for This Statement is a Fact9/12/2022 c1 
9Tri-Edge
I think that this is a very unique concept. I've never seen Izuku with a quirk like this before in any story.
That said, it's rather short and there are a one or two typos and some odd sentence structures. I'd say you should also probably stop spacing the the ellipses like you currently do (". . .") and instead write it as such: "..."
You also don't need to actually use ellipses every time to indicate a pause or silence. You can just be descriptive instead, like you already were with Inko Midoriya. It'd be a bit smoother to read that way.
In any case, nice job over all! Hopefully you continue to develop this story. :)
9Tri-EdgeI think that this is a very unique concept. I've never seen Izuku with a quirk like this before in any story.
That said, it's rather short and there are a one or two typos and some odd sentence structures. I'd say you should also probably stop spacing the the ellipses like you currently do (". . .") and instead write it as such: "..."
You also don't need to actually use ellipses every time to indicate a pause or silence. You can just be descriptive instead, like you already were with Inko Midoriya. It'd be a bit smoother to read that way.
In any case, nice job over all! Hopefully you continue to develop this story. :)
2/13/2022 c1 SOS-108
I don't know if this quirk is an OP or less OP quirk version of Star and Stripes'quirk
I don't know if this quirk is an OP or less OP quirk version of Star and Stripes'quirk