
1/16/2024 c13 powerspro35
great story, would recommend reading. i just wish there were more of it. maybe one day the author will come back to it.
great story, would recommend reading. i just wish there were more of it. maybe one day the author will come back to it.
7/8/2022 c1
5R8handman
A good start for a story, the grammar could be tweaked a bit, though I am not one talk about that.
Creating a OC that's the main character, I really hope you flesh out your OC well, Genma is a fav of mine... I want him to help and teach the the girl to speak again. A mute girl raised by Genma should be intresting!

A good start for a story, the grammar could be tweaked a bit, though I am not one talk about that.
Creating a OC that's the main character, I really hope you flesh out your OC well, Genma is a fav of mine... I want him to help and teach the the girl to speak again. A mute girl raised by Genma should be intresting!
2/13/2022 c2 Masaya Daiji
Wait! we still have not got her name yet, a good name for the strong child.
Wait! we still have not got her name yet, a good name for the strong child.
2/13/2022 c1 Masaya Daiji
now we have two babysitters Lol I want to see her train ninja with her nin ken already.
now we have two babysitters Lol I want to see her train ninja with her nin ken already.