for Tomboy and Ice Prince8/18/2023 c1 
3myevilsoul
I really hope you update further here! It is a really good start! Keep me hooked to it!
3myevilsoulI really hope you update further here! It is a really good start! Keep me hooked to it!
10/10/2022 c1 121Droplets of blue rain
Uh oh...Hilary is getting wet dreams...about whom? Of course, it is Kai! *Shrugs*
So Hilary has got two elder brothers, right? *Gulps* Then then girl, your dream of romancing with some guy is gone xD
I loved her mother though...very friendly an sweet! Aww! *_* *_*
Cannot wait for the moment when Hilary will meet her dream guy in the reality :P
Update soon! :D
-Misty _
121Droplets of blue rainUh oh...Hilary is getting wet dreams...about whom? Of course, it is Kai! *Shrugs*
So Hilary has got two elder brothers, right? *Gulps* Then then girl, your dream of romancing with some guy is gone xD
I loved her mother though...very friendly an sweet! Aww! *_* *_*
Cannot wait for the moment when Hilary will meet her dream guy in the reality :P
Update soon! :D
-Misty _
2/13/2022 c1 16kaihil fanfiction
I finally got time to read this ffn after hectic day. it's pretty nice but short and I want to read more and there has some thing I came up with, now that...this ffn contains OC, please express about their details more b/c I want to imagine atleast how they would look when I'll read their part and when the thing that when I heard Hilary's had name, Tyson's brother came in my mind out of the blue b/c his name is hiroshi too.
anyways, you did great job as if I see it is your 1st ffn b/c mine was hectic and I'm still embarrassed about it till now(blushing) whenever I read my very early ffns, anyways.
HAVE A NICE DAY :D
-Riti
16kaihil fanfictionI finally got time to read this ffn after hectic day. it's pretty nice but short and I want to read more and there has some thing I came up with, now that...this ffn contains OC, please express about their details more b/c I want to imagine atleast how they would look when I'll read their part and when the thing that when I heard Hilary's had name, Tyson's brother came in my mind out of the blue b/c his name is hiroshi too.
anyways, you did great job as if I see it is your 1st ffn b/c mine was hectic and I'm still embarrassed about it till now(blushing) whenever I read my very early ffns, anyways.
HAVE A NICE DAY :D
-Riti
2/13/2022 c1 Guest
U should continue your story i loved it lol
U should continue your story i loved it lol