for Harbingers of Change8h c121 BoredKing
Why aren't they naming all the newly conquered monsters? It would make them stronger and ensure their loyalty. It's bizarre that they decided to stop naming everyone when it's so beneficial. Especially since Momo integrated the Master skill into Nazarick.
The sudden change to Alcha's pov was jarring. And I'm pretty sure you messed up some of the dialog between Alcha and Luchia. Some of their lines only make sense of the other is the one saying it.
Why aren't they naming all the newly conquered monsters? It would make them stronger and ensure their loyalty. It's bizarre that they decided to stop naming everyone when it's so beneficial. Especially since Momo integrated the Master skill into Nazarick.
The sudden change to Alcha's pov was jarring. And I'm pretty sure you messed up some of the dialog between Alcha and Luchia. Some of their lines only make sense of the other is the one saying it.
9/15 c125 Guest
I need more Rubedo interactions.
I need more Rubedo interactions.
9/9 c125 ArguableReader
The final line, what is your bidding my master, would have been more hilarious,
if your, was replaced with THY...What is thy bidding my master...
Catch the reference yet, it's from star wars?
The final line, what is your bidding my master, would have been more hilarious,
if your, was replaced with THY...What is thy bidding my master...
Catch the reference yet, it's from star wars?
9/8 c125 
7Paxloria
Interesting chapter.
I especially liked that last sentence. it was a perfect quote from STAR WARS that you worked in perfectly.
~ To any commenters that don't remember, it was the bit between Darth Vader and the Emperor.
7PaxloriaInteresting chapter.
I especially liked that last sentence. it was a perfect quote from STAR WARS that you worked in perfectly.
~ To any commenters that don't remember, it was the bit between Darth Vader and the Emperor.
9/8 c125 7zakan
Soo, Diablo has got a peek to the void, and confronted the repercussions of his acts, nice character development.
7zakanSoo, Diablo has got a peek to the void, and confronted the repercussions of his acts, nice character development.
9/7 c125 7six samurai of dragon order
Oh wow, I didn't think Diablo would ever get to be the personal butler of Momonga. Not sure how to feel about this.
7six samurai of dragon orderOh wow, I didn't think Diablo would ever get to be the personal butler of Momonga. Not sure how to feel about this.
9/6 c124 1Atlas8
It's a great story. Both Tensura and Overlord aspects are well done and I have no real complaints. Just some nit pickings that aren't worth mentioning here. I enjoyed reading it and will recommend reading it. Definitely give it a try.
I hope you continue this story till its end, Author. Thank you for this amazing work.
1Atlas8It's a great story. Both Tensura and Overlord aspects are well done and I have no real complaints. Just some nit pickings that aren't worth mentioning here. I enjoyed reading it and will recommend reading it. Definitely give it a try.
I hope you continue this story till its end, Author. Thank you for this amazing work.
9/5 c124 G
Dope!
Dope!