for This Statement is a Fact5/16 c1 itsmegametech
This story offers a fresh and imaginative take on Izuku’s quirk discovery, blending humor and heart in a charming way. The vivid descriptions and playful tone make the scenes come alive, especially the unexpected “Almighty Punch” moment. It’s a promising start that hooks readers with its unique twist on familiar characters. Looking forward to seeing where this creative energy leads next!
This story offers a fresh and imaginative take on Izuku’s quirk discovery, blending humor and heart in a charming way. The vivid descriptions and playful tone make the scenes come alive, especially the unexpected “Almighty Punch” moment. It’s a promising start that hooks readers with its unique twist on familiar characters. Looking forward to seeing where this creative energy leads next!
4/8 c1 rachlnoah
The narrative that you wrote was enjoyable to read, and the story was very interesting It will be loved by fans and would look fantastic in a comic I would be delighted to realize your idea.
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Rache
The narrative that you wrote was enjoyable to read, and the story was very interesting It will be loved by fans and would look fantastic in a comic I would be delighted to realize your idea.
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Email: rachelstudio156 at gmail dot com
rachelstudio on Discord
Warm regards
Rache
12/17/2024 c1 
1Stephen Amelia
I loved your story it’s captivating and feels perfect for a comic adaptation! I’m a professional artist and would love to discuss turning it into a visual format with you.
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Stephen
1Stephen AmeliaI loved your story it’s captivating and feels perfect for a comic adaptation! I’m a professional artist and would love to discuss turning it into a visual format with you.
Contact info:
Email:
Discord: stephenamelia01
Best regards,
Stephen
9/12/2022 c1 9Tri-Edge
I think that this is a very unique concept. I've never seen Izuku with a quirk like this before in any story.
That said, it's rather short and there are a one or two typos and some odd sentence structures. I'd say you should also probably stop spacing the the ellipses like you currently do (". . .") and instead write it as such: "..."
You also don't need to actually use ellipses every time to indicate a pause or silence. You can just be descriptive instead, like you already were with Inko Midoriya. It'd be a bit smoother to read that way.
In any case, nice job over all! Hopefully you continue to develop this story. :)
9Tri-EdgeI think that this is a very unique concept. I've never seen Izuku with a quirk like this before in any story.
That said, it's rather short and there are a one or two typos and some odd sentence structures. I'd say you should also probably stop spacing the the ellipses like you currently do (". . .") and instead write it as such: "..."
You also don't need to actually use ellipses every time to indicate a pause or silence. You can just be descriptive instead, like you already were with Inko Midoriya. It'd be a bit smoother to read that way.
In any case, nice job over all! Hopefully you continue to develop this story. :)
2/13/2022 c1 SOS-108
I don't know if this quirk is an OP or less OP quirk version of Star and Stripes'quirk
I don't know if this quirk is an OP or less OP quirk version of Star and Stripes'quirk