things! Now he wont know where is the locket, the cup and the diary... How the freaking hell will he destroy all of them?
Dude... This just complicated things! Now he wont know where is the locket, the cup and the diary... How the freaking hell will he destroy all of them?
8/29/2023 c1 Sahamosveb
I read the comments, and decided to check the 54th chapter. Indeed, there is no point in reading further.
I read the comments, and decided to check the 54th chapter. Indeed, there is no point in reading further.
8/29/2023 c5 Sahamosveb
Returning to Hogwarts was a banal decision, but at least understandable.
But enrolling in Gryffindor was not only a trivial decision, but also an incredibly boring
Returning to Hogwarts was a banal decision, but at least understandable.
But enrolling in Gryffindor was not only a trivial decision, but also an incredibly boring
8/29/2023 c38 hanower
a good story but I think this is it for me. Some of harry's decisions werent that smart, the whole pissinf match with dumbles is just pointless and he still doesn't really understand anything of politics. It isn't that hard... Anyway, good story, good characters and harry was even smartish. the plot is just bad for me
a good story but I think this is it for me. Some of harry's decisions werent that smart, the whole pissinf match with dumbles is just pointless and he still doesn't really understand anything of politics. It isn't that hard... Anyway, good story, good characters and harry was even smartish. the plot is just bad for me
8/29/2023 c36 asd
Pestis Incendium is the incantation for fiendfyre. Hate that when authors get that wrong
Pestis Incendium is the incantation for fiendfyre. Hate that when authors get that wrong
8/28/2023 c3 mahongy
that whole family feels scene is so clishe and cringe
that whole family feels scene is so clishe and cringe
8/28/2023 c3 asd
So since harry looks so much alike to the potters, he owes them his life story? Typical fanfiction. Authors do anything to force the mc to talk about his past
So since harry looks so much alike to the potters, he owes them his life story? Typical fanfiction. Authors do anything to force the mc to talk about his past
8/22/2023 c12 hdres
I am enjoying your story and liked how you handled the court case. Thank you for sharing your story
I am enjoying your story and liked how you handled the court case. Thank you for sharing your story