for Dragon Boy DxD2/7/2022 c1 
3Obsidian Nova Arc
yay, hope this one does not fall for Rias, all hail the Asia and exorcist route of love, and dear god that sounds so broken lol. could make own bloody variant of hyperbolic time chamber if can get mad enough for a variant BB that has abilities over barriers giving rias at least 100 days when KFP comes knocking, lol it irritates me how easy it would be to take him out if Kiba had a brain
3Obsidian Nova Arcyay, hope this one does not fall for Rias, all hail the Asia and exorcist route of love, and dear god that sounds so broken lol. could make own bloody variant of hyperbolic time chamber if can get mad enough for a variant BB that has abilities over barriers giving rias at least 100 days when KFP comes knocking, lol it irritates me how easy it would be to take him out if Kiba had a brain
2/7/2022 c1 Guest-Questioner
Boosting any capability above average by Ddraigs' power, has ALWAYS been possible!
However, these type's of stories are almost non-existent because,
it's always physical strength with Ddraig, NEVER brain's or anything else,
NOT related to the physical strength either, of sort's..
Here is something,
Spoken by VLAD KING BNHA...
The body gets stronger as it recovers from being broken, we'll break them,
as many time's as is necessary to get them there.
(not literally worded, but the character did say a similar style of breaking stuff)
(The episode involved was part of the training camp arc, where Class-1-B was fully introduced)
So in conclusion, if Issei, or the protagonist replacement's of him,
trained more, then following canon, however slightly, they might've turned out,
better than being, same-old, same-old, like it usually is.
Extra-Extra, What about Ddraig BOOSTING, the healing factor for the body, what of that?
Boosting any capability above average by Ddraigs' power, has ALWAYS been possible!
However, these type's of stories are almost non-existent because,
it's always physical strength with Ddraig, NEVER brain's or anything else,
NOT related to the physical strength either, of sort's..
Here is something,
Spoken by VLAD KING BNHA...
The body gets stronger as it recovers from being broken, we'll break them,
as many time's as is necessary to get them there.
(not literally worded, but the character did say a similar style of breaking stuff)
(The episode involved was part of the training camp arc, where Class-1-B was fully introduced)
So in conclusion, if Issei, or the protagonist replacement's of him,
trained more, then following canon, however slightly, they might've turned out,
better than being, same-old, same-old, like it usually is.
Extra-Extra, What about Ddraig BOOSTING, the healing factor for the body, what of that?
2/6/2022 c1 Yetti
This is a funny concept, so good job and hope to see you improve in the future if you continue to write here.
This is a funny concept, so good job and hope to see you improve in the future if you continue to write here.
2/6/2022 c1 13Ubljudok
You posted a review of my story, so it's only fair if I shared my thoughts back.
You have a good start here, and your MC's commentary managed to get a few chuckles outta me. This has the potential of ending up as a great crack fic.
My only problem has already been stated by a previous reviewer: it's too short. It may be just personal preference, but anything below ~1k words feels a little too abrupt, and this story could use a little meat on its bones.
Otherwise, Great Job! Looking forward to future updates!
13UbljudokYou posted a review of my story, so it's only fair if I shared my thoughts back.
You have a good start here, and your MC's commentary managed to get a few chuckles outta me. This has the potential of ending up as a great crack fic.
My only problem has already been stated by a previous reviewer: it's too short. It may be just personal preference, but anything below ~1k words feels a little too abrupt, and this story could use a little meat on its bones.
Otherwise, Great Job! Looking forward to future updates!
2/6/2022 c1 8The Keeper of Worlds
…Ember to inferno…You can boost damage and healing factors. Near immortal and an make 1 cut equal 20 in a matter of seconds.
8The Keeper of Worlds…Ember to inferno…You can boost damage and healing factors. Near immortal and an make 1 cut equal 20 in a matter of seconds.
2/6/2022 c1 12Sultan Asil Arslan-Hiatus
This is an impressive start with a fun MC but it definitely could be longer.
12Sultan Asil Arslan-HiatusThis is an impressive start with a fun MC but it definitely could be longer.