
3/6 c12 GirlOnFire30
Girl, this story is so amazing, let me tell you! You’re one hell of a smut writer! Hope you can come back and finish this one day!
Girl, this story is so amazing, let me tell you! You’re one hell of a smut writer! Hope you can come back and finish this one day!
2/27/2024 c12 redhotlady7552
Wow! You are a bonehead! Why is it, that you think the Civil War was only about slavery? It wasn't. It was mostly about the damned north (mainly Washington) not wanting to pay the south for goods, and services. Slavery was a very small part of that. However, the war actually broke out, because 11 southern states separated from the union. Try doing actual research. Stop listening to fucking morons, who teach false history in schools.
And Carlisle stepping in between Jasper and Bella to appease Edward...preposterous! Bella is Jasper's mate, not Edward's! Jasper was stupid to step aside! WTF is wrong with these stupid vamps!?
Wow! You are a bonehead! Why is it, that you think the Civil War was only about slavery? It wasn't. It was mostly about the damned north (mainly Washington) not wanting to pay the south for goods, and services. Slavery was a very small part of that. However, the war actually broke out, because 11 southern states separated from the union. Try doing actual research. Stop listening to fucking morons, who teach false history in schools.
And Carlisle stepping in between Jasper and Bella to appease Edward...preposterous! Bella is Jasper's mate, not Edward's! Jasper was stupid to step aside! WTF is wrong with these stupid vamps!?
2/27/2024 c8 redhotlady7552
What is with pity party Jasper? He can have Bella. Seems to me she is his mate, yet he just wants to hand her over to the mind rapist. What's up with that?
What is with pity party Jasper? He can have Bella. Seems to me she is his mate, yet he just wants to hand her over to the mind rapist. What's up with that?
2/6/2024 c1 grumpieroldman
anything worth waiting for, no matter how long, makes the waiting more enjoyable. you're a great writer
anything worth waiting for, no matter how long, makes the waiting more enjoyable. you're a great writer
10/14/2023 c12 Guest
Obsessed with this story
Obsessed with this story
8/19/2023 c12
18bkhchica
This is so interesting. I love stories that change up the original story line so much. I do hope the Cullens see that they are connected in a much deeper way and force Edward to step aside… can’t wait for there to be more

This is so interesting. I love stories that change up the original story line so much. I do hope the Cullens see that they are connected in a much deeper way and force Edward to step aside… can’t wait for there to be more
12/14/2022 c6 Iamthehungrysharkxx
“If beauty were a sin, you would not have God's forgiveness.'” Wow.
And “she’s not food” lol
Love this!
“If beauty were a sin, you would not have God's forgiveness.'” Wow.
And “she’s not food” lol
Love this!